Arshi SS: The Wrong Name - EPILOGUE - ** Awarded **

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amita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

just come across this story

must say its a really lovely and superb story

very well and beautifully written

loved it too much

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arshina09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Plz join this
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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

Amazing loved it.
Ohhh i love u for interrupting aman's moment hahaha revenge taken. Yeahhh

Beautifully you have written this.
Well shyam truly loathed me.
All the best for future ones

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#744

It is the first time I am reading your work and it is brilliant.

Would read your other works.

The best part of this is there is no MU and the characters communicate at the right time.

A twist in the pool scene and it is superb and the con I assumed it is not arhi since the started from the dresser.

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#745

hi GOF!!

i loved the story --- The Wrong Name. it was so nice and lovely experience. loved it.
i loved the story and the characters have that freshness in them that sometimes are lacked in the show. loved Anjali's stand and then the new couples knowing about the culprit beforehand.

Aman--- he is the smart chap and the jadoo & nasha scene in the reverse analogy was best. nice pay-back.
i liked Khushi who discussed the matter beforehand with Arnav and avoided a major misunderstanding. Shyam was such a pain in the ass. thank god he was replaced by the Aman.
and Khushi threatening Arnav with No sugar-free jalebies was so hilarious. i also liked Aakash and Payal's involvement.

u wrote the whole story in such a beautiful way!! loved it...👏

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sabz105

@sabz105

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Posted: 11 years ago

#746

GirlOfFire I came across this SS of yours 'The Wrong Name', and must say it's a really interesting concept!!!!

I really liked the first chapter and I'm in the process of reading the rest of the chapters!!!!

I will try to give you a proper comment from me after finish reading all the chapters including the Epilogue!!!!

Right now I would just like to say you're done a great job, keep it up!!!!!

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chichi220

@chichi220

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Posted: 11 years ago

#747

just read six parts till now loved the story want to kill that disgusting shyam

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

OMG! What a story. I'm glad that I decided to got hrough your index and read this before my exams begin. I knew that this story had been awarded and so was planning to catch up with it soon, but I tell you there couldn't have been a better time for me to have read this piece of beauty...oops I mean parody.

I did read several comments on the way and had expected the general sentiment. Hence I shall be different and say that the plot apart, it is one character that stood apart and was the hero (or jester...as you see it) of the story.

The person is *drumrolls please*

Shyam Manohar Jha

It is expected of readers to hate a character who is essentially a villain but i just coudln't help but laugh at him. All through the story, hatred or detestation wasn't an emotion I felt for him. It was either pity or just mere shaking of head over his supposed plans. Some lines from the story also made me go back to the original Shyam who thoughts that he could have Khushi despite her being the sister of his wife's sister in law. But then, Shyam is Shyam.

Special mention goes to the other characters as well. May it be the understanding nani, the wise Shashi in his cameo, the overbearing Bua (her enthusiasm made me feel as though it was her rishta that had come), the exuberant, shaatir dimaag waali and rok-tok Anjali and of course Akash and Payal who was contented with their low simmering love. They don't know that we will only be satisfied with something blazing!

Arnav and Khushi...a love so pure combined with a fervor so hot that one can't help but incinerate themselves in it☺️ But then that's the USP of your Arnav and Khushi. They set the thread on fire.

And the meaning of the title. I LOLed so hard; never in my dreams I coudl have been able to guess the reference ...that was one hell of a mystery, woman!

Loved reading this story, each and every part that comprised it, the gutter and the non gutter, and finally the suprise in the form of a relationship betwen Anjali and Aman.

P.S. Your updates were also so frequent...kudos to you for that!