The Other Side(AK).part 3. 6/5/13. pg3

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This story is about struggles of a girl as she tries to adjust to a society she had never been a part of. This is a story of two friends, and how inspite of being opposites, they can give their all for the other. This is a story about two lovers for whom love would never be enough. This is a story of survival when the world has shifted on its axis.

It will be an Angad-Kripa story as always. I will try to keep it a weekly story but no promisesšŸ˜†

Love,
Anshu



1. The Pact Pg 1
2. I am sexy and I know it Pg 1
Note Pg 2
3. Dilemma of an unemployed single Pg 3
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The Pact

Kripa has always been a look before you walk and think before you talk type of person. In the twenty four years she had been on this earth, she had never strayed to the dark side. She believed in straight living.

Her friend Naina was the exact opposite of her. Where Kripa liked living in shadows, Naina thrived in limelight. Kripa loved food while Naina has made avoiding anything which has fat in it her life mission. It was a mystery how they became friends let alone how their friendship sustained all these years through high school to engineering and now finally in MBA.

They had a pact; they will do anything the other desired on their birthdays. Luckily for Naina it was Kripa's birthday today. Unluckily for Kripa, Naina have decided to mark this day in history as Kripa's initiation to clubbing.

When Kripa's mother called asking about their plans for the evening, Naina took the phone from her and mentioned the new Chinese restaurant which she wanted to visit and where she was taking Kripa. Kripa gave her a look but didn't interrupt as she continued talking with her mother. Their parents knew about their pact and Naina was better at lying than Kripa could ever be. When finally Naina handed her the phone her mother asked her to go early and return soon, Delhi was not safe. After the recent increase in crime rates their parents were not too keen when they went out.

Prithvi, one of their few friends here in Delhi was also coming with us. Naina was impulsive but not stupid. Kripa has also invited Yuvraj; the guy Naina had a crush on, also one of their friends. But first there was going to be a cake cutting ceremony organized by the whole class. This was also one of the traditions. The cake cutting and a little party is organized by the class for each of their birthdays. They figured this was the last of their academic years, so fun should be amped to maximum. Naina took Kripa to the canteen where their classmates were waiting for them. It was supposed to be surprise which everybody knew about.

Naina put her hands on Kripa's eyes before they reached the canteen. There was a popping sound and then Kripa was covered with ruffles and sparkles, everybody was singing happy birthday especially emphasizing on happy 24th birthday. When they made to the line many boyfriends to you, Kripa countered them and sang, "Many jobs for me, for the next century," and everybody laughed.

After Kripa was bathed in cold drink, Maggie and Sambhar, finally eggs were broken on her head by none other than Naina. Then she was allowed to approach the cake and blow the candles. The cake cutting ceremony was taken over by the class rep because everybody loved cake and nobody wanted Kripa's messy hands on it.

But Naina had one more trick up her sleeve. She produced another cake and promptly smeared it on Kripa's face. Everybody took two steps back fearing Kripa would try to hug them. Naina was among them. Kripa picked up the remains of the cake the candles on which she had blown and ran towards Naina. When she finally caught up with her, Naina smiled the smile which could melt ice bergs and Kripa was left standing there. Naina finally took pity on her and smeared some of the crme on her nose making everybody laugh. She cut another piece and shared it with Kripa.

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When finally Kripa had taken a bath and pampered herself as every girl should on her birthday, she looked at the dress Naina had put on her bed. It was a simple sleeveless copper dress which would reach just above her knees. Naina knew that this color looked fabulous on her that is why she had taken out this dress; otherwise Kripa would have happily partied in a pair of jeans and a hoodie.

Naina put on the dress, applied kajal and lip gloss and looked at herself in the mirror. She doesn't normally dress for any occasion. Jeans and t-shirt were her to go outfit. But it is rightfully said; clothes make a man or in this case a woman.

While Naina was still in the bathroom, she twirled this way and that and enjoyed how the dress looked from every angle. When Naina entered the room, Kripa was sitting on her bed reading a novel like she always does. Naina quirked an eyebrow, she knew Kripa inside out. She may pretend to be a tomboy, but she was a girl at heart and with little effort she looked gorgeous.

