TR SS- Getting Taani Back *DISCONTINUED*

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Inspired by http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3425744&TPN=14. Sorry if it seems similar, but I swear I am not copying!!!

Basically the Gang are all in Goa without Taani. Taani has just hung up on Rey, and decided to do some work instead of thinking about them. She is doing some GS work when VP sir comes to talk to her.

VP- Taani, are you okay?
Taani-haan, sir. I just don't feel very well.
VP-well then you can get the rest of the week off. We are shutting down the college for a faculty meeting.
Taani-thank you sir
VP-no problem

Taani got up and was about to leave when she saw that Rey was calling. She wasn't in the mood to talk to him.
Taani-umm sir. Can you please pick up the phone and tell them that I am not here and doing a job for you?

VP-but why?
Taani-please sir
VP-okay

He took the phone and answered it.

Rey-Taani I know you're mad b-
VP-umm excuse me but this is the VP
Rey-oh, umm Taani kahan hai?
VP-who right now job main karta hoon. She left her phone here.
Rey-oh, when she comes back can you tell her I really need to talk to her.
VP-sure

He hung up the phone and gave it back to Taani. She thanked him and started going home. In the auto rikshaw she called her friend.

Taani-hey! I need to talk
???-what's up?
Taani-*explains what happened*
???-how rude of them!!!
Taani-so I am coming back to Jodhpur for a week.
???-REALLY?!? Great, I can't wait. When will you be arriving.
Taani-tomorrow morning
???-Okay! All of us will come and pick you up!
Taani-I am actually seriously excited.
???- So am I, okay see you tomorrow morning!
Taani-yup, bye

She hang up the phone and exited the rikshaw. She went upstairs and packed her bag. She found her Kaka asleep so she left him a note.
Kaka,
Main Jodhpur ki chale gaye. Don't worry.
Taani xoxo

She left the note and went to the train station. She was upset about her friends ditching but she was excited to go and see her best friends back in Jodhpur. She soon fell asleep on the train.

When Taani woke up they had just reached the Jodhpur train station. She got off the train and looked around for her friends. She finally found them and ran towards them.

Taani-MAYA!!!
Maya-Taani!!!

They hugged each other tightly. The rest coughed.

Taani-hey guys! I missed you all so much.
???-we missed you too
Taani-I'm so glad to be back.
Maya-we're so glad your back Taani.

They all left the train station and went to Taani's house. She saw her mother and hugged her tight. They all then went to her room an sat down.

Taani-so guys tell me what's up?
Maya-well Akash and I are kind of
Taani-OMG! You guys finally confessed!
Maya-yup.

Taani hugged both of them. Then she looked at the other to.

Taani-what about you two?
Karan-I have a girlfriend. Her name is Amisha. You'll see her tomorrow at the reunion.
Taani-and you Varun?
Varun-single and ready to mingle. What about you?
Taani-umm' *looks down*
Maya-her boyfriend is so mean!
Taani-Maya, he isn't
Maya-he just left with you. They all did
Varun & Karan & Akash- what are you talking about?
Maya-*explains to them*
Varun-I'm going to kill them!
Taani-no don't. Seriously guys, I kind of understand. They are seriously passionate about dance. And I am GS, I would have discouraged them and stopped them from completing their dream.
Maya-just because you're GS doesn't mean they forget about you.
Taani-can we just not talk about this?
Maya-sure. Anyway we are all going for a movie tonight.
Taani-which one?
Maya-ABCD
Taani-sach, yay! I really wanted to see it!
Varun-this is why we love you guys. You actually watch cool movies.
Taani & Maya-*laugh*

~Meanwhile in Goa~

Rey was getting really annoyed now. Why wouldn't Taani answer his calls? And his frustration was obvious to the rest.

