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Izadora

@izzy0502

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

awesome update..

loved the fierce khushi

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Loved it Zeh!

Simply loved it!

Oh Loved a jealous Arnav seeing the other men throw admiring glances towards Khushi, loved the way he almost rushed to her side to take her out of Mr. Rao's arms for the dance and mostly loved the way u have ended the update with her accusations, his answers and with that scene which had been the turning point in the show too.

But Thank u for that dialogue..." She is priceless!"

Hope to get more so in ur next update, got to run now...

Wonderful update again.

Bye,

Take care

Swati.

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

fantastic
awesome update
so, Arnav and Khushi has some feeling for each other deep down in some tiny corner of their heart

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penguin143

@penguin143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Both are attracted 2 each other..

And Arnav was jealous..😆

Loved Khushi's outburst..

But why did he say dat he don't win always..?

Intense chapter..

Continue soon..😊

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Just found this story and read all parts together. Lovely storyline though I am intrigued about how easily he dumped Lavanya. I am hoping at least some conversation transpired between them at least.

As for the last update... did Khushi faint after she heard Arnav saying he doesnt win all the time 😉😆.. okay I am just being cheeky. 😛

You brought forth the awkwardness between them quite well. And the last conversation...much needed...not sure if it will make things better between them. But atleast it's a start.

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Hey, I don't really want to bombard you with a lot of questions, but I recently started reading your fanfics, and I am in love with them. You have a knack for capturing our attention and leaving us breathless with every update! However I am a little confused with the stories, and PMs, as you said you will not be PMing anyone with the updates?? Or are you sending emails for the updates? I apologize if that has been asked a lot of times already.

Coming to this story, I just finished reading all 12 chapters! I had to hold my breath for some updates, and finally heave a sigh with the others! There were times when I felt like I could knock Arnav out with a punch, especially with the misunderstanding with Khushi and the CCTV footage. But once the truth was revealed, I wanted to run to Arnav and give him a big 'jaadu ki jhappi', it would have helped! :/ It was such a sad sight to see Khushi scratching and trying to remove her skin, she was so frustrated and helpless with Arnav's 'wh**e' comment, that a usually strong girl was forced to think about killing herself. But then the last comment on how Arnav does not always win, melted my heart. I think that hit home, and reminded him of his tattered past. And yes, she is indeed priceless...

I hope Khushi realizes that they both are forced in this marriage. She can either try to mend this relationship, or let it go to waste. And Arnav needs to keep his emotions in check. He either hates her, for whatever reason, or he doesn't. He goes back and forth with his emotions, and gets more frustrated with himself, hence takes it out on the poor girl. I wonder if Sim gets caught soon! I hope she does. Lavanya has been quiet this entire ordeal, wonder if she is going to make an appearance in this already rocky marriage!

Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

nice part

hope khushi is fine

😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

awesome update..very intense...loved it..very well written..keep up the good work going...please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

cant wait to read more. MIND BLOWING AWESOME UPDATE

Muaaahhh👏

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#450

Oh!!
Poor, poor Khushi!!
And even more poorer Arnav!! :(
Would I be a sadistic bitch if I wanted to see Arnav suffering and blaming himself by seeing Khushi unconscious??!!

*shrugs*

Thanks for the PM.. :)