NEW TR STORY: BY MY SIDE.pt2 pg6 updtd 10 feb. - Page 8

Hey megha thnx 4 d pm...n i hope u wil tke watevr m gona say n in a positive.. It was a gr8 update...bt sumwhr i thot dat u went ovrboard...ok dnt tke it as an offence...personally u r 1 f my fav writers...bt m juz sharin my genuine thots...n i think taani being upset wid d gang her brothr n evn rey is all fair enuf...bt i still think all f wat taani said was way 2 much bcoz evn she knew dat rey's heart was n is in d rite plce n dat he trusts her...proof 2 both dese points wud b d fact dat he calld her 4m goa...i completly agree wat evry1 did wid taani was rong n nt 2 mention she must b hurt n upset bt knwin taani she wud hve undrstud evry1s point f view though dat wudnt chnge d fact dat she is hurt..bt she also realises dat hw imp dance is 2 evry1 n specially rey 4 whum it is a passion...n she knws hw torn rey must hve been n so i diubt she wud mke it dis difficult 4 him...m nt tryin 2 shw u dwn i really aporeciate ur hard wrk n hve always luvd ur stories n all f dis is juz my point f view...hope u wil c it in d rite light...waiting 4 d update...plz update soon :)

Its just tooo goooddd
Luved evrythn abt it

emotional 1... I lykd it... thnx 4 the update nd do pm me...

wow !! it was so so emotional n painful .. n the FE part was perfectly written really mindblowing...

omg what to say megha no words... its so emotional..heart touchey...paining...hurting...love..the way u discribe taarey feeling beyond the world. cant stop cry. taarey in FE my heart just come out . cant see them like this. rey was right at his possion but taani is right. its hurted her so much. pls make them happy cant see them like this.pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon. thanks 4 pming me and do pm me.

Wow i read two parts together. They wer so good. I hope we get sumthing lyk this to see on tv. Poor taani is so much hurt and rey feeling more guilty even wen he was only partially at fault for going to goa. Overall nice story. Update soon.

wow that was amazing

Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Hey megha thnx 4 d pm...n i hope u wil tke watevr m gona say n in a positive.. It was a gr8 update...bt sumwhr i thot dat u went ovrboard...ok dnt tke it as an offence...personally u r 1 f my fav writers...bt m juz sharin my genuine thots...n i think taani being upset wid d gang her brothr n evn rey is all fair enuf...bt i still think all f wat taani said was way 2 much bcoz evn she knew dat rey's heart was n is in d rite plce n dat he trusts her...proof 2 both dese points wud b d fact dat he calld her 4m goa...i completly agree wat evry1 did wid taani was rong n nt 2 mention she must b hurt n upset bt knwin taani she wud hve undrstud evry1s point f view though dat wudnt chnge d fact dat she is hurt..bt she also realises dat hw imp dance is 2 evry1 n specially rey 4 whum it is a passion...n she knws hw torn rey must hve been n so i diubt she wud mke it dis difficult 4 him...m nt tryin 2 shw u dwn i really aporeciate ur hard wrk n hve always luvd ur stories n all f dis is juz my point f view...hope u wil c it in d rite light...waiting 4 d update...plz update soon :)

okay i'm replying to u sonakshi just to tell u thanks😊...i would always love to hear criticism of my stories. thanks for giving time to write such a long reply.
but in the story by me, i try to keep things realistic not idealistic. Taani understanding everything and then just stay calm and appear with a smile as in show happened is pretty unbelievable for me...i write exactly considering what real persons or myself would had done if in that situation...and taani's outburst was exactly the response a hurt person would me, accord to me, she is even hurt by the fact that she's hurting rey and her friends, but sometimes we just can't help it.