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anupama

@ak_maggi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awww this is d second time i read this one! last nt i ve read it half in sleep n i almost foolishly slept imagining abt their kiss n d blush on their cheeks...😛😆 actually think i was all red imaginin actually lol😆

u know this phase cud ve been just written casually like askin on a date.. excitement...romantic it 'd ve been... yes! but not intricate... n thats y i say i love when u detail it wid grip!

Tht butterflies in ur stomach when u ve ur first kiss...n everytime d close proximity sets in after tht...d thin line of shy n bein comfortable...rt of bein playful...flirty...tht smal joy of watchin each other n feelin happy tht he/she belongs to u... sudden realization tht this is d oly thing u forgot to tel ur best friend ever coz somewer u got so carried away n it just happened to u...d eagerness n nervousness to be just perfect for each other.. to be loved n love!! isnt it d most beautiful feelin ever? Oh so beautifully written...

loved lav too... just so genuine n happy for her frnd finding her love.. loved al d teasin.. Khushi gettin nervous wid her... Ohh i am so lik Lav in tht context...ppl just push me out in romantic stituations for makin them red.. i love teasin 😛😆

n d awesome teaser! man how u love her... u wil know soon n much more😉

wel u know wat u did... u made my face look like a love sick puppy😳

he he...

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kotha

@kotha15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

nice update nd superb precap..um w8in for d next

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

congrats on another thread
didnt realise you had another on going
wow now that was something
haila what an update man
really arnie we aure were making her wait to ask her for a date mate
took you long enough and he finally did ask her
man that was hilarious with whole la incident
wonder why she hid it from la unless she was acared like she said
but she told la in the end
though la wasnt happy being kept out of llop must say
all however was forgiven when khushi spilled all including her kiss
really la arent we going too much in the future there
children already they just started dating now so cool it
wow so khushi is all sharam se paani paani awww
well yeh to hona hi tha
arnie my man is that even a question to ask
of course she is damn excited to see you again
after all its the first time she is going out with you or anyone else for that matter
now that precap sure is something
wow jealous much oh he is hopelessly in love with her about time too
cant wait for their date now

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Rabzooo
Res :D
Its so cute!!!! New love dating kissing...oh so lovely!!!!!
I love reading this!!!:D
Great update!!!!

Ahh, it's rightly the magic of first love, isn't it? I am glad you liked it dear, thank you so much for the comment! :)

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@guggu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: shukti_19
WOW!! NEW THREAD...😊
update is so awesome... simply luvd it

Thank you so very much for this amazing animation! It cheered me up instantly and had me grinning. :D I am glad you liked it dear! :)

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Mariam

@--Amy--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Awesome update

It was so cute...Khushi was all nervous because she was going on her first date..I loved her thoughts where was thinking like if she is a sex addict..LOL

update soon..thanks for the pm

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Haww! A dedication to me and I decide to log off! I suck ,don't I?

Thank you very much, love!!! I am glad to be back and back to such a wonderful update. Man, I can see it all happening right in front of me, such is your writing! I absolutely adore your descriptions. It's not too much descriptive and it's not less either, it's just perfect.

I loved it when khushi thinks people need to stop kissing her! How cute!! <3

Oh and the precap! You tease! An intense update coming up and you''ll make us poor souls wait. Not fair missy! Update soon.

P.S- I hope you are doing ok now, love. Take care and keep us giving more rocking updates. ;)

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

swati...i was blushing too while reading about the kiss...😳😳 awesome story...!! guess i have said this countless times...!! but seriously a thumbs up...👍🏼

i am excited to read how their date goes...so continue soon...😊