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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Nicely prepared for the next part of the story ... In fact your narrative is very good and the writing quite mature ...look forward to the next phase of their relationship..

Thanks for the pm dear.

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Yipeee!!! EXCITED EXCITED EXCITED woh pehli bar jab...la la la

btw Arnav bitwas coming,confirmed??

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

omg, arnav and khushi havent seen each other in three years, awww how did they cope with this separation.
cant wait to see them together again, wonder what will be their forst reaction on seeing each other.

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Beautifull story loved it

Continue soon if u dont mind add me in ur pm list hav prb sending buddy request

Thanks

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45678

@45678

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

amazing update. hope they will meet again.

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Tulipdulip

@Tulipdulip

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Oh oh... Danger is coming...in the form of Shyam!!!!... Waiting to see what happens!!!

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Gunjan

@..Gunjan..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Oh...I have been so late
Commenting on chapter 27 and 28 together they were just superb
Ha...three years leap...Khushi trying to meet Arnav but left disappointed
Waiting for school reunion party... :D
Khushi taking up medical and Arnav taking up IIT ...interesting
Hey...shyam going to propose Khushi !!
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

hayeee reunion update soon

but your no good u made them not see each other for two years baap re

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Sharayu Parayil

@SharayuP

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Superb update😃

jaldi se next chapter post karo pleej😳

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Snehal

@madhumi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

😆😆...again super duper late comment..its kinda late jackpot on mondays for me..hehe

commin back to chaitu 1st n then to update

So..eeeshmart gal...i simply bob my head being appreciatve about the short leap first b4 the long one..ohh..whts d fun if v miss d glimpse of our teenage lovebirds..spreading their wings to take their first eva hesitant flight n up in tht welcoming sky...😳😳😳...loved the way u put it in trms of rollercoaster xperince..similar sentiments..😃

aahh..Enginner..haye...i feel so close to my arnie now..hehe..chalo engineer banane ke baad pehli baar dil se khushi hui...😆

Doctor hun khush ? ...kya baat hai..i know ur once upon a time racing heartbeats hav a bit of share to push u into tht profession..i wonder wht wud happen if someday again those resting hearts wud flutter wt exitement n beat errotically coming face to face again..n to arnav's horror khushi involuntarily wud give away the count per minute their hearts raced...hehe...silly me..pointing out a rofl moment while a much deserved rabbavey..guys dont hit me pilliiej...😆😃

shyam...🤣🤣..u made me go in splits..bichara sale ko pata raha hai..dumbo kahika...hehe..if m nt wrong v share similar sentiments fr d snake...lol

loved their parents role..guiding n giveing hm enough freedom to choose thr path 😊

infatuations n hallucinations...hehe...sachme..IPK has simply gave us into throes of dreamword..n v sway in thr merrily...😆

haha..khushi's dialogue to DM...loved it...oh girl add on few of my prayers if thts d case...🤣

REUNION...hayeee...n mind u chaitu..this time dare u let not my boy have his way with wt tht certain too stubborn KKG..he had had enough of her lukachupi..he's yearning for gawdsakeee...n though u being much partial wt tht KKG...no injustice wt my boy wud be entertained..samjhi tum...😈...

n i strongly demand a glimpse of him in every chapter...i knw thts ur trumcard..but swipe it everytime to cash on my even longer comments...m sure tht sounds too be a enough alluring dEAL chaitu...😉😆

cheers...! <3

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