Arshi SS: The Wrong Name - EPILOGUE - ** Awarded **

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#731

This was a fantassstic story GOF!!
Ummmaahh!!!
U did a gr8 job!
Loved every bit of it!

Thanx for the happy reading moment!

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s-576

@s-576

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#732

awesome...and loved every bit of it...fabulous piece of art...and what thrill ride it was...esp the epilogue!!!

I knew it!!!...As soon as I started reading and when I didn't see Khushi's name come up...I knew you were gone swap that moment with a different couple...like u had done before several times, and each of those several times, you had got me...but the epilogue...

Iol...I was smarter there...but what fun it was...leading the whole way through and then when you see the characters name...you realise it was someone else...

but loved every bit of it...zara hutkay...

absolutely beautiful

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Loved it
Esp shyams frustrations
They were hilarious
Loved how you ended it

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Hey dear, reading your work for the first time but what a lovely read? beautiful and cute story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and there were many places where your sarcastic humour found its mark making me laugh harder. Thats what we need from FF's right? sometime to get lost in a dream world. Your story truly gave me that respite. Thank you. Will check out the other stuff you write and let u know your thoughts.

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Congratulations 👏

A story based on Shyam's revelation, of how Arnav and Khushi together along with the help of others try to get the thorn named Shyam out of their lives with a sense of extreme cleverness and maturity.

What I had liked about this story was the communication between characters and conveying of information at the right place and at the right time to the right person. This is very realistic because in real life you just don't stammer and fail to pass a message but in the TV world that happens more often than not.

The best part about this story (which I won't reveal of course) is how their plan was not what led to his revelation but something else. Now to know what that is, you got to read this one :)

Although this SS was completed a few months back, it is still imprinted in my mind.

Thank you :)

ArHilicious Droolers #5: Ishaqzaade

P.S. Feel free to use this siggy and do mention *Awarded* in the title 😊

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

Wonderful story.

I hate Shyam, he is the master of all villains. Thank god arnav understood his evil intentions and didnt let Khushi go away after all she was his true love. Love Akash and Payal in this story. In the end Anjali also found her life partner and arnav knew.

Superb work

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

I've just read the first chapter yet and I was thinking...it's a sweet, simple story...Arnav and Khushi share a peaceful relationship...it's good that the Shyam angle is not a part of the plot...

and then...

I read the last line and I was like - WHAT THE HELL! 😲

I DID NOT see that coming, especially after how you painted Shyam in good light. So, that was good, skillfully witty writing on your part.

I'm super excited to read the chapters ahead :D

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

lovely story - definitely needs to be awarded -

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Oh God, this SS was just a delightful read, marvelously written!! The communication was key that was missing from the show and GOF, you fulfilled it for us, thank you!! And Arnav trusted Khushi and not Shyam, that was a big plus point!!

I especially loved from chapters 8 onwards -- Arnav's fight back with his PDA and flirting in front of Shyam, the guy is a waco still didn't get it.

In the last chapter, when the scene was being described, I knew it was not A & K, because Khushi was sitting on the bed but in this scene the woman was sitting in front of a dresser. And at that point, it hit me why you have choosen your title for your SS. It's really brilliant!! 👏

I so wish, the show was picturised the way you have written.

I loved the subtle humor in your writing. I have bookmarked your index and will read your other works.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this SS. Thank your for the twists that made it more enjoyable than the show. Only one word comes to mind-- Brilliant

Last but not least, loved the epilogue, the poolside scene with a twist again 😊 and Anjali not wailing for her failed marriage but finding her love.

Cheers