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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaddsraizada

What an update ... It was really hot ... Love the way u portray the story ... I really enjoy ur story a lot ...thanks a lot for the.pm and plsss update soon ... The romance in ur story is awesome


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Posted: 12 years ago
Haye ... Sach mein TaaRey romance was just out of this world yaar... Precap or bhi dose milega TaaRey romance ka ... Drooling -2 update soon yaar... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
it ws super awsm.taarey f8,rey's angr,d way tani trid to manofy hm & rey tkng adv of d situation wit ful of taarey rmanc in str rm ws grt.swa hrd kisng sund,bt rey ws 2 smart in distrctng hm.excitd fr d chlng of precap.update fst dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blwoing update ☺️☺️☺️
heheh i love the cute f8 n then the manofy snce was too hot..!
keep writing n update sooon..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was toohot👏 dear writer iam lso a newbie plz put me in ur pm list 😛 😉 very good bye


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Posted: 12 years ago
hey 3 pages cmnt go gaya so where is our update??????
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Posted: 12 years ago
tht wz a hot update lovd d lil drama tho
osm update👏👍🏼
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys...
Thanks 4 d comments...
Iam glad dat u all loved a lil bit of drama...
Now,the next update s here,
Enjoy reading...!!



Taarey ff:After goa-part 10 FARM HOUSE FUN


Charity event went well in st.louis,after a week of breaking their backs...It was fabulous...
Night at Taayam's house...
Everyone s damn tired...

Neha:y calling us sharon,tired we are!
Sharon:guys taani n rey ko bhi to aane do...
Nil:woh love birds gaye honge kahi bhi,aaj toh fyt tha na,so it will take sme more tym 4 dem to cum..
Swayam:woh kyun?
Sharon gives a glare at nil..
Sharon:leave it swayam...
dey r on d way..

Rey n taani enters...Hand in hand..

Vicky:lo aagya..
inhe dekhar kon keh saktha hai ki inki beech kitana bada fyt hua tha..
Nil:ha dude..
Rey:kaunsa jagda...
Sharon:kaunsa ?
Rey:(winks)
Taani goes n sits vd swayam n keeps her head on his sholder resting...
Swayam:tired ho taani,jaake rest karo...

Sharon:wait wait,noone goes nowhere , until i finish telling smthng...
Guys kal humloge mere farmhouse pe jaarahe hai,do din keliye...
Bahot hogaya tha kaam n practise n fyts(luking at rey n taani)
Everyone:yay...

Morning...
Everyone gets ready...
Boys r going in rey's car n gals in sharon...
They reach farmhouse...

Everyone gets in...
Sharon:taani aur mein ek room mein ,aur aashi ,neha ek room mein aur simmi n rimmi another...
boys tum log upstairs ke rooms use karo...
Rey:(luks at taani)
Taani:(smiles)
Sharon:tum log fresh hokar pool side pe aaajana..
Rey(msges taani)_cme meet me now in d kitchen..
Taani:nahi,sharon hai..
Sharon sees taani texting..
Sharon:tum jao..
Taani:(smiles..)

Rey:swayam mein abhi aaya..
Swayam:kahan jaa rahe ho?
Rey:gadi mein meri phne ke charger rah gaye..
Vicky,nil,bharat,amar: (hands up)
Swayam:kya kar rahe ho?
Rey:(gves a stare)
Swayam:tu jana..

Rey sees taani in d kitchen waiting for him..
Rey goes behind n hugs her behind n keeping his hands around her waist rests his on her sholder...
Taani:kahan reh gaye aap...?
Rey:wo sorry..
Taani:kyun bhulaya...
Rey:woh aise hi..
Taani:mujhe laga kum batana hoga...
Taani:mein dress change bhi nahi kiya...
Rey:to ab kar denge..(naughtly smiles)
Taani:rey..
Rey:kya rey..
Taani:chodo, mujhe jaana..
Rey:,suno,aaj raat mein tumhare room mein aaonga,tum room bandh mat karna..
Taani:apka to tabyat to teek haina..
Rey:kya hua?
Taani:sharon hai,bhai hai, sab dekenge...
Rey:kuch nahi hoga..
Taani:sharon meri room mein hogi..
Rey:mein tumhe leke kahi aur chalenge..
par mein aajaonga..
Taani:main nahi aaonga...
Rey:accha nahi aaoge..(bents to kiss her)

Suddenly they hears a throat clearing...
Vicky,amar,nil,bharat:hum log paani lene aaya the..
Rey:to leke chalona..
Taani runs away..
Vicky:tumhe tumhara charger milgaya na...ab chalo..
Swayam comes..
Swayam:rey chalo na,sab log yahan pe kya kar rahe...
Vicky:hum paani lene aaya tha...
aur rey apna charger..kyun rey..?(winks)
Swayam:to mil gaya na,to chalo..?
Rey:(grins at vicky) ha

Everyone in d pool..
Taani siting in a chair..
Rey:tum kyun yahan baite ho..,chalo na pool mein..
Taani:mujhe swimming nahi aati...
Rey:teek hai,(rey sits in other chair)
Taani:aap kya kar rahe ho? jaona pool mein..
Rey:tum yahan pe akele baite hoon , to mein kaise jaa saktha hoon..
Taani:Woh koi baat nahin..
Sharon:rey ,taani aaona..
Rey:isse swimming nahi aathi..
Sharon:to usse udake lao,aur tum usse pakadkar rahna...
Swayam:sharon,yeh kya bol rahe ho..?
Sharon:tum mujhpe dyan do,wahan nahin...

