#6 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 27-33 - Page 78

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Aww deary Di you just stop there..
Gosh this was a roller coaster update..
Just loved it would be less..

Kriya crying and Swayam calling her off and she standing just by his call. Thats an awww moment..
Sharon calling Swaaym for her and the trust between them growing is a treat.
Swayam wanting to be with kRIYA scared to loose her again and him comforting her was cute..
Vicky care for Rey and still worried about the safety of the girls seems so sweet..
I was like thats what it calls to be friends..
Next on tour was Sharon comforting Rey in her Diva style..
Vicky leeting out the secrete and Sharon asking them was superb..

Finally Naina joining in the college meri taraf se tujhe de sari jahppies..I so wanted to see this bond growing..
Naina feeling while joining is practical but never the less why to worry when Kriya is here..
The start of plan A that formed the words of the first proper speech Chabilal is superb but Kriya finding it out and Vicky getting caught with it is even more worth praise..
I loved the instant reaction of him..

Shivams plan I just hope it backfires ob him..Kitna girega yeah ladka now attacking Taani..Gosh...Now guess Kriya will protect her..And with the family thing out did Swayam get a clue of it..

Ab yeah Plan B kya hai...I seriously cant wait a lot...

Take care..<3

awesome update...plan A flopped...kya taani ko -ve side dena ka plan hai????loved kriya's attitude towards shivam...thanks 4 the pm...

Technically m 3rd...
So not bad...at least i am in top 3...😆

ahaa...not breaking your promise...aaj update kar hi diya...wowww that too itna bada...yaaay

it was Just AMAZING...i mean seriously amazing...right from the start till the end...

You included everything in this part
Friendship,love,undestanding,masti,attitude and suspense as well...

Kria swayam - rey sharon
do i have to tell anything about them...i just adore their friendship the most


woahh...
Did i mention m again falling for this swayam...hayee

just loved the swayam kria shivam part...
Now i can say kria is back... :D seriously agar is baar shivam ne kuch kiya toh kria usse kahi ka nai chodegi..

hey wait wats with this family thing?
dont tell me either taani or sharon...any1 of them? U know what am saying rite?
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wow sharon on mission kria ko pataofy...goshh...it just cant get more amazing

hehe...bechare...plan A toh flop hogaya🤣

why sharon is shouting so much...and rey plan B ka naam sunkar bahar kyu nai araha??
Khushi wats cooking in your head?
What is this Plan B?
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But being the devil you are...zaruri hai har baar aise hi point pe khatam karna ha?

"Plan B"

woww..how nice way to end it hai na!
Killing your readers with curiosity of what will happen next...haila...you are Great :x

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Please ab IJD bhi jaldi karde...dying to read its next part...please

cont soon..

awsome update...
Luvd it
do update it soon nd IJD too
thankx 4 d pm

suprrbbb update... Thanxx 4 nt ending naina's role...btw thodi akal cvs ko de de...dis story is infinity tyms bttr...update soon.,,.,thanxx 4 pm

i just simply loved it

awesomeee update👏

i read ur both updates n they r awesome

kriyas mom responsible for this misunderstanding
kriya joined their team at last moment n help them too win
kriya also confessed her feeling in front of angry rey n she try to convinced him, her prob n why she left bt ray away from their
Finally reality was dawned upon him n he realised his mistake

i always want to read kriyam bond nd here u amazingly described it.
She ran into his arms nd he consol her

convo between shivam nd kriya was nice, she warned him to stay away from her family nd frnds
rey, vicky nd sharon r ready to convince kriya nd started their plan

kriya also know about this n they ready with plan B to convince kriya

WOOO!!!!!!!!!this was actually a more positive update!!!Dam dude sharon can get really pissy!!!!you know shes serious when starts using that sailors mouth!!hahaha!!Great job continue soon and pm me when you doo!!!!!!!