Kalarikkal House [5]: new thread link posted p.152

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maya252

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ahh enjoyed it so much, tom and jerry eh! 'marry me' omggg...

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zyanah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

i knew it!

i knew that its going to be a great chapter when I read its title.

every word was amazing.

P.S-congrats for thread 5

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Leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Congrats Devi for the new thread!!

and wow!! what an update this one is!!

loved it...

the entire thing was very conveniently conveyed from his end very carefully put rather... and i am happy she took part in it without putting up a fight...

okie i dunno abt Arnav... but i am now all tensed abt Kashi's reaction after the proposal!!

where will this all lead to ... ?

also ever since their arrival in delhi ... the effect of kalarikkal seems to have reduced... not complaining though!! just saying they seem to have lost that touch and bond that they shared back there in Kerala!! OR mabbe its just me... as i had read all 54 chaps in one go and after abt 20 days time i read 55 and 56... so mabbe it was me who had lost the touch ... and thus feeling so...

anyways i am sure u know what you are doing .. have it all planned ... so i will sit back and just read!!

Thanks for the update!!

~Leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

what !!! how did marriage came in picture ?? you always manage to shock me with twists.

like tab is not working..will try pressing again :)

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Sunshine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Nice work. You are gifted indeed. Would love to know how our Kashi reacts!.

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Nutcase

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

I really melt down reading it...simple words! ---"marry me" Oh Devi! it was simply brilliant! The slap, the kiss, heart wretching cries and final part! Oh I love the way you write it with the seduction tone! Such intimacy and power in those scenes are quite unique and your signature styles!