...Incomplete Life to A Complete One... - Page 2

first of all...
thnxx 4 not discontinuing😃😃😃
love u lotzz

coming 2 the update😆😆
awesum os..
loved it

seriously ... u wrote the poem
it ws awesum...

u xplained the situation incredibly...😛😛
hatzz off😊

loved the bond in the family...😛
i specially loved the name of the kids...😆😆
amazing

love u❤️

i think ki maine bada wala cumment kiya...
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Omg Wowww:-):-) A very Heart touching story dear:-):-) The pain , The Love , The emotions:-) everything was PERFECT:-) You are an Amazing writer dear:-):-) loved it:-) and Thanks 4 the PM:-)

Strawberry girl 🤗
Firstly sorry for commenting so late, You know nah lazy me 😛'now coming to the update
Awesome OS'.It was very interesting'.At first I got confused about the male and the female, it made me think about something else, but den later I felt relaxed as it was Swayam and his daughter, Swaron's pain was quite evident, You have clearly shown how much they missed each other, and the pain their children's were going through was beautifully penned down. Hate Sharon's dad for doing this to Swaron, he was the only reason for their seperation...gosshhh he is such a old fashion minded...arrggghhh
Babes the song I can clearly see that you have put the song in your own words, it was fantabulous, the song gave an awesome description about the pain Swarna was going through, and loved the way you have shown dat at the end Sharon came and completed the song'It was simply an outstanding Piece of work.
My INCOMPLETE LIFE TO A COMPLETE ONE'.!!!!
'And then slept cuddled into each other..felling each other's warmth'.under the blanket !!! And hoping for A BEST FUTURE AHEAD'!!!
This were the best lines'.m glad that you gave this OS a happy ending, Finally the journey of separation came to an end, From a "Incomplete life to a complete one" The title itself was fab.
Mind blowing OS'.Loved it to the core'.Do keep writing more Strawberry 😉
Luv u❤️

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thank u so much for the pm
will unres soon

hmm sis mast os che...😊

n wo party me "maa" wali line's it was really amazing...

hey awesome os yar
swayam live with his daughter nd sharon live with her son bt swayam miss his sharon nd his son nd vice versa
thy die to meet each bt can't meet due to sharon dad
tanmay nd swarna r too cute nd innocent yar
swarna sing song dedicated song to her ma nd bhai n in end she was literally crying
finally sharon came to meet her swayam nd her daughter with tanmay
nd finally family gathered n end of os was fab