SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16)

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mdeshpande

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Congrats on the new thread . 👏 This is an amazing SS. Read all 13 in one go and am wanting more. Some one hurry up n change the date to 2nd March plzzz. Loved the way u portray ASR/Arnav and Khushi.

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.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Is it weird that When i comment from the last update .. you update after i leave a comment 😆..

Hayee She spoke while his lips were still connected to hers .. aha..
Oh, I hate aman .. You jerk .. I wanted them to snog .. ahaha .. :P ..

Love how 'reserved' and shy, they both became after that ..

He's soo confused .. Why are men soo complex.. They have no clue what they want..

Awww how sweet .. she waited for him .. (i don't believe that she even tried to look for the office car) 😆 .. & he took her home .. & she blushed .. 😳 & i loved that he teased her .. Soo adorable ..

I hope her Happy moment isn't going to be crushed by La .. "/ ..

Great update .. !

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago

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Nupur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

awesome :D now here is some twist :D

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Prasanna_dhanu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Beautiful update, thanks for the PM

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snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Great update loved how she waited for him

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deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

hi...i came across this ff today...

omg...it was amazing...

normal story but the way u r penning it down is fab...loved it to te core...

enjoyed every moment of this story...

adding DM's thought in between was superb...

can u pls pm me from next update...pls

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

so there was kinda some form of lip lock
but not what we thought of i guess
what with his damn phone ringing
really sometimes you wish you can break his phone for ringing always at the wrong time
stupid phone curse you for sure
and of course it had to aman who else can it be
well it could be his di too
she too has the habit of ruining their moments right
so he is not gonna let her go now not till they finish this whatever this is
awww khushi did ya really think he would let you go that easily hell no girl
oh yeah he is drugged but in you sweeite not any other drug could be this potent to make him loose his senses
dang it still no kiss i see but thats okay they have more chances later one hopes
really say sorry for kissing her and yet not doing it properly
wow he is still not getting the bigger picture looks like DM has her work cut out again
i know DM these two are so made for each other
and yet they dont do anything about it either gosh what to do with them
ahhh so he dropped her off but forgot his phone
ahhh la we all forgot about her right
not good not good at all
wonder what happens now
guess she shall snap out of it right of course she will which i so dont want but i guess is gonna happen anyway