Rey picKs up taani:
Everyone stares at them...
Boys showing their hands up)
Taani:chodiye mujhe...yeh kar rahe ho rey,mujhe swimming nahin aati,
Rey:main hoon na,n kisses on her cheeks..
Swayam falls in pool seeing dis..
Taani:bhai...

Rey:usse sharon dekloongi
Rey enters d pool...
Taani puts her hand around rey' s nack n stand..Rey holds taani by her waist n pulls more closer..
seeing taani wet..
rey:kuch yaad aa raha hai?
Taani:(blushes)kya?
Rey:yaad nahi?
yaad dhiladoon?
Taani:rey (kisses on his cheeks)

swayam had actually got out of d pool ...seeing dis he falls into d pool again..

seeing dis everyone bursts into laughter...
They all play in dr for a while..


At night..
Everyone in D hall...
Sharon chalo guys we all vl play truth n dare...
Bottle spins..
Its taani...
Sharon:bolo taani ,is it truth or dare...
Taani:(hai krishnaaji ,ab kya bolo mein,kuch ulta poocha toh,bhai ke same kya bholoongi mein)
Sharon:bholo
Taani:(clossing her eyes) truth..
Sharon:first kiss?
Swayam:sharon tum yeh kya rahe ho?
Sharon:chup...
Rey:(winks at taani)
Taani:mujhe nahin khelna...
Rey:kya hua taani?dar gaye..
Sharon:bholo
Rey:bhol do...
Taani:(closes her eyes)on dis valentines day vd rey...
swayam closes his eyes...
Vicky,nil:wohoo
Swayam:kya wohooo?
Neha,smimi:aww so cute...
Sharon:(winks at rey)
Rey:(smiles)
Sharon spins d bottle again...
Its swayam:
Rey:bholo swayam truth or dare...
Swayam:Dare..
Rey:propse sharon..
Swayam:rey,mujhe marwaayaga tu?
Rey:its jus a dare?
Swayam proposes sharonn..
Bottle spins again...
its taani again...
Taani:mein jaa rahi hoon..n tries gets up...
Rey:wait taani..
Rey:truth or dare..
Taani:dare..
Rey:gets up..
n goes near taani n whispers in taani's ears...smethng..(hearing it taani gets shocked)
Taani:nahin ,ap paagal hogaya kya..?
Rey:its a dare taani..
Sharon:kya dare hai taani?
Taani:kuch nahi...
Tanai:mein jaa rahi hoon..

Taani goes..
Swayam:aisa kya kaha tune woh chale gaye?
Rey:kuch nahi swayam...

Everyone leaves to sleep...
Lights off...
Rey comes down without making any noise...

It dark so he cant see anythng...
He suddenly collides with smethng..
he thinks it taani n hugs..
Rey:tum kab itni lambi hogayi..
It was swayam...
Suddenly lights cme..
Rey sees swayam..
Rey:tu.
Swayam:tu
Swayam:tum yahan kya karne aye ho?
basket ball khelne aaye ho raat mein..
Rey:tu kaunsa cricket khelne aaya hai..


Both burst into laugh n goes to d room..
Rey waits for swayam to sleep n goes down..
Rey opens d door..
Goes near taani..
Rey:taani chalo..
Taani:app jao yahan se...
Rey:nahi..
Taani:bhai aagya to..
Rey:woh so rah hain..
Tum bhool gayi meri dare..
Taani:kaunsi dare..
Rey:taani ki bacchi,chalo..



Taani n rey leaves d room..
Taani:yeh app kahan le jaa rahe ho mujhe..?
Rey:chup,awwaz mat karo.

Rey takes taani to d outhouse..
Taani:yeh to outhouse haina...
Rey:tumhare dare keliye..
Taani:mujhse nahi hoga..
Rey gves a bag..
Rey:chalo change karke aana
n kisses on her forehead...

Precap:
(its a surprise guys)😉
cant tell u..
wait for this space for my next update..
1 clue:it will b d most hottest of all d updates i hve gven...😳
aage dekho hote hai kya...😳😉


I know guys i hvent written d suprise today..n its short , am sorry for that,i hve lil work dats y n surprise s long...
i will try to write it today..if u guys want it..
Please tell me if u guys want d next update today itself...
Please gve d comments atleat 3 pages...
I apologize for d mistakes n short update...
But next update will be made up for it...

part 11-page 31

Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwsome update just loved it pls update the part soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just loveddd it
awesome yaar nd thank you so much for the pm😊

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