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Firstly, I am very sorry for such a long delay in commenting. I didn't intend to, but it happened. Sorry.
Moving on to the update, it left with me with a sense of melancholy. And something written very beautifully can do that. So, kudos to you for giving us yet another wonderful chapter!
Arnav really owns Khushi, it seems. He grabs her hand whenever and wherever he feels like it and the pretty girl has no option but to be dragged about. Amd what happens next? He gifts her a beautiful ring with utmost sincerity but alas! He has no idea what it does to her, does he? What he brought as something that reminded him of her, was actually a mockery of their relationship. And I felt really bad for him, because whatever happens, he never promised her anything other than what he's giving her then. But yes, he fails to realise what Khushi must be feeling like, he fails to put himself in her shoes and I think that it is one thing that has to happen if one is to believe that he truly loves her. Just looking at things from her perspective, that is all she wants. He couldnt contain his fury at what she referred to herself as, I wish he could do a little bit more.
Coming to Khushi, as you mentioned in a previous chapter that she has decidedly committed herself to him, commitment or no commitment. She was ready to tell her father that she can't marry because her heart already beats for someone else. And I think, had he not brought up the ring, she wouldnt have said anything. But all that the ring symbolised to her was enough to break her dam and it did. And hearing that it's all over from him was the last straw and she is totally justified in what she did according to me.
They love each other like hell! He couldnt help but come to check up on her wound, whatever happens. And she didn't turn away, either. I just wish Arnav's works on his issues real fast. We wouldnt want him to lose out on her, now would we?
I am dying to read the next chapter, and I hope to see it up soon. Once again, I absolutely LOVED it. You're a magician Farah! :)
EDITED:
Firstly, I am very sorry for such a long delay in commenting. I didn't intend to, but it happened. Sorry.
Moving on to the update, it left with me with a sense of melancholy. And something written very beautifully can do that. So, kudos to you for giving us yet another wonderful chapter!
Arnav really owns Khushi, it seems. He grabs her hand whenever and wherever he feels like it and the pretty girl has no option but to be dragged about. Amd what happens next? He gifts her a beautiful ring with utmost sincerity but alas! He has no idea what it does to her, does he? What he brought as something that reminded him of her, was actually a mockery of their relationship. And I felt really bad for him, because whatever happens, he never promised her anything other than what he's giving her then. But yes, he fails to realise what Khushi must be feeling like, he fails to put himself in her shoes and I think that it is one thing that has to happen if one is to believe that he truly loves her. Just looking at things from her perspective, that is all she wants. He couldnt contain his fury at what she referred to herself as, I wish he could do a little bit more.
Coming to Khushi, as you mentioned in a previous chapter that she has decidedly committed herself to him, commitment or no commitment. She was ready to tell her father that she can't marry because her heart already beats for someone else. And I think, had he not brought up the ring, she wouldnt have said anything. But all that the ring symbolised to her was enough to break her dam and it did. And hearing that it's all over from him was the last straw and she is totally justified in what she did according to me.
They love each other like hell! He couldnt help but come to check up on her wound, whatever happens. And she didn't turn away, either. I just wish Arnav's works on his issues real fast. We wouldnt want him to lose out on her, now would we?
I am dying to read the next chapter, and I hope to see it up soon. Once again, I absolutely LOVED it. You're a magician Farah! :)
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
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