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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...loved it...
and love d song selection =D
update soon... =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shriya, sorry for the late comment my dear.
Coming to the update , it was fab. The 2 dance seq were superb. N that dil se re , god! My heart was throbbing, i feared its kriya coz u gave the sentence that nly 3 persons knew the dance so i feared.bt thank god it was swaroon n last part , awwe shar is such a cutie pie in this ff, very understanding(unlike in the show). Now waiting for romantic valentine night of taarey
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!cant wait fo d next part.plz update soon dear..n ho sake toh pm me...plzz-4
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read Chapter 9:
Rey was scared whre Taani had gone..Aww... caring and possesive Rey...
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am so so so so so so so sorry for the lack of reply but college has been so busy, I only have this weekend to breathe. But amazing job on your chapters I enjoyed it very much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey shriya ! just read ur ff !!! itz awesum yr ...i m nt able to send u buddy request , plz add me ... n do pm me wen u update !
continue soon...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry sorry sorry guys
i know aab aap sab bolenge ye kitane dino baad aayi aur roj ka sorry sorry chalu kar diya
but guys trust me mein march se free hu but mera dabba pc it crashed n mera pura ff usme complete tha then abhi ek week pehele i got a new lappy n mujhe firse pura ff likhna pada sorry guys but i promise aap logon ko aur wait nahi karwaungi...
ill post the epi jaldi now abhi ek part deti hu thoda editing baki hai bas 8:30 tak update kar dungi
pakka wala promise...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys luk meine update kiya hai pls pls pls
guys apne friends ko inform kar do
i mean pm bhejdo aur bolo ki ye ff firse chalu ho
gaya...
ok guys ab no bakwas!!here you go
aur ha padhke comments jaror karna i know aap
mujh pe chillane wale ho par
koi gal nahi ji mein sun loongi aakhir aapno pe hi
toh gussa hote hai
sanaya meri behen i know tu mujh pe gussa hai
maf kar de na yaar last time pls

recap...
ta:yup bye bhabi!!
have a GOOOD night!!!
she intensionally stressed the word good to tease her bhabi...
sharon blushed
rey:chale sweetheart!
and then went near her and whispered in her ears
ab aur wait maat karao...u know na duriya bardash nahi hoti...and smirked
taani came out of the trance stil blushing
ta:hann ok rey chaliye...

chap 13

@ taareys

rey: shit yaar ye swayam bhi na!!
ta: kya hua rey?? aab kya kiya mere bhai ne??
rey:aare woh wapis kyuon aaya itani jaldi
ta:rey aap kya bol rahe ho ??
acha hua na bhai wapis aa gaye...m so happy..
rey:haan par aab tum mere sath nahi rahogi na!
ta:rey!! AAP bhi na!
rey:kya aap bhi na? taani thik hi toh keh raha hun


(he pulled her towards him
she kept her head on his chest)
ta: rey chale sone mein bohot
thak gayi hu!
rey:hmmm...chalo

(they both went to their room
hand in hand
when rey opened the door of their
room taani was overwhelmed by the sight in front of her...

there where nice beautifull candels lit everywhere...
the room looked very beautifull in candel light
red rose petals made their way to the
bed making a small pathway for taani to walk on...
the room was filled with nice and
intoxicating fragnance of roses and
lilacs it smelled nyc refreshing n she loved that fragnance
ta:thank you so much rey!!

(she hugged him tight he had a huge smile on his face. smile of happiness,
smile of satisfaction,smile which said how much he loved her
a smile which showed his selfless
love for her he hugged her tight
back with same passion n love)
rey:my princess...kaisa laga??
ta:bohot acha...
nahi bohoht bohot bohot acha!
rey! u r the best!! app ke jaisa iss
world mein aur koi nahi hai! no one
n m so lucky ki mujhe aap mile!!
rey:bas bas kitani tarif karogi??
acha ek aur surprise hai!
ta:ek aur??wow!
kya hai rey batayi ye na!
rey:umm...batau kya??
ta:rey! u know na i hate surprises!
mein wait nahi kar sakti!
rey:haha my sweetheart! ye lo

(he handed her 2 bags)

ta:ye kya hai??
rey:khud hi dekh lo!!
she took the bags and opened the
first one she finds a big box she
carefully opens the gift wrap but our
rey! use toh aab wait nahi ho raha tha so he himself took tthe bag
box from her tore the giftwrap and
gave back the box to her!
she shook her head at him while
taking the box and opened it and
there was her first surprise a long
flowing satin silk red gown the one
which she had liked infact loved the
very first tym she had seen it in the
shop...but it was months ago even
before rey and her wer together! but
she had not bought it not that she
didnt have enough money coz she
was the
co-owner of shekhawat industries!
daughter of one of the most richest
industrialist in the country or you
would rather say world! with her
brother as the other co-owner!
it was known only to two people of
the gang which ofcourse had to be
sharon and rey and they
had sweared them never to spill this
pretty little secret of theirs!
because they both brother and sister loved
to have a simple and sober lifestyle
rather than the luxirious life with
those bodygaurds following you
where ever you go like a tail or the
servents saying maam n sir even if
they are older to you they even denined their parents to have a driver
they had even denined to have a luxurious cars like jaguar or the bmw
but their parents
had insisted them to have it! but as
this two sibblings wanted to keep
their status a secret swayam always
opted for a cycle to college n taani
went by a cab or taxi but lately with rey!
she remembered the day...


