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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#531

your writing so soulful ...i am trying not to cry

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Read all the three chapters in one go.
Thanks for the pm.
The story is very different , right from the setup to the past of the characters. I haven't come across any story where Arnav and Khushi are Anglo - Indians. Both of them have terrible past which I think will help them to bond in a very strong manner. I liked your tribute to one of the very well shot scenes in the actual serial.
Khushi has a son and Arnav has a fiance after 6 years. Waiting for the 6 year mystery to unfold. Please take your time and devote enough chapters as you deem fit to build the background. There is no hurry. I really liked teenage Arnav - Khushi bonding.

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

the chapter was just awesome. it really touched my heart with both khushi and arnav finally letting the tears that were held for such a long time fall! crying doesnt make anything better but does help with someone feeling more lighter and better, sometimes with the tears some of the misery one is feeling slips away!

n loved the fact that used one of the best scene from the show!

maybe this is the start of a friendship which will eventually lead to something more special:)

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

awesome part...

arnav khushi avoided each other...

poor khushi...

arnav also felt sad fr khushi...

khushi take care of arnav lovely...

update soon...

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

reswa
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i absolutely loved the update
KHUSHI was avoiding ARNAV
her mother married some1 else when she was only three years old
now we know why she leaves with her granny
she shares a beautiful relation with her
she was there with ARNAV when his blood sugar went low..
loved the scene
thanx for the pm
will be waiting for the next part

Edited by tushi0310 - 12 years ago

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Abyan

@Abyan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Another wonderful part and very emotional..loved the way the story finally coming together...loved how khushi shares a beautifully relationship with her deceased father...

I felt her pain... especially her lack of joy at the cell phone and her mother's phone call... i wonder what kinda of mother is she? leaving her child to rise her mother!!!!

loved the way arnav after seeing khushi in that state and breaking down was so beautifully written... loved the way khushi helped arnav's fainting "diabetes" and this particular is one of my favorite scene IPKKND and u did it a great job and so well done Jenny...plz continue soon and thx for the pm

Edited by Abyan - 12 years ago

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rabid52

@rabid52

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

Really loved the chapter. Liked the way you weaved in the Arnav fainting scene from the show. I loved that scene too, it was too cute. The way Arnav goes 'stop it' in his usual gruff self.

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Jenny the start of the chapter the picture of the school entrance was pure nostalgia for me...its uncanny how all hill country schools built in that era have the same look...

the story i think u eased this chapter ...really well..it flowed...with a bit of her a bit of him...a bit of closure...and now the start of a friendship...

and if i may say so i liked your stupor scene much more that the show's

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Interesting how Arnav could relate his loss to Khushi's grief.
So he was sketching her eyes.
His hypoglycemia does cOme handy at times:) especially when we need to break the ice.
Hoping they will become friends now... Atleast start talking.

And fill up the emptiness in eachothers lives.
Awesome writing and wonderful progress in the story.