When Naina was finally ready about an hour later, they ventured down the stairs towards the back gate where the guys waited. Naina didn't know the surprise Kripa had in store for her. After the cake trick, Kripa felt she deserved not knowing.

Prithvi and Yuvraj were waiting for them. Prithvi was twirling the keys in his hand, a habit which he didn't try to change even when all of them repeatedly asked him. When he finally noticed Kripa he let out a wolf whistle and Kripa rolled her eyes at his obvious flattery. Naina was talking on her phone with a friend of hers who had called from the US. She was oblivious to Yuvi's presence. When she finally looked up and met his eyes, she dropped her cell phone and had to bend to the floor to pick it up while she glared at Kripa.

After the greetings we headed out to Prithvi's car. Naina had not disclosed the place saying it was a surprise. But Kripa had lived in Delhi for close to two years now, and knew they were going to Nehru Place. When finally Prithvi broke down under Kripa's constant questions and told her they were going to Jinx. It was one of the places where elite of Delhi spent their nights. But couples entry was free on Wednesdays and lucky for them today was Wednesday. Naina ordered vodka with cranberry juice, while the guys settled on bear. When they looked questioningly towards Kripa she gestured towards her glass of sparkling water. She had never had a drink and she didn't plan to start today. The place was nearly empty because it was nine. Naina mentioned people started trickling in by ten and the place was full by eleven, it started emptying around two and closed at five. This implied that they will spend their night here. After about an hour when the guys were convinced that she would not drink and she can drive, they stopped holding back and started guzzling bear like two people who have found a well after a week in desert without water. Kripa ignored them and looked around the place. The entry way looked straight out of the movie with red and gold light spread throughout the corridor to the bar. There was a special section probably for people who can afford to pay for the membership. A membership at this place probably would cost more than a year's salary. Someone was tapping her shoulder, she looked around to find Prithvi gesturing to come with them, Yuvi and Naina were already moving towards the exit with someone she didn't know. She was happy to be leaving; this has come as a pleasant surprise.

When they finally reached the exit, her balloon of happiness was deflated. The person she didn't know was talking to the guard, and Yuvi's and Naina's regular bands which were put on their wrist when they entered were replaced by special bands which she had noticed on the wrists of the people who were sitting in the special zone. Naina dragged Kripa forward and her band was replaced too along with Prithvi's. Prithvi shouted, "Let the party begin" and they once again went inside but this time to the special before entering which the guard checked their bands. Naina told Kripa that the stranger had been Yuvi's and a long time member of this club.

Drinks were free in the special zone, the three of them urged Kripa to at least taste the drink but she declined. Instead she gazed at the people on the dance floor and wondered can a few drinks make people that inhibited that they clung to strangers. Kripa had never felt as such and she wondered would it be pleasant while the feeling lasted. While she was still looking at the dance floor she felt as if somebody was watching her. She ignored it, and continued sipping her orange juice. After fifteen minutes when the sensation had still not diminished she looked around and found herself gazing at the most riveting black eyes she had ever seen.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow Angad Kripa story...
will read and comment dear...
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2. I am sexy and I know it

Kripa was not used to attention. When her eyes connected with that of the stranger's dark eyes, she quickly looked away towards the dance floor again. Her friends were among the people dancing on the floor. Naina was drunk and was clinging to Yuvi. Yuvi was looking pleased about the development. This meant that the crush was not one-sided, Yuvi liked Naina too. She could still feel that those dark eyes were focused on her, so she moved off her perch to the land of madness, the dance floor towards the safety her friends provided.

When Naina saw Kripa approaching she let out a loud cheer and whispered something in Yuvi's ear, who promptly disappeared. Kripa was hugged by Naina and then by Prithvi, then she was asked to follow them. Kripa followed them to their destination which appeared to be the middle of dance floor right across the special zone. The DJ had stopped playing to wish people on their birthdays. This was when she understood where Yuvi had gone.

