Dil Dosti Dance U, Me, Aur Hum - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww...happy happy chapter =)
really liked it, though with the gun thing, i got scared...but well, all's well that end well =)

uodate the next chp soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww awesome update, this shivam kidnap Aashi parents and force her to do all this wow what a creep plz continue soon. Love the girls dresses
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dil Dosti Dance U Me Aur Hum Chapter 12:

After the party was over, all the couples went on a walk in Simmi's garden to spend time with each other.
R- Taani, are you okay?
T- Im fine Rey, when you are near me, how can I be in trouble?
Rey stopped and gathered Taani in a big hug.
R- When Ashi took that gun out, I was really scared. If anything had happened to you I wouldn't be able to live anymore.
Taani- Shh, Rey don't say things like that. I love you, and I promise to always be with you.
Rey nodded and kissed Taani on her forehead. They continued to walk and Taani leaned her head on Rey's shoulder.
T- Rey, Im happy that after all these problems, we are still together and everything is back to normal. I'm glad our relationship is strong.
R- And I want to make it stronger.
He kneeled down on one knee and brought out a ring.
R- Taani, you turned my life from hell to heaven. I had forgotten how to laugh and love life, but you taught me again. You taught me to never give up on love. I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Will you marry me Taani?
Taani was crying with happiness and nodded her head. Rey put the ring on and Taani fell on top of him giving him a hug. Taani rested her head on Rey's chest and sighed happily.
R- By the way, our first child is going to be a daughter.
T- WHAT?
Swaron...
Sh- Thank you Swayam.
Sw- Why?
Sh- For loving me so much. I was really scared when the gun was pointed at me but I knew that f died I would be dying with all the love anyone could ever had.
Before Sharon could continue, Swayam crushed her lips with his. He pulled Sharon close.
Sw- Sharon don't say things like that, ever!
Swayam kneeled down,
Sh- Swayam what are you doing?
Sw- Sharon Raiprakash, I have, do and always love you till my last breath. Sharon, you mean the world to me. Another name for life is Sharon. Will you marry me?
Sh- YES YES YES!!!! Swayam I love you, and she kissed Swayam with all the love and care she had.
They turned towards the moon and Swayam put his arms around Sharon.
Sw- I have the perfect destination for our Honey Moon!
Sh- Malaysia?
Sw- No, let's go to Singapore.
Sh- No I want to go to Malaysia, And only Malaysia.
Sw- Singapore
Sh- Swayam,
Swayam laughed, Sw- Okay, my sweetheart, we will go to Malaysia as long as we are together, I'll go anywhere.
Sharon smiled and put her head on Swayam's shoulder.

Okay, guys this was the last part to this ff. it was a long journey. I'm so happy that all of liked it. I will do a second ff, and it will start from where I stopped this ff. I hope you like and enjoy that one as much as this one. Please remember no rude comments. I will start the new ff on Monday. Thanks :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read the parts of ur story ... Wow it was amazing ... Very different and Shocking but all good things have to.come to end ... Thats sad ... TaaRey and SwaRon proposal nice ... Rey's dialogue in the end was hilarious and SwaRon fighting abt honeymoon wow ( tell them to come to Singapore and bring TaaRey along too. ) 😛 😉 I really enjoyed ur story ... It was awesome !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaddsraizada

I just read the parts of ur story ... Wow it was amazing ... Very different and Shocking but all good things have to.come to end ... Thats sad ... TaaRey and SwaRon proposal nice ... Rey's dialogue in the end was hilarious and SwaRon fighting abt honeymoon wow ( tell them to come to Singapore and bring TaaRey along too. ) 😛 😉 I really enjoyed ur story ... It was awesome !!!


Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. You are simply too sweet. I will start another ff that connects to this one. Please read it as well. And thank you again for appreciating it so much. It truly means a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update...and Rey LOL =D

loved the story... =)
will be waitng for ur next FF...dont forget to PM 😉
Edited by Mohit_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part, the both proposed, omg, soo cute!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it dear.
proposal ... so now swaron and taarey's marriage.
do cotn. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow lovely end
start new ff soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved loved loved it! Perfect ending!! But mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki Rey ko kaise pata chala that their first child is going to be a girl?! Hehe!! I'm glad that u're gonna start ur new work!! I am so loving ur work!! please please please pm me whne u start the new FF!! please! I cannot miss anything from u!! N yeah.. Do pm me the link or tell me the name you gave to ur FF in the pm! Okay? N yeah.. Meri exams ka problem continued rahega.. So I'm not sure whether i'll be able to read iot now.. But 20th march.. Pakka i will read.. So keep pming me please!! <3<3

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