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Posted: 12 years ago
didnt lyk ih i lovd it. fab update👏👍🏼
d update wz damn adorabl
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wat a cute and caring couple u hav shown taarey. I love it. Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys...
Thanks so much 4 d comments...
i knw it was hilarious update...
But 2day iam going to add lil drama,
Please do gve comments on how u guys liked it...
Enjoy Reading...!!!


Taarey ff:After goa - Part -9(Cute Fight)


Morning at St:louis...
Everyone busy in d preparations...
Taani was getting so tensed as d sound system was not set...
All d d3 gang were busy in rehersals...

Taani goes to rehersals...
Taani:rey 1 minute bahar aana..
D3 gang:lo aagaya Rey ki apni g.s..
Rey:hahaha..
Rey:kya hua?
Taani:rey aap rehersals ke baad woh sound system set karana mat bhoolna...
Rey:k


Rey:guys mujhe thoda sa kaam..
mein bad mein aajaonga..
Viki:fire exit mein?😉
Swayam:kya hai fire exit mein?
Nil:garden haina na rey??
Swayam:fire exit mein garden?
Rey:kuch nahi swayam,yeh log bhi na...
Rey:swayam,mein sound system set karne jaa rahi hoon?
VIcki:teek se check karna ha..😉

Rey leaves to auditorium..
Taani was bz in d preparation...
He stud dr watching her..
her hairlocks flowing in d air...

Taani saw rey..
Taani:aap aagaye..chaliye..
Rey:itni jaldi?(naughtly)😉
Taani:kya jaldi...
Rey leans to kisss her..
Taani:aapko mazak soch raha hai ab...😲
Rey:tumhe mera kiss mazak lagtha hai..?
Tanai:woh sab chodiye aur mera saat sound room mein chaliye..
Rey:kaafi quiet jagah,irada kya hai princess?😉😳
Taani:rey...
Rey:hmm..k

Taani n rey in sound room...
Taan was telling rey what 2 do,,,
Rey was standing in her back holding her waist n resting his head on her sholder...
After telling Rey al d instructions taani asks whther rey heard everythng...
Rey:haan sab samaj gaya..
Rey pushes her close to d wall...
Tani:chodiye,mujhe kaam hai..aur koi aajayage...
Rey kissing her cheeks..
Rey:aanae do..😳
Taani:koi dekh lega.😳.
Rey:dekhne do..
Taani closes her eyes...
Rey's lips crushed her.😳.
Everytime rey kissed,it was like deir first kiss.
There was a rush thru both of them..
Taani pushes rey with her arms..
Taani:bye rey,sorry mujhe jaana hai..(n leaves)
Rey gets frustrated being lone in d room , leaves to rehersals without seting up d sound system..


Evening before d Charity event starts..
..
Prograam cordinators meet taani tells dat sound system has not set up..
Taani gets anxious n calls up rey...
Taani:kahaan ho aap? jahan kahi bhi ho,mujhe aake milo ab,nahi aap batye mujhe ,
kahan hai,mein aajoga..
Rey:kya baat hai..
Taani:(in a stern voice)
kahan ho?
Rey:rehersal hall mein hooon..
(n before rey culd say anythng, taani cuts d call)

Tanni n aashi comes 2 hall..
Taani s very angry n irritated n didnt notice anyone in d hall.
Rey sees her coming..
N smiles..
Rey:kya hua, itna paraeshan kyu hai?
Taani:pareshaan?
mein kahan paraeshaan hoon rey?
sab kaam chodkar bas ek kam diya tha ,woh bhi ek chota sa kaam..
bol dete nahi kar sakte,toh mein kisi aur se karwa lete..
Rey:baat kya hai..?

Everyone sees d tense situation n stares at them...
Swayam:baat kya hai?

