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nightfury

@nightfury

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Posted: 12 years ago

#851

that was an awesome ending 😃 all ur previous OSs r too good
i would love to read ur OSs

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

perfect ending.. such a cute girl.. she lists all the relations she knew... very good...

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#853

the convo between the doting dad and his darling daughter was damn cute... arnav's interaction with all four kids warmed my heart with its blend of love and humor... no wonder it took care of his headache far better than any pill would have done... khushi joining in the fun was adorable, no way arnav have said 'no' to her demand for a kiss... he lives for just such opportunities to love his wife... gauging from gouri's reaction, she must be quite used to such displays as she was totally unfazed! all in all, a beautiful picture of loving domesticity!

nice to see that, despite the abundance of love lavished on all the children, none of them is a spoilt brat... what a loving child gouri is! her list to keep her happy, filled with people, clearly indicates that, even at such a tender age, gouri already knows what is truly important in life... the credit goes to khushi and arnav, not to forget their extended loving family! a very satisfactory conclusion

looking forward to reading your take on various scenes... anything you write, we're ready to lap up!

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#854

I can't believe this ended .. But this proved all good things will end one day 😭 and the next will start too 😃
Yes please i am too interested in reading further on ARHI.
Please PM me when you write next...

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#855

Aww, the epilogue was so sweet!

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Pavithra

@alicepuppy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#856

wow.it was really superb...waiting for some more work of yours...

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Archana

@Archu61

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Posted: 12 years ago

#857

I loved the ending but sad to let go ,it felt like they were real in our minds to you did a fantastic job ,please write more stories , don't stop .as you kept the flow , the nuance of the story rt till the end