KR OS: Playing Angry Birds

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 12 years ago

See, Technically, I never RESD! 😃

Now, I am guessing this is the first time ever I have been first on any of your writings, So I'll go ahead and mark the victory by doing the dance.. *Dhinka Chika!!!*

So, coming to the OS...

I had been thinking how were you gonna keep it PG-13 with all the heavy rules of IF now. But you did a marvelous job there Vaish!

From start to the end, the flow was just seamless.. It was so superb.

First the anticipation, at how the weekend would go. Then the cribbing and frustration (I can personally understand Kria's pain.. My BF's a jackass when it comes to gadgets! Uggh.. More of a jackass when Football is on TV)... So yeah.. then the five minutes wale excuses!! Hmm.. Hmm.. Seems like we are starting a five minute trend here?? Are we??

Then of course! The battery dies.. I would have loved if Kria punished him khoob saara! But hey, I think she will! 😉

Amazingly tantalizing and teasing OS!! Loved it completely!

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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well shock mat hojana pehli baat ki maine unres ki... one of the main reason being its the first page and the second one is i was missing ur writings lately!!!finally i got something to read...thanks for this and now coming to the story!!! it was just simpy sweet...i mean ... i really liked the way u wrote it... i can understand the five minute thingie... okay now dnt fall into conclusions like i have someone...its just that my friend often gets busy chatting with her bf... slightly same sort of thingie u see... waise kria... aww ... waise ek baat poochni thi ,...teri har story mei kria ki atleast 2-3 lines description hoti hai... is it that u like kria i mean ..frankly speaking i love shaks ki structure... u too??? u always make her look HAWT!!

and coming to reyaansh baba... uff sachi mei itni temting cheez hote hue bhi he wanted to play the game seriously??? harmones dhang se kaam toh karing na 😆

waise i loved the ending 😉

loved it re...

PS: myself shocked seeing the length of the comment!!!😲

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG. . . .
Its a histry. . . .
For d first time,m commenting on 1st page of ur work vaishu di. . . .
And i realy feel proud about that. . . . . .
Ok. . .
So cuming to the os.. . .
The OS was awsome-dowsome-trowsome like always. . . . .
I so so so lovd it. . . . .
Hehehe. . . . . . .
Here kriya was standing near rey to seduce him. . .
And our hero was busy in playing angry bird. . .
Hehahaahaaa. . . . . . I realy lovd it a lot. . . . , .

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chandrima

@chand91

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Posted: 12 years ago

realy

angry bird

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awsm cncpt

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 12 years ago

good one...loved it 😊

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 12 years ago

lol... angrybirds vs lovemaking...😛

never knew it can overrule the s*x appeal 😆

when kriya was seducing him already... & he was busy making records...🤪

stupidism... she'll definitely dump that game someday 😆

maine ye game kabhi nhi kheli... but bahot suna h...😳

hahaha... it can never walk lifelong... battery died... but kriya ka gussa satve aasman par 😡 😆

hehe... chalu rey... double meaning baatein..😉

mast h ...😊

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was marvellous loved it till core

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG Vaish... 🤣 ... Wat a superawesome OS... 😆
U knw wat..today eve i ws just thinking ki whn r u gonnaupdate ur LA...and see here u r wid a new OS... Thank god kuch to pdne naseeb hua... 😆

Coming to the OS... Tohhh...kya kahu yar... 😛 ... Angry birds has litrelly ruined love lives of couples... Kriyaansh looks no exception here... 😆

Especially at d time whn Rey ws explaining her the game...i ws like... "Boys" 😛

Hahahaha...i just simply loved it... Amazing work re... 😃

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago