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prettypri

@prettypri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

I Lve the understanding between them now...when the fought or shared harsh words the were both hurt. But when Khushi realised she made an effort to set things right.

And they are communicating what they feel..which is strengthening their relationship further.

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Honestly, if this was a book, I would've started reading from the last page, and I am not kidding!

I have been waiting, and wondering if this coupe would ever get a break? From Arjun's ignorance and Anjali's attention, to Arnav's mother's partiality... will they ever get normalcy in their life? I feel bad for them, I honestly do. I really wish this Suraj and Viren's skeletons will be out soon. I am honestly annoyed with them.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

loved the update..Arnav, Khushi's talk & communication was very well written..the emotions were perfect portrayed...really nice...keep up the good work going...please do update soon..waiting eagerly for the next update...😊

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

congrats on the new thread
thank god they talked to each other and she told him about Khan

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

When can we have the next update? please??

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emistry

@emistry

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Oh man Just finished reading the all the parts!!! Oh man! You have a wonderful story here! I know this is cliched.. but You have me HOOKED.. I have been reading this instead of studying for my GMAT... and after finishing this part.. I still feel it was time well spent!

I Love the dynamics of each relation that is portrayed in this story, no one ever knows the entire truth! Ohh Politics at home and in the workplace! Love it!

I am soo looking forward to the next part!

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mandhruv

@mandhruv

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

It is an awesome story kalyani... i read all parts in one day and was very thrilled.

Manju

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Great update pleased that they are talking more about their problems

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Tanzila.alam

@Tanzila.alam

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

I couldn't find thread and finally i found it, i am sooo happy😃, loved the update and could pm the next updates plzzz

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

~Edit~

Arnav must be jumping with joy, naa ? He is generally the insecure and jealous one, always tries to mask it and then has crazy sex. Not that Khushi is insecure, yet her reaction to Sheetal must have thrilled him to no end. And Khushi thought it was only Arnav who was territorial? :D :D

Evil begets evil, indeed. Viren has found his perfect match in Sheetal, he continues to desire Khushi while Sheetal is "disrobing Arnav with her eyes". Khushi does call her Chudail, but what I liked about the update was how you sketched Sheetal and Viren. They were not just uni-dimensionally negative characters. Viren, while a pervert is insightful and perceptive about Khushi and the relationship she shares with Arnav; and Sheetal, while unapologetic about her lifestyle, is definitely no hypocrite and is very practical.

Hm, Arnav picked up Avni without leaving a chocolate for Kalindi? Haw! 😲

I love scenes with kids, especially Arnav and the kids. Also Arnav and Indira. And the last scene was a treat, so cute :D

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago