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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Lovely update... Their 1st date..

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

wow - finally an update and what an update - so Arnav is sorted on his side that he has found his home - what about khushi!!

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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Sorry , sorry laakhon sorry...:(
See i am even doing sit ups because i have not commented from past 3 updates of 10 things...
I was busy with my assignments...i love that story and hence wanted to read it araam se..
I read other stories and commented but i am yet to read your story...
I AM SORRY...
First of all here is a hug from me for you...🤗

I loved this update of cocktail...
Ah...Their first date...
Arnav's idea is indeed unique like his Khushi...Haunted house...? I was like really Arnav..
But yes seeing how much Khushi was enjoying it , it was nice...

I guess Swats i have told you how much i love reading about jealous and possessive Arnav...
I just love reading this trait of Arnav..i hope i get to read more about this Arnav in the future when Khushi's best friend comes into picture...

Awww...Red roses are my favourite too...you are really making me go awww when i read this story..

Their kiss toh was too sexy to read...
The way you described their emotions was beautiful...
It was really i must say knee weakening kiss...

I love this cute story...
I am so sorry for not commenting on 10 things , i will read it soon and comment hon...

I wanted to ask you hon...why hav you kept your username Guggu...? Because my teddy's name is Guggu..i have kept it because i love Sushant..

Update soon dear...
Love you...
Take care..

Edited by Swati_ - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

wow did he go super duper possessive then in the haunted house and when she said about having a competition
well that was bound to be right
dude the competition she is on about isnt what you were thinking
but i must say his jealousy seems understandable
what guy wants to hear he has competition from the girl he has just started dating right
chill dude its hust la she was talking about
but how was he to know right
this side of arnie am liking man
especially if he does what he did next
man that was worth it all
the kiss which lead to them making out in the middle of no where
and would have continued had it not been for the sound that came
awww they are so cute together
and it can only get better with time

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sansu

@sansu

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

hi!!!

you have crossed your block in this one finally!!!...*phew*..😉

now, to the update!!..

"If there's one word that would fit to their situation perfectly, it would have to be lovebirds. "...

just visualising how the scene would have been...!..it was very cute n sweet, but my first reaction was 🤣...just thinking about asr n lovebirds in the same sentence had me burst out!!

She didn't need a special invitation for it."

she is sure of what she is doing!!...that is what i can feel is expressed in this line...she doesnt need arnav's call to make her move!!!...she is sure of what is going on between them n him!!..

"Don't worry. I'll make sure that your chivalry is tested nicely."...

waiting to see this being executed!!...😉

i liked khushi's dress...was stylish!!

"Because you always look like a devil designed to kill."

bull's-eye girl...you hit the right words!!!...i dare anyone to go against that statement!!>...it is such a fact n as if he doesnt know it??...but, getting to know that from khushi would have been a morale boost n made him all warm n fuzzy inside!!...

"Your small nose reddens up quite rather cutely when you do that."...

"haunted -house"...arnav sure has done a lot of home work!!!...

really crazy dude!!...who would have thought of this as a place to take a date...

but, bingo!!...it worked like magic!!

"You're not supposed to hit us, you fool!"...

arnav n his possesiveness is always a treat to watch...but, even in this situation...he was a sweet heart!!

"I won't if you keep asking."...he really knows how to have a conversation with her...i can see that he is really enjoying this..

"Did that haunted house remind you of roses that you wanted to give me?"...*puzzled*...how can someone think like this!!!...give it up for khushi!!🤣

"I do not have a competitor." Her words were like alarms. They woke him up out of his slumber about his feelings for her"...

some unexpected conversations really yield good results...it brought him to a panic mode!!

"You're joking, right?" The expression on his face was dead-serious...😆😆

what an irony??...i loved it!!

"What are you looking at?" He heard her say, confusion clouding her eyes.

"You." It was an earnest answer...

i loved this line!!!...it was very simple, yet beautiful...

"According to Arnav, she was a sight to look at. Cross that. She was someone to be kept beside him forever."...best thought of the day dear!!😉

n the rest was as you aptly termed..."BREATHLESS"...

"There was a strange calm that settled over him.

He was home.".

LOVED IT!!...

waiting for more!!

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

u know wat was my expression by d end of d update?? khatm hogaya kya???😕😕

ohhh i am feeling like a giggling teenager dreaming abt her date!! lol..😆 d date was just perfect. not in d sense of having things in order... but those smal things...lik he forgot to give her roses though he had planned to give it first.. being lost seeing each other dressed for each other.. openin up ( devik who cud kill... was lost thinkin of Barun there😛 ) wel that is wat excitement n nervousness makes u do... ya u r comfortable wid d person but just d thought makin d date special for each other makes them nervous u know! n his choice of place was really cuuute... his whole intention is to see her happy n his choice itself becomes secondary ...so loved those small bits guggu.. it makes it more real..

ya my fav scene has to be d kiss n u know tht 😛😆 but my other fav moment also has to be d way he feels possessive n hugs her... just d realization of wat she means to him... so precious.. d committment to himself to have her beside him forever n also Khushi somewhere feels pride in d way he hugged her like it just showed her how important she is for him.. tht hug was silent exchange of committment...nice scene...

n now comes my fav part...i must say guggu pretty elaborate explaination😉... he he he😆 jokes apart it was really sexy... her initial resistance.. his comfort..d way they held each other... kissed lik there is no tommorrow...wanting to just feel each other...belong to each other... it had such pure joy of love in it.. thoroghly enjoyed..n think i blushed too😳😳

By d way i cracked up when i read this line...

who's to say u r normal!!! i swear any guy who dates me is gonna say tht line 😆

my fav line of this update is "he was home"

coz i always belive when u r in love u r just home around him... d word home has sooo much to it... it has d comfort of being urself...acceptance of everything u r.. good n bad.. plus d feelin of being loved n tht u r not alone...just in love wid this line guggu❤️

u dedicated it to me cheapo?? ... feels lik i am important to someone n it feels really really good😃

Glad to ve a sis lik u... thank you my cheapooo🤗

love

ur maggi😃

Edited by ak_maggi - 12 years ago

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ag0502

@ag0502

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

So in love with this beautiful feeling
Thank you

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Wow.

I loved this update..

The protective, possessive side of Arnav..

His chivalry!!😆

The chemistry was just superb!!

Please update soon.

Waiting!!

Thanks for the PM..

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Nice date! He actually hit at the boy at horror house!
Red Roses and passionate kiss!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

that was unique. The pace you've set to their relationship is beautiful. I love how the trust is building, how the comfort is coming in. how he has already fallen in love with her. its absolutely stunning

love
sonia

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