phew Jenny.
Finally I got time to read this from start to chapter 4. 😊
And, my God.. you took me to Landour completely. I was in awe at the way you have described that place. Made me want to visit it. 😳 You are tremendous when it comes to place description..👏
I have noticed another thing in your stories.. You always chose your own setting in Arnav-Khushi story & not the usual RM setting. I like that whole different feel of your stories.
Character that I like the most in this story in none other than Arnav Foster. I love him. 😳 😳
the cheeky way he speaks.. and that one dialogue.. "Stop behaving like a Fu***** Romeo Foster" was the best.. 😉 😆😆😆
Khushi is as usual.. my favorite & loving the whole new different way you have portrayed her. Like from usual Anarkalis, I can actuall imagine her in all those cute dresses you have mentioned. 😃
Again one other aspects of your stories that Like, You start from their childhood. Imprenetrable heart started from childhood & this one starts from their Teenage life. 😊
Also, I am loving the Christian culture of this story. I am eager to know more. Its quite a nice welcome feel that you changed their lastnames & I am in for it.
Khushi's mother did 2nd Marriage.. hmmm I quite expected it turn out something of the same line when I read 2st chapter. & Arnav's parents were killed. I would wait for you to unfold it before I come to any conclusion. But their past again connected them. I loved that emotional part.😊
At the end, Pehla Nasha.. 😳 😳 You had me dreaming. 😳 I loved it.
Khushi's bike is another thing which is my fav in this story. 😉😆
and lastly, You have stopped at very crucial point.. will he come or story will take leap & come to current time.. I am curious.. saturday come fast.. 😃
edited..
one more lastly, I loved the pictures. truly heavenly feel. 😊
Edited by SuperstarSanaya - 12 years ago