Vicky-Arre Rey, what's wrong?
Rey-Taani, isn't answering her phone. She is really upset. I have called her like 50 times.
Nil-Rey, I'm sure she'll get over it.
Rey-don't you get it. Taani isn't like other girls. She is really sensitive. She probably hates me right now.
Swayam-Rey, chill. Taani isn't that sensitive.
Rey-Swayam, she was really upset. She hung up on me. She never does that. Even when we were fighting or I was being rude to her, she never hung up on me. NEVER!
Swayam-if you're so upset I'll call the house and see what's going on.
Rey-thanks yaar

Swayam calls the house and Kaka answers the phone. Swayam put's in on speaker phone.

Swayam-hello Kaka, Taani kahan hai?
Kaka-Swayam Baba, Taani beti Jodhpu mein.
Gang-KYA?
Kaka-haan, she left a note saying that she was going to Jodhpur.
Swayam-did she say when she was coming back?
Kaka-nehi
Swayam-ok Kaka

He hung up the phone.

Neha-Taani Jodhpur mein
Swayam-haan
Aashi-she must be very upset types
Rey-oh god, I knew this was a bad idea!
Sharon-I'm sorry
Swayam-it's okay
Rey-what am I supposed to do? She has been ignoring me since yesterday and now her phone is off.
Simmi-GUYS! She updated her status.

She showed the screen to the gang. It read.
Taani Shekhawat- Back In Jodhpur. Great to be reunited with my best friends. I missed you guys so much. Having a great time!!!
with- Maya Kapoor, Varun Rai, Akash Sinha, and Karan Dixit.

Neha-best friends? Me thinking mein Taani ki best friend hoon
Aashi-I thought we were best friend types
Rinni & Simmi-hum bhi
Rey-guys focus! She is having a great time without us. If she likes Jodhpur so much and misses it a lot. She might want to move back.
Swayam-Rey I think you're exaggerating. She would never leave Mumbai. She loves you too much to just leave.
Rey-but she is upset with me right now, so who knows what she would do?
Swayam-you know what? I am going to call Karan right now. Let's see what's going on!

Swayam called Karan and he picked up after some time. He put's in on speaker phone.

Karan-Swayam dude, what's up?
Swayam-nothing much, just saw Taani's status. I was wondering whether she was with you.
Taani-*shakes her head no*
Karan-umm'.no
Swayam-*doesn't believe him* Karan, I know you're lying.
Karan-dude, I don't really think she wants to talk to you.
Swayam-but Karan
Karan-sorry, but I can promise you she is safe. We are having a lot of fun. It's great to have her back.
Swayam-Karan'
Karan-bye Swayam.

Karan hung up the phone.

Swayam-Taani doesn't want to talk to me.
Rey-great, now what? She is having an amazing time without us. Without me. Swayam aren't they your friends, won't they listen to you.
Swayam-no they're only Taani's friends. These five were inseperable.
Neha-who five?
Swayam-Taani, Maya, Karan, Varun and Akash. They have been best friends since they were little. Maya and Akash are in love, so they're probably together now. Karan has a girlfriend called Amisha. Varun and Taani used to like each other.
Rey-what???
Swayam-but they don't anymore, Taani got over it when she fell in love with you. Varun is kind of a ladies man, but he is serious when it comes to Maya or Taani. He won't let anyone come near them, if they don't have their permission. All of them are like that. They are inseparable. Even by me, I could and never would be able to separate them.

They were all sad. They wanted Taani back. They were ashamed of themselves for hurting her in the first place.

Precap: The gang go back to Mumbai, and plan their next move. Taani updates her profile with some pictures that annoy the Gang.

Hope you liked it. 😃😃😃

Part 1- Pg 1 (Above)
Part 2- Pg 2
Part 3-

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it so much...not at all copied...plz update soon...ab pata chalega sabko ki taani kitni imp hai...update soon...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice story...
sorry but very much alike Dipu's story...
its gud ur are taking inspiration from her...Dipu is fab writer...
but in next parts i would love to see your own spice 😊
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oh god i just loved it
seriously awesome yr
do continue soon plzzz😊
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love it love it love it... its jus awesome... finally she will get some importance... =)

please jaldi jaldi update karna, and do PM me :) thanks :)
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Wow... awesome story!!!!!
Please continue this story.
It's really interesting!!!😊😃
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Hey!!bohot achcha hai..so plzzz...continue n update soon
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Recap: Taani is upset with the gang for going to Goa without her. She goes to Jodhpur. When the gang hears about how she is having a great time they get jealous and upset.