Taani:baat kya hai rey,aapko yaad bhi nahi?
Rey:nahi..
Taani:meine aapko sound system set karne keliye kaha tha ki nahi?
Rey:oh shit! sorry taani,sorry taani..mein abhi kar doonga..
chalo..
Taani:(raises her palm n show stop sign)
uski koi zaroorat nahin hai...mein kisi aur se karwaalaiya..
Taani:(turns to go)
Rey:(catches her hand)
Taani:chodiye mera haath..
Rey:i am sorry..
Taani:aap ab sorry bol rahe hai..
aap ags hoke , itna iresponsible kaise ho saktha hai..?

Rey:ab hoagaya na sab?ab kya problem hai..
Taani:kya problem hai..?
Rey:taani ab tum limits cross kar rahe ho?

Everyone tries to calm dem both...
Sharon:rey , taani cool down guys...ab sab teek hai..
Taani:sharon ap bhi inka side,le ahe hain..
agar bhai aisa kuch kartha,to ap to bhai ko chodenge nahi ?
Sharon:(keeps her face down)
Swayam:taani calm down..
Rey:nahi swayam bholne do usse..
Taani:kya bholna hai,ab mujhe rey..
ap toh hai nahi ags ka responsibility lene,bhai aur sharon bhi nahi...sab bz hai..
to teekl hai,meina sab samhal liya..
bas ek chota sa kaam diya tha..
Rey:hum sab yahan,aise nahi baite hai..
hum rehersals kar rahe taani..
Taani:mera yeh matlab nahi tha rey..
Rey:kya matlab tha taani..
Taani:aap baat ko ghuma rahe rey..
Rey:to mein kya samju?
Taani:ap jo bhi sochna hai soch lijeeye..
Rey:toh tumhare kehne ka matlab mein ags ka responsibility nahin le saktha haan..?
tumshre pehle mein gs tha iss colege ka..
Taani:mera woh matlab nahin hain.

Rey walk out angrily..
Taani:rey suno..
Swayam:usse itna sunaane ki koi zarrot nahin thi...
Sharon:i agree vd swayam,woh to already pareshaan hai,..
Neha:feeling bad for rey..
Vicky:ha taani tumhe usse itna kuch bataana nahi chahiye tha..
Taani was already feelig bad, she knew she crossed d limits,she was feeling bad..
Taani walk out of rehersals..
Calls rey,he ws nt taking d call..
she msged him..iam sorry..
He didnt reply..

Rey was in d store room...
Taani goes 2 d fire exit n finds dr s no rey...
Taani:kaho ho aap..?
Taani asks a guy paasing thru d corridor whther he had sen rey...d guy told dat he saw rey going 2 d store room...


Taani opens d storerroom,locks it..
Taani:kahon aap?
Rey:ab kuch baacki hai mujhe sunana...
Taani sees rey sitting in a corner..
Taani goes n sits near him..
Rey starts to get up..
Taani stops him..
Rey tuns his head opposite to taani..
Taani:naaraz ho mujhse...
Rey keeps quiet..
Taani:i am sorry rey,mujhe aap se iss tarah baat nahi karna chahiye tha...
Rey still keeps quiet...
Taani:mein kya karti,mein bahut pareshan tha,agar tym pe sab nahin ho jaa tho vp aur avp se mein kya kehthi,meri boyfrnd bhool gaya kyun ki woh bz the apni galfrnd ke saath mastikarne mein..?
Rey:boyfrnd?mein to tumhari ags hoona...isliye tum sab ke samne shout kar rahi thi..
Taani:aisa mat bholo rey...mein maanthi hoon mujhe iss tarah se baat nahin karne chhiye thi..
Rey:oho...(n luks away.)
Taani turns his chin towards her face...
Taani:i am sorry..
Rey:tum jaaon yahan se...
Taani;nahin jaonga..kya karoge?
Rey:mein jaata hoon...
(n gets up)
Taani pulls him down...
Rey falls on her...
(REY N TAANI LUKS INTO EACH OTHER 'S EYES...)
Rey comes into senses n gets up..
Tanni pulls him down n lies on top of him...
Taani kisses on rey's forehead...
Rey closes his eye...
Taani moves to kiss his eyes..
n kiss his cheeks...
Rey opens his eyes...
Sees taani leaning to kiss on lips..
Put her down n lies on top of her...
N kiss her passionately..taking out ol d pressure...
Rey's lips crushed her lips...
Taani too kissed him back..her nails dug in to his skin..
Rey broke his kiss n removes his shirt ...
Starts kissing her neck...taani clutched onto his hair...
Rey slids her strap...
Kisses her sholder...
Rey throws her kuta away..
Rey moves down to kiss her stomach..taani was feeling dizzines alover..Rey's anger was changed into d love for her,all his anger was gone...he was lost in her...

