Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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tdotz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Just came across this. Amazing work girls. I personally think the characters are still intact right from the start and that is not an easy thing to do. The last two were the funniest tho awesome job

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rabiiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Hilarious 😆 like everything!!! You have a great sense of humor Emma!

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Iyaadha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Really awesome, funny and well written for sure one of the best ones 😊

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Raka...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

What a great read! Amazing update, waiting for the next...

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GirlOfFire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Chapter 19

I had a big silly grin on my face as I read this one!! Ah! we're back in Delhi.. not lets have some HEAT already!!

Poor Akash and Payal - and now SHEETAL ?! The Gupta sisters are plagued by interruptions and bad planning!!

And Shyam's Daiyya Ho... OMG - How cute is that??

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Aysha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

amazing update

i love how khushi is hekping payal and akaash get their suhaag raat but poor akaash fell asleep with shyaam singing daiya ho to him

anjali's face brightened instantly when she heard khushi is on her way to delhi, to chote

khushi is finally in delhi, let the shart begin

arnav is very attune to khushi being in his surroundings and aww he missed her

it was only a matter of a few minutes before he kissed her, but also reminded her of their flirting bet

and khushi is showing her jealous side, and now she has met the girl in question too sheetal

looking forward to the next update

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snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Awesome update love how Khushi just seems to have out aside the fact that Payal and Akash eloped so that she can go to Arnav. Poor Payal she's going to have a lonely night in the guest room hope she makes Akash pay.

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

emma fabulous job...

Seriously Payal being this desperate for her harry puttar ji.. hahahahah

she ended up putting chamili oil on anji.. the same anji whose husband made akash sleep with Daiya ho.. it is so hilarious..

Sheetal's entry... fun times..

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Wow a brilliant and outstanding update, you bought more than a smile to my face, I was laughing reading the whole update it was so funny and hilarious. Payal's plan to have her suhagraat and akash's planning was fabulous, but Akash fell asleep and poor Payal was left waiting. So khushi remembered the churail that answered the phone, can't believe it was sheetal. Loved the cabin scene between Arnav and Khushi that was fantastic and so sweet, can't wait to see how Khushi flirts with Arnav. A outstanding addition to the collaboration, please continue soon xx