Ariya SS-If Only updted pg 114 9/11/13 - Page 57

Originally posted by: srividhya68

hope Riya realizes the real love they both share very soon!

Originally posted by: Leki

Awesome update... 1st part ws emotional... Riya's thoughts and Abi Riya convo ws well written... Abhi dnt deserve her!!!! well second part ws intense... Loved it ... continue soon

Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

WOAH!!! I am speechless!!! I can't understand what to say.. It was such a beautiful part!!!

Ok... Lets start from the beginning.. Hmmm Riya is confused... But her cursing is not relevant... Though i know WHY she curses herself for not realizing Arjun's Love earlier, She is also not at fault..

She is trying to convince herself that she isn't in Love with Arjun.. Babe. that should be your evidence!!

Argh!! ABHI!! How can you claim to LOVE her and KNOW her... and still doubt her..!!

Riya did right letting him go..!! A man who can't trust you... Doesn't deserve you!

Bt still... She must be so sad!

Aw. Arjun is so caring...!! he gave her time.. didn't come near her... and yet kept her in his sight!! 😊

WOW!! Ariya part was beautifully written!! It was so intense!!

I hope she doesn't regret it!! It will KILL Arjun if she does!!

BEAUTIFUL!!👏

Originally posted by: Seenavas

at last i got my much awaited update

first part was so emotional

but the next one

omg i need a cold shower😉

eagerly waiting for the next one

Originally posted by: vanya9

It's amazing ..
Finally Riya iZ trying to dig her past consequences to improve her relation wid arjun..
Past was written beautifully ...
Loved it..
Just continue soon

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Wow double update. 😛
The first part was very emotional. I believe that trust is really important in relationship. Without trust no relationship can survive. And Abhi how can he did this to her. He is not only her lover but also his childhood best friend. He knows her from childhood. Atleast he could have talk to riya listen to her.His love is really week.
Poor Riya. I m feeling really bad for her.
The last part was just awsome. I love it. It was both passionate and emotional.
Pls update soon. I want to know Riya's reaction. Just hope she didn't regret it or blame Arjun.
Thnks 4 the pm.

Originally posted by: -BlazingWater-

Wow!!

This was amazing <3

Riya's turmoil was beautifully portrayed...her thoughts, her pain almost broke my heart.

Glad that she broke up with Abhi.. i mean if the guy with whom she has been with for so long does'nt trust does'nt enough, then he surely doesn't deserve her.

And then there is Arjun, i am glad that he is here for her...and the part was HOTT☺️

I just hope Riya doesn't regret this moment and blame Arjun for it later.

Awesome update, contd soon :D

Originally posted by: _TaNi_

Nice chapter

i liked chapter 1 a lot

it was nice

quite emotional

n i m happy with ria's decision wen abhi asked her to come along

i m glad she didnt went with him ...not bec she left him but because he was not trusting her

now coming to second one

see i have certain doubts

its basically thoda sa criticism as well

so if u wud like to discuss den tell me

i will PM u n we can discuss

bec i dun want to discuss it here

all in all nice chapter 😊

continue soon

Originally posted by: salmankideewani

This was such a beautiful update!
I love the way you go back and forth in past and present
You write soo beautifully.
The beach part was really hot...hope Riya won't regret it or blame Arjun for it
Continue soon! :)

Originally posted by: ehmmbh_luvr

hey i recently caught up with this work of yours n let me tell u that i loved every bit of it😊

Its a very different concept...n really well thought of n yeah exceptionaly well written 😊

Coming to the latest chapter it was high on emotions n coming back n fro from past to present madeit even more interesting!

There was no point stretching a relationship Which has no future n lacks trust...thus what riya did however painful it may be for her but was the right Thing to do!

I loved the beach scene...it was well written n really hot with the correct amount of passion n emotions...!

I just hopeshe doesnt blame him for having taken her advantage during her breakdown n a weak moment!!

Continue soon...will be looking forward to read more of it😊