Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

From the start to the end you just didn't make this update about Arnav and Khushi. You've made it all about Arnav and Khushi and their desires, longing, double meanings, touch and love.

They like to corner each other don't they?

He wants to give her romance? Well you gave us plenty.

The Sheetal dialogue and Payal and Aakash's talk with ArHi about what they feel for each other and their SR completely cracked me up 😆

I absolutely loved the update. You captured their inherent attraction and talks of marriage hinting towards a possible future very well.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Both sisters sure know how to take charge and get what they want! Is the cat and mouse game ending? Are they ready to admit their feelings? Or just giving into the passion. Great update!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

my smile was visible. you are the master of acute observation

the siblings' conversation supposedly about small things but still addressing big issues.

very well done

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Once again an amazing update

awkward conversations with the brother and sister

both khushi and arnav wanting to finish their 'interview'

arnav openly nearing, touching khushi but luckily everyone was busy apart from the bride and groom i guess which must have caught them for them to bring up this topic

and khushi dragging arnav into a room to 'avoid' another coversation and not because she wanted to spend some uninterupted time with arnav

last part was great

and it was surely and ArHi-filled update

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

An awesome update dear...😛
Paayal is eagerly waiting for her suhaagraat...😉
for Arnav and Khussi..."aag toh dono taraf hai baraabar lagi huyi.."

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

loved the update Asr flirting and teasing Khushi was just wicked cute and then their sibling conversation was totally nut and cute Payal is afraid Akash did not want her and arnav and Khushi one room hope they remember its payal and akash sr and not theirs loved the update beautifully done

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

That was so intense and passionate!!

I loved this Arnav and Khushi! Payal and Akash were too sweet!

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mssj

@mssj

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

i loved that this update was mostly about arnav and khushi with a little bit of akash-payal.

awesome update. great job :)

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Arnav Khushi flirting..wow..

Payal & Akash both are nervous and excited for their first night.. Finally they will get to do what had been halted last time..

Arnav, Khushi and romance..😳

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: nikita_88
Awesome update!

I loved the siblings conversations and the way you flicked between the two...

Finally Khushi has been hired lol and you wrote out the kiss lol...

I can't wait for the next part

awesome chapter

loved the conversation between the siblings

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