A Late Spring...Removed from IF.. - Page 84

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...(hooded, gooey eyed...)
i m mesmerized ...by both, ur writing and the beauty of landour!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved loved the pictures of Landour!! It really helps get a feel for the place..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will I be able to love it more than i already do? Yes! The pictures..they are sooo soo..i dont know..just that i have been transported to Landour..bliss!

Waiting for beauty and the beast. Saturday kab aega?! 20more minutes for it to arrive. :D
IST that is. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful pictures...they are just amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just finished reading all the chapters ...
Loving the story ... the place looks absolutely beautiful ...
would really love to visit it sometime ...

The prologue has really got me thinking ...

Thanks for the PM ... would never have know about A Late Spring ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic!!!!!!!

d way u incorporate poems and songs befitting the story is awsome!!!!!!
loved this teenage romance between the protagonists!!!!!! waiting to see what unfolds, which leads to their separation...

great story!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jenny, thanks for the PM.this is an extremely interesting story...loved the hi Alayna setting...I looked up landour...it is beautiful...if you actually got to live there...I totally envy you...

You write with a lot of clarity and I loved reading the parts till now...
You know, the brooding Arnav acutely reminded me of amitabh bachchan in Mili...the story of the parents' death and the boy's age are very similar...and I totally loved it...you have written Arnav"s angst heartbreakingly well..and the beautiful setting only accentuates it...
Khushi pain on being abandoned by her mother and her bond with her father she never knew were very touching and amazingly subtly written...No over the top drama but very effective...I will look forward to the next updates

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely pictures Jenny. Truly paradise. Now more then ever I can picture A young Arnav & Khushi amongst the beautiful backdrop of Landour.
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Posted: 12 years ago
phew Jenny.
Finally I got time to read this from start to chapter 4. 😊
And, my God.. you took me to Landour completely. I was in awe at the way you have described that place. Made me want to visit it. 😳 You are tremendous when it comes to place description..👏
I have noticed another thing in your stories.. You always chose your own setting in Arnav-Khushi story & not the usual RM setting. I like that whole different feel of your stories.
Character that I like the most in this story in none other than Arnav Foster. I love him. 😳 😳
the cheeky way he speaks.. and that one dialogue.. "Stop behaving like a Fu***** Romeo Foster" was the best.. 😉 😆😆😆
Khushi is as usual.. my favorite & loving the whole new different way you have portrayed her. Like from usual Anarkalis, I can actuall imagine her in all those cute dresses you have mentioned. 😃
Again one other aspects of your stories that Like, You start from their childhood. Imprenetrable heart started from childhood & this one starts from their Teenage life. 😊
Also, I am loving the Christian culture of this story. I am eager to know more. Its quite a nice welcome feel that you changed their lastnames & I am in for it.
Khushi's mother did 2nd Marriage.. hmmm I quite expected it turn out something of the same line when I read 2st chapter. & Arnav's parents were killed. I would wait for you to unfold it before I come to any conclusion. But their past again connected them. I loved that emotional part.😊
At the end, Pehla Nasha.. 😳 😳 You had me dreaming. 😳 I loved it.
Khushi's bike is another thing which is my fav in this story. 😉😆
and lastly, You have stopped at very crucial point.. will he come or story will take leap & come to current time.. I am curious.. saturday come fast.. 😃
edited..
one more lastly, I loved the pictures. truly heavenly feel. 😊
Edited by SuperstarSanaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely pictures.. Ye hasin wadi yo me Arshi Mujhe nazar aa rahe hai...

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