"This is a message from friends of Kripa, happy birthday to the sweetest friend a girl could ever have. This song is dedicated to the birthday girl, so here goes…"

The song that was playing was I am sexy and I know it. Kripa didn't know where to look and where to hide, while she was frantically searching for such a place her eyes collided with the dark ones again. This time she saw him, and he saw her and raised his drink to her. She was so embarrassed that she hid behind Naina, which turned out to be the worst hiding place because Naina couldn't keep still. She moved off the dance floor towards the washroom and stayed there for fifteen minutes. She knew it was childish and not even a single face out of all the faces out there will remember her, but she just couldn't make herself move.

When finally she came out she went towards the sofa kept beside the bar. There was a place empty beside one of the guys sitting beside his girlfriend who was blind drunk. Because she could not find any other place she went to the special zone where some of the stools near the bar were empty and plopped down on one. She asked for another glass of orange juice and resigned herself to an evening of loud music which will make her eardrums vibrate long after the night was over.

It was two, Naina was still dancing, the guys were still guzzling bear which Kripa passed to them from the special zone and Kripa was on her fifth glass of orange juice. The crowd had started thinning and the music had turned continental. Now they were playing French ballads and English themes. The music has turned softer but the voice has grown louder. Kripa looked at her mobile screen opened Wattpad and started reading a story by one of her favorite authors. She had read just one part when her mobile buzzed. It was a message from Prithvi to deliver more beer. She asked the bartender for the same and handed it over to Prithvi. When she returned to her seat, she was engrossed in the current track of her novel and her head was moving with the music, it was one of her favorite songs by Adele. The special zone was almost empty except for some couples sitting in the sofas for two. Kripa moved towards the bar and was just going to ask for another glass of juice when she noticed that someone was sitting on the stool she had been sitting on for the past three hours. When her eyes travelled up from his legs to his eyes, she found that it was the guy with dark eyes. When she turned to move away, he raised an eyebrow in challenge. Kripa could never resist a challenge, she looked straight in his eyes, but she didn't speak. Don't talk to strangers edict was too deeply ingrained in her to break it now. When he passed her the orange juice which he had ordered she just raised her brows. She could not raise only one, both will rise simultaneously. So it looked more comical than enquiring. The stranger with dark eyes smiled and Kripa eyes moved from his eyes to his lips.

He took advantage of her distraction and moved closer. Before Kripa could move away, one of his hands shot towards the bar caging her between his body and the bar. She made a move to sidle away from the other side but now he trapped her with both hands. The bartender had moved off to serve drinks to some VVIP customer and didn't notice. Kripa was standing and he was sitting. Their eyes were on the same level. The stranger didn't make any move; he just kept looking into her eyes. Kripa was feeling distinctly uncomfortable. She was not used to touching. She only touched her family and friends; and the stranger didn't belong to either of that category. When Kripa pleaded with her eyes to release her, to her surprise did. But he continued looking at her. When he saw she looked surprised, he smirked and finally moved to the other side of the bar.

Kripa was spooked and went to grab her wallet, jacket and friends to return to the hostel. When Naina noticed how pale Kripa looked she didn't protest but asked the guys to call for a taxi, since Kripa was in no condition to drive.

Finally the four of them returned to the hostel and went to their respective rooms. Prithvi will collect the car from the club. Naina looked at Kripa quizzically but Kripa just shrugged. It was not the time for questions; Naina would get to the bottom of it tomorrow. Now she helped Kripa change clothes and draped the blanket around her when she slid under the covers. Naina placed a kiss on Kripa's forehead and wished her happy birthday again before letting her sleep.

They didn't notice that there was a new message on Kripa's mobile from an unknown number.


PS: I have decided to write this one from Kripa's POV. Normally I jump from one to another, but for this Kripa's POV it is.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2
nice...
was that Angad?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Anshu,u r really a genius.Its so wonderful ff.Both parts r mind blowing.Love the way u have described Kripa's character..Celebration of Kripa's birthday in college is very adorable and I like intreaction between kripa and Club starnger I hope thats Angad.Eagerly waiting for next part.

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amazing updates
so kripa is an introvert...lvd her friends..they were too sweet.
i suppose angad has messaged her.
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Brillant strart...soumds promising ...continue soon
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hey dear!
both updates are awesome!!
just love them!:)
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Hmmm' intresting start! Keep it up

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