>>>>FLASHBAACK<<<<


whole of the gang was at mall for
party they had to attend
girls where in the shop where taani was shopping too!
there she had seen this dress! she
was passing buy the racks where
she saw it put up on a manequine
she was amazed by that dress she
was staring at itin awe like a child
does when it sees a sparkling object
this went unnoticed by everyone except rey
he saw her staring at it admiring its
beauty! that time he knew that he
had fallen for her..he knew it that he loved her irrevocably n unconditionally!
so wen everyone was done n they left
he had stayed back n bought the gift
for her! he had deceided it that he will gift the dress to her on valentines
day! and before that he had to
propose her n clear all the missunderstandings between them

>>>>FLASHBACK ENDS<<<<


ta:wow rey ye dress mein kitana
pasand karti hu! infact i loved it...

(he cut her)
rey:the first time you saw it !right??
ta:haa...par aap ko kaise pata?? ek
minute...matlab aap tab se...
rey:hann taani infact usse kahi pehele se
tumse pyar karne laga tha...
jab tum us shiritating ke saath thi na
tabse...
i love you tanni...

(she hugged rey..)

ta:i love you and only you rey! sorry
rey meine aapko itani taklif di aur
dard
rey:oh nono...taani bas abb no rona
dhona..aaj valentines day hai yaar
koi sad day nahi!

aur ab toh mujhe sirf itana pata hai ki
u r with me and i dont want anything
elz...chalo aab jaldi se woh dusra
box kholo

(she opened the next box it was quite
small as compared to the first one it
was a rectangular navy blue colour
velvet box...
as she opened it there was a silver
chain with a crystal heart hanging
that heart of daimond was beautiful and
then who doesnt like daimonds??
she took the heart in her delicate
hands gently n turned it the heart shimmered n made beautiful rainbow
patterns by the candle light...)

ta:wow! rey aapne ye...

(he put a finger on her lips and bent
forward to peck her cheek...she
shiverred n closed her eyes...

he then took the neckless from her
hand n went behind her he pulled
her close as he pulled her she came
crashing to his chest backwards he
held her belly...
he then placed her hair on one side
of her shoulder as he placed them
his hand toched her back which
made her knees go weak...he started
placing wet kisses on her shoulder
and back when he came to neck
he broke the trail of wet kisses and
put the neckless around her neck
...then he kissed her shoulder soft
wet kisses where driving her crazy
she leaned on to him for support as
her kness wer giving away...
he held her closer...
they stayed there for wat smeed like
hours...they slept peacefully after
their valentines celebration n love n
affection shared by them...

morning @ taareys...

she woke up with another day...
she kissed his forehead gently
deciding to wake him up little later as it was sunday...
she sat up n her bed n had her usual
conversation with her krishnaji...she
got down from bed n went near the window...she was welcomed by
soothing wind ...the warm sunrays
were blocked by her patite figure
casting her shadow on sleeping rey

she had noticed that the rays where
disturbing him...as his smooth and
innocent face had a frown on it as
soon as her shadow fell on his face
the frown dissappered n he lapsed back into sweet sleep...
soon a beautiful smile adorned her
pretty face she turned back to look
out the window how she loved to do
that in orning the morning scene always calmed her down...
she smilingly welcomed the soothing
morning breeze n warm but delicate
morning sun, the sweet melody of
lovebirds was enlighting her mood...she juststood their
remembring her
stay here with reys she was
supposed to move back to her place
today she remembered the day when
he said I LOVE YOU to her in so many words...
she remembered her fear of revealing
their relationship to swayam- her
typical indian possessive bhai but they had told it finally she belived it
was because of krishnaji that they wer able to do it at right situation...


ohk so here i end guys aab i know ki aap sab bolenge ki kitani choti update after such a long time...but guys mein kya karu decide kiya tha ki pura ff likh ke jaldi jaldi post karungi aur meine ff likha bhi tha par ye stupid computer ka baccha crash hogaya meine file recover karne ki bohot koshish ki par nahi ho paya i know ye update itana khas nahi hoga kyuon ki pehele wala bohot acha tha ye toh meine yaad karte likha hai..hush...par phir bhi comment n like jaroor karna aur mujhe maaf karna pls last tym guys agli baar kabhi aisa nahi karungi...
sanaya meri behena maaf karde!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaaye me first...😆
waise toh main naraaz thi
for d late update but koi nahi jaane do..
Luved dis romantic update...
b d flashback was too..
update next part soon n
chotta update nahi chalegi..😉
Tc..
Edited by Lachu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