swaron FF : a blind journey of life {on hold } - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love the concept of love after marriage !! Do PM me when you start updating !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
hi aruba another ff from u..🤗
nice concept n CS..
all d best for u both..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Concept, do continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shruts and aruba...
Luvd the concept
CS is perfect
Upd8 ASAP guys.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Beautiful concept and CS dearies...🤗🤗


Aru..one more FF..woo..u r on a roll babes...

I am so glad to see Shruts name in writer credits..

welcome to the beautiful world of writing baby...🤗

Congrats to both of u for new FF


will be waiting for the update😳

Luv
Deep


thank u dil touching di ❤️

thanks a lot for the grand welcome 😳

hope i enjoy this beautiful world 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx for pm,becoz it is u'r first pm to my account... i love this concept.. totally different,gud.. and looks so promising... i love to see, how a two strangers will fall in love with each other...and makes a true love's definition...i.e.."blind love"... character sketch of swaron is perfect regarding to story.. so keep updating.. and yes,if possible then pls pm me for further updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: OceanicRockStar

nice concept dear...continue soon😊


thnx himi for commenting

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Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Thanx for pm,becoz it is u'r first pm to my account... i love this concept.. totally different,gud.. and looks so promising... i love to see, how a two strangers will fall in love with each other...and makes a true love's definition...i.e.."blind love"... character sketch of swaron is perfect regarding to story.. so keep updating.. and yes,if possible then pls pm me for further updates...
prateek


for pm's buddy up both sweetcherry95 and shrutikaswaron
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arey mai kaise miss kiya ye :(
Chalo koyi gal nai better late than never, an awesome concpet jaldi start karo ji...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plzz bear with grammatical mistakes and typo errors


Chapter 1

A boy was sleeping peacefully on his bed. He was totally enjoying his sleep and was sleeping without any tensions but he was unaware of the new tension brewing in his house.

His mom entered his room and called "Swayam" but he was not at all ready to get up. So she opened the curtains and let the sunlight come in, so that the sun could wake up her son'..lolz. She just kept on calling him but he was deep asleep, she was happy to see her son so happy n peacefully sleeping leaving behind all the tensions, she has hardly seen her son this way from so many days. He used to be always busy with his office work afterall he was the software engineer in a leading IT firm in Mumbai.

And with this type of job he was always busy satisfying the deadlines, clients demand so it was refreshing change for his mom to see him like that. Soon she realized she had to wake him up because he have to leave for his work.

She just said to him "swayam beta uth jao''office nahi jana hain." And he got up with a jerk as if heard something wrong. He started yelling on his mom as why she didn't woke him up early. He rushed to the washroom to freshen up and his mom brought tea for him till that time. He knew he was going to be late so he was just running from here n there to take his clothes and have his tea. He got ready and had his tea which his mom had brought for him. He was going to have breakfast with his family and suddenly his cousin came in front of him. They both were going to collide.

"Sharon" called her dad. "yes dad" replied Sharon. "beta breakfast is ready" Sharon's dad said.sharon replied"coming dad". Sharon was the only daughter of Gautam Raiprakash. Her mother died when she was just four in an accident so she was more close to her dad. And she shared every little secret of her with her dad. Her dad was her bestfriend. But now-a-days she was just getting irritated by her dad and the reason was marriage.

He used to be always behind her showing her photos of eligible grooms but she used to just reject everyone she met''just giving some silly reasons'..i didn't like his hair'.i didn't like the shirt he is wearing''she used to give just silly reasons''and in this way she rejected 52 boys'but she was not aware of what life has planned for her.

She went to dining table to have her breakfast all ready and set for her work. She ate as fast as she could because she was getting late and the second reason being her dad would again start irritating her with the topic of marriage. So she just ran for her office.



Swayam was about to collide with his cousin. But he stopped and avoided the collision. And he asked his cousin

Swayam: megha kya hua tu itni hadbadi mein kaha jaa rahi hain?

megha:kuch nahi bhai''aapke paas hi aa rahi thi'.aapko pata hain dadi ko kuch hua hain.

Swayam :kya hua dadi ko?

megha :chalo aap mere sath'jaldi.

Swayam and megha both rushed towards their granny's room. all the family members were present there. Swayam's mom and dad'his aunt and uncle'all were standing with tensed and worried expressions.Swayam rushed to his granny.

Swayam: kya hua dadi?