While the Gang was coming back to Mumbai, Taani was waking up. She went to the kitchen. She found Maya sitting at the table. She also found her phone. She turned it on and saw 100 missed calls. 40 from Rey, 20 from Swayam, 10 from Neha, 10 from Aashi, 10 from Simmi and 10 from Rinni. She also had 100 texts. 55 from Rey, 30 from Swayam, 10 from Neha and 5 from Aashi. She sighed and put her phone on the table, she plonked herself down opposite Maya.

Maya-what's wrong?
Taani-*pushes her phone towards Maya*
Maya-*looks at the phone* WOW!!! Dude, maybe you should call them back.
Taani-I just don't feel like talking to them. I mean I know it really meant a lot to them, but they still should have told me before going. I honestly wouldn't have cared if they were breaking the rules. I would have happily gone with them.
Maya-really?
Taani-yes. That is what hurts me the most. That they actually thought that I would stop them from going. I know how much dance means to them.
Maya-do they know how much it means to you?
Taani-no. They think that I only know Kathak.
Maya-wow, they don't know about us.
Taani-nope, not even bhai.
Maya-you have kept it from him for so long
Taani-I know and I feel bad. But it is my thing, and I just want it to continue to be my thing.
Maya-well it seems like they really miss you.
Taani-I'm sure they're just feelings guilty because Rey told them I was upset. If they actually cared, they wouldn't have left without me in any case.
Maya-chaal, forget about them. We have to get ready for the reunion tonight. So let's go shopping.
Taani-okay, let me just get ready.

~Meanwhile in Mumbai~
The gang were all at Swayam's house. They found out that the college was closed for a week. This made them all a bit more relax because they knew that Taani went for a holiday. But they still wanted her back. Swayam decided to call his Chachi and put it on speaker phone like he usually did.

Chachi-hello Swayam beta
Swayam-hi Chachi, is Taani there?
Chachi-oh you just missed her. She and Maya went shopping for the Reunion tonight.
Swayam-Reunion?
Chachi-haan, their school is having a reunion tonight. Maya is going with Akash and Karan is going with Amisha. Taani has decided to go with Varun as her date.
ReYam-WHAT?
Chachi-haan, he asked her and she said yes. They were both going alone so… But it's not that serious.
Swayam-umm okay Chachi, can you just tell Taani I called when she gets back.
Chachi-of course beta, you take care
Swayam-you too Chachi

Swayam hung up.

Rey-how dare she? How can she? She's going with someone else as a date. Who meri girlfriend hoon. How can she even think of another guy? How could she say yes?
Swayam-Rey calm down
Rey-I will not calm down. I want to go to Jodhpur and kill that guy for even asking her to be her date.
Swayam-That's a great idea! Why don't we all just go to Jodhpur and get her back.
Gang-WHAT?
Swayam-haan, to show her that we really miss her.
Rey-I am in
Gang-so are we!

The rest of the day they were packing. They planned to leave the next morning. Later that evening Swayam and Rey tried calling Taani again. This time Taani picked up Swayam's call. He put it on speaker.

Taani-haan bhai!
Swayam-TAANI!!!
Taani-KYA?
Swayam-you went to Jodhpur without telling me
Taani-you went to Goa without telling me
Swayam-Taani…
Taani-listen bhai, I know you were worried. But I'm fine. I am having an absolutely amazing time here. Maya, Varun, Karan and Akash have been great. I missed them so much. Especially Maya and Varun.
Rey-Taani…
Taani-bhai, what happened to your voice?
Rey-actually Taani
Taani-anyway bhai, I have to go. Varun is coming to pick Maya and I up. I'll talking to you tomorrow. Bye bhai!

And with that she hung up the phone. Taani turned and saw Maya standing there.