After one hour...
Taani's head lay top on chest..
Hearing his heartbeat...
Rey had his arms tightly around her...
Rey:aisa manoage tum toh mein har ghanta naraz ho saktha hoon.😉😳.
Taani:(hits his chest)
aap bhi besharam hote jaa rahe ho har din..
Rey:accha mein besharam hoon...
n starts to tickle her..
Taani:chodiye..
Rey:aab bolo beshram kon hao..
Taani:teek nahi ho..
Rey:(starts to kiss her)😳


Rey's phone rings...

Its sharon dis tym..(sry)

Rey:correct tyming😉
Sharon:tum teek ho?
Rey:mujhe kya hoga..
Sharon:kya..
Swayam takes d call.
Swayam:rey...
Rey gets up taani wonders of d sudden action..
Rey:swayam tu..
Swayam:ha teek haina tu,woh taani ki taraf se mein maafi maangtha hoon,usse maaf kar de..
aur tu jaldi aana...Humare dance 1 ghanta shuru hone wala..
Rey:woh to kab ki maaf kiya swayam(hugging taani n pulling her closer n kissing on her forehead)(Swayam hears d kissing sound)u dont hve 2 tell sorry k..😉
Swayam:oh,woh awaaz kya tha?😳
Rey:kaunsi?😉
tu kya bhol raha hai..
Swayam:woh sab chodo aur jaldi aajoa..
Rey:teek hai..


Rey n taani gets dressed..
Rey hugs taani from waist...n rest his head on her sholder...
N whispers in her ear..
I LOVE YOU..
n taani tuns back n kiss on his forehead n whisper s in his ear..i love u too...



Precap:after d event ,everyone goes to sharon's farmhouse...Rey gves taani a challenge(wats d challenge)😳😉
ROMANCE CONTINUES...(picture abhi baacki hai mere dosstoon😳😉)




Hope, u guys liked my 9th part...
Please do gve comments on how guys liked it..
If it was boring , iam sorry, thodi si drama add karne ki koshish ki...
IF it was bad..i am extemely sorry..
Please tell me if u guys want d next part...
Please gve d comments guys,atleast to dose iam sending pm...
I will update 2day if u guys gve me d comment of 2 or 3 pages...
Silent readers plse gve d comments...

Have a nice day ahead guys...

PART 10-PAGE 27
Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome update...loved it.. =)
rey ka gussa is so cute...hehe =D awesome update, excited for the next part...update soon and thanks so much for the PM... =) love this story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow.. Awesome update..
Rey is becoming naughty day by day!! 😳
Loved it..
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Taarey cute fight, Taani yelling at Rey poor baby lol. I just say what a way to say sorry to the person u love 😳 it was a very romantic and hot sorry, am loving naughty Rey to the fullest. U did a superb job, love the update plz continue soon. Recap is very interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update 👏
with d cute si fight 😆
pls update d next part soon⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg taarey nokjhok😃 lovd it😃😃😃 n then store room romance nice one 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
another awesome update
it was just euperb
thanks 4 pm
continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
they never leave a chance to love eachother do they?
LOL 🤣

whenever i read your updates, i have butterflies all over my body!!!
they are just HAWT AND ROMANTIC <3
please update soon and PM me.
and i think the challenge will do something with ROMANCE OFC ☺️

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