Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Every episode of this FF is a gem...loving it

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Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Never in a million years had I imagined Aakash - Arnav and Payal-Khushi having tht conversation...😆

I really do hope tht Payal and Aakash get their suhagraat now... Poor souls have been waiting for a while...😉

Loved it!

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

wow an amazing update
lvd it

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harsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Loved the update !!
I really had a smile on my face all through the update.
Loved Arnav - Khushi's flirtatious talks and teasing.
Payal is more eager than Akash . Lol..

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

😃

Just loved the conversation Arnav and Khushi had with their siblings ... 😆

the passion between A and K is amazing ... with A not giving up any chance

to flirt with K ... 😳

finally the interview is over and she has been hired ... 😆

Thanks ... loved it ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

the teasing banter and arnav and khushi coming to terms with their feelings for each other, thanks to some unwitting prodding by akash and payal was fun... payal, more than akash being desperate for the wedding night was hilarious... looks like nothing evads anjali's sharp eyes! having noticed the effect khushi has on arnav, wonder what she;s going to do to move that relationship to its fimal destination! arnav's naughty moves creating a maelstorm of desire in khushi was hot! quite a unique interpretation of a job interview, methinks!

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

I read the chapter first and then saw that it's by you. Your usual work is serious so this came as a pleasant surprize.Shows your strength as a writer.

Oh God how much do they want each other. All flirty. Too much desire.

Payal Akash are funny, enjoyed reading about them.

Anjali is surely having fun seeing Arnav with Khushi.

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

ArShilicious!

Man this was fun at places and I re read at places to understand the real meaning basically read between the lines!!

Lol Payal and Akash chupe rustam nikle! What and all they think and talk man!

Phew Anjali you smelled the cheese now make sure tom and jerry become one!!

She's hired in all sense aww!

Wedding bells do I hear them?

Cheers

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Seeta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#849

A really cute update,esp the sibling interrogation... Khushi is not the least bit afraid to confront her feelings for Arnav and we have a overly eager Payla LOL... Arnav has finally told Khushi that she is hired and I loved the kissing scene...