Taani-wow Maya, you look amazing (wearing - https://www.0800onlinemall.com/product_images/g/565/Yellow_Pink_Crinkle_Chiffon_And_Silk_Anarkali_Dress__36736_zoom.png )
Maya-not as amazing as you
Taani-thanks
Maya-you knew that was Rey didn't you
Taani-yes, but I didn't want to talk to him
Maya-I understand, I like the way you countered his comment.
Taani-well I learnt from the best
Maya-woh main hoon

They laughed. They were interrupted by a honk outside. They both yelled bye to Taani's mom and went out. They got in the car.

Varun-wow, you girls look hot.
Taani-*giggles* shut up Varun. Just drive
Varun-you know I'm so excited. I have a hot girl as my date. All the girls will be jealous!
Maya-you bet they will.
Taani-I just wish I was going with my real boyfriend *looks down*
Varun-hey, I'm sure if he was here he would have totally gone with you. He is stupid to hurt you.
Taani-thanks Var.
Varun-anything for you sweetheart
Maya-guys, I wanna take some pics.

She took her camera and took pictures of her and Taani. She then took some pictures of Varun, when he wasn't driving of course. When they reached. They met up with Akash and Karan.

Karan-wow you guys look amazing!
Maya & Taani-thanks Karan!
Akash-you guys look great. Maya you look gorgeous!
Maya-thanks Akash *blushing*
Varun-oh ho, you're blushing
Maya-shut up Var.

They all laughed and made their way to their table. Karan introduced Taani to Amisha. That night went amazing. Taani danced with Varun and Akash. She also danced with all the girls. They took so many pictures.

~Meanwhile in Mumbai, the next morning~
Rey checked Taani's profile. He was hanging out with rest. He found some pictures of the Reunion. She was tagged in the album. It was posted by Maya.

Rey-hey guys look!

He showed it to them. He opened the pics and went through them. The more they went on the angrier he got. There were many pictures. Some were of Maya and Taani. Some were off Taani and Varun. One of was Varun in the middle with both Taani and Maya kissing his cheeks. There was another one with Maya and Taani in the middle with Akash kissing Maya's cheek and Varun doing the same to Taani. Then there were quite a few of the whole gang of 5. There were pictures of Varun and Taani dancing together. This got Rey really angry.

Rey-HOW DARE SHE??? I haven't even danced with her. She has danced with Varun, but not with me. And she wouldn't let me kiss her, but she'll let him kiss her cheek. She even kissed his cheek.
Neha-and look at her and this Maya girl. They are always smiling with each other.
Aashi-haan, they are the very happy looking types.
Simmi-they seem so happy with each other
Rinni-she looks happier there then she has ever looked here. It has only been 1 night!
Swayam-guys, calm down! We're going to go tomorrow and then we can sort everything out.
Simmi-wait she updated her status.

They all looked at the screen and saw her status.
Taani Shekhawat- BEST NIGHT EVER!!! I had so much fun. Now I remember why I missed home so much :( I love you guys and thank you for making this the best night I have had in a long time.
-with Maya Kapoor, Varun Rai, Karan Dixit, Akash Sinha and Amisha Singh.

Simmi-the best night she's had in a long time.
Rinni-she has never had such a good time with us
Neha-Taani missing us not.
Swayam-guys, you need to be more optimistic. She's probably doing this on purpose.
Rey-dude Taani isn't like that. If she was doing this on purpose then she wouldn't have picked up your call. Look I'm going to call her now.

Rey called her and she actually picked up, he put it on speaker phone.

Taani-hey *it was soft a voice*
Rey-Oh my god Taani. I am so sorry. I should have never left. This is all my fault. I'm missing you so much. I can't go more than 2 minutes without talking to you. How could you just leave without me? Actually don't answer that question. I am so sorry, I would understand if you don't forgive me
Taani-Rey, chill. It's okay. I understand. Dance is important to you. I overreacted. It's okay. I forgive you.
Neha-you forgive us too right?
Taani-Neha? You're all there
Gang-YES!
Taani-oh okay! Yes I forgive all of you. So how was it? Did you guys rock the stage?
Swayam-umm actually Taani
Maya-TAANI! Come on, we have to go. Otherwise Varun will kill us. Remember last time we were late.
Taani-oh sorry guys, I have to go.
Rey-Arre Taani, where are you going?
Taani-Maya and I are going out with with Varun. He is taking me around Jodhpur.
Swayam-what are you going to be doing?
Taani-lots of stuff. Shopping, eating, more shopping. Just hanging out. You know bhai ever since I have come back I've been having so much fun. Sometimes I wonder why I even left?
Sharon-because you love Rey
Taani-well it was worth it!
Rey-I love you Taani
Maya-TAANI!!!! COME ON!!!
Taani-sorry guys I have to go. Love you too Rey.

She left the phone. Rey looked a little crushed.

Rey-did you guys hear that?
Swayam-what? She said Love you too.
Rey-she didn't say I love you too. She never says Love you, without the I. I'm losing her. We are going to Jodhpur and I am getting my Taani back!
Vicky-Arre Rey! Chill yaar. You'll get her back
Neha-haan and we getting our best friend back!

The gang left for the train station. When they got to Jodhpur, they headed straight for Taani's house. Swayam's Chachi greeted them.

Swayam-umm Taani kahan hai?
Chachi-woh Maya aur Varun ki saath bahar chale gayee. Tonight there is a party and they are all going out. You should go as well.

But before Swayam could say anything, they were interrupted by a voice coming through the door.

Varun-Chachi, is okay if I get ready here tonight?
Chachi-of course beta. Come and meet someone
Varun-who?

Varun came in and saw Swayam, he went and hugged him.

Varun-Swayam, what's up man? What are you doing here?
Swayam-I have come to take my sister back with em
Varun-umm, she said she was only going back at the end of the week
Swayam-but she said she was coming back right?
Varun-of course, she would never leave Mumbai. She told us that even though she was upset, she could never leave her boyfriend and friends behind.
Rey-Taani said that?
Varun-ya, who are you
Rey-I'm her b-
Vicky-that's her boyfriend
Varun-so you are the guys who left her and went. Wow, you guys really have the nerve to come here. She was really upset.
Rey-excuse me? Who the hell do you think you are?
Varun-her best friend, who has never hurt her. Who are you?
Rey-her boyfriend, who loves her
Varun-I love her too.
ReYam-what?
Varun-like a sister

Rey and Varun stared each other down.

Aashi-umm guys can you not be enemy types. We should find Taani and apologize to her.

Varun turned to her and stared at her. Aashi saw him staring and blushed.

Varun-hi I'm Varun.
Aashi-I'm Aashi
Varun-so what are you here for?

The gang was watching this take place, and found it quite amusing. But Nil interrupter before Aashi could answer.

Nil-umm we want to apologize to Taani. We didn't think she would be that upset. I mean she isn't as passionate about dancing as we are, and she was GS so we couldn't tell her.
Varun-dude are you mad? Taani and not caring about dance? Do you know who you're talking about?
Swayam-what do you mean?
Varun-look dude, I shouldn't tell you this but since you guys seem to be really upset about hurting Taani *smiles at Aashi*
Aashi-*blushes and smiles back*
Varun-guys, you don't know Taani at all.
Rey-what?
Varun-dude. Taani is a dancer. She can dance really well. She is part of our dance group. Maya, Akash, Karan, Taani and I. We are all dancers. We used to put on performances. We were the best dance group here. But then Taani left to Mumbai, for well you. Ever since then it has just been the 4 of us. But tonight we are going to go to a party and dance again. You guys should come and surprise her. But I have to go now, because I have to pick Taani and Maya up from the parlour. You know girls.
Boys-yup
Girls-*hit the boys*
Rey-ahaha
Sharon-*hits Rey*
Rey-SHARON!

Varun left and the gang just sat there thinking about what he said.

Precap: The gang think of a way to make Taani forgive them. Aashi and Varun flirt more at the party. Rey gets jealous of Taani hanging out with some guys.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update di...next part ho sake toh soon update karna!
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wow dear
its amazing
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