Swayam's granny:kuch nahi'..mein kuch samay baad swargwasi honewali hun,'..mujhe yamraj dikh rahe hain'..and winks towards all other family members

Swayam:kya?

Swayam's granny:Haan dekh mujhe yamraj dikh rahe hain'..woh mujhe aapne saath le jayenge'.tumhare dadaji ke pass'.achcha hain ab unse mulakat ho jayegi'..meri kuch saheliyaaan bhi mil jayegi'..khush hun mein'.par par use pehle mein apne pote ki shadi hote hue dekhna chahti hun'.yeh meri akhri ichcha hain.

Swayam:yeh kya keh rahi ho dadi''.aur aapko kuch nahi hoga.

Swayam's was totally helpless hearing what his granny said'.he didn't understood how to react'.he looked at everyone's else present in the room but even they were like what we can do'..you have to deal with it. After all this swayam had to agree to his granny's so called verdict'..afterall he was close to her and his granny was such a sweetheart.

Swayam:k dadi''thik hain mein shadi karne ke liye tayaar hun.

His granny gave thumbs up to indicating that their plan has succeded'.but this went unnoticed by swayam'.so he didn't knew that all this was planned.Swayam left from his granny's room to have his breakfast.

All started rejoicing. Even his granny was happy and did little bit of "balle balle" sitting on the bed.

She then told ramu kaka to bring kulfi''.it was a tradition of shekhawat family to celebrate the good news with kulfi and what better then the only son in the family have agreed to get married.

Everyone was seating on the dining table and having breakfast and all started teasing him and he was giving death glares to everyone.

Swayam's uncle:Beta relax,yeh toh sabke sath hota hain,humein pata hain tumhe kaise lagta hoga'.yeh haal sabka hota hain.

Megha :Bas vaise hi jaise 68 ladkiyaan dekhte waqt laga hoga.

Swayam gave a death glare to his cousin and she just narrowed down her eyes.

Swayam's mom: Haan bas. Koi mere bte ko aur tang nahi karega. Bas!!! Mera pyaara beta. Koi views match nahi hui honge na unn ladkiyoan ke aur iske, isliye toh isne unhe reject kardiya; usme iski kya galti; akhir shadi ki baat hain; jindagi bhaar ke saath ki baat hain; yeh thodi naa aise hi jaldi jaldi mein decision le leta.

Swayam's dad: kuch jyaada hi dheere nahi chal raha tumhara beta''.68 ladkiyaan'..kuch jyaada nahi hoti'veena ji !

Swayam was so upset hearing all this talk that he soon wanted to leave and go to office where he can be free from all this talks'.but the thoughts are surely gonna haunt him in office too.

Swayam: Chalo I am leaving for office. Aap log aapna yeh bahu dhundho abhiyaan chalu rakhna.

Megha :Bhai''.bahu dhundna abhiyaan nahi''.MISSION BAHU SEARCH.

All burst out laughing''and swayam gave them a I can't take it more look and left from there for his office.

At sharon's home: Beta please aaj office se jaldi aa jana,humein ladka dekhne jaana hain.

Sharon: No ways Dad!!! Mujhe aaj office mein bohot saara kaam hain. Mein jaldi nahi aa sakti and woh bhi ladka dekhne ke liye no ways .

Sharon's Dad: mujhe pata hain ki meri beti bohot busy rehti hain'.par meine tumhare sir se baat kar li hain and he has agreed to make you free early'..so don't give any excuses and ghar jaldi aa jana.

Sharon's Dad and Sharon's boss(MR.rathi) had been best of friends from the time they were introduced by Sharon in one of her colleagues wedding'.and he had gelled up with sharon's dad so well''.and sharon's dad had told him about how corncern he was reagarding sharon's marriage and even Mr.rathi agreed to help him in this matter as he treats Sharon like his own daughter.

So it was more difficult for Sharon then swayam because even in office she had her boss or rather another dad who used to talk with her regarding marriage'..which she hated to talk about but this thought was brought before her''.as if her destiny was not letting her free from this thoughts'..it was just trying to force her in the institution of marriage and trying to clinch her.

Even Swayam was fighting the same battle with destiny.

Two individuals unaware of the fact that destiny is going to tie them up together'.are fighting with it for the same result of never getting married'.will this similarity is the starting of their beautiful life together or is it gonna hurt them more?

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next update after 35+ likes and on page 15

regards

Aruba & Shrutika

Edited by sweetcherry95 - 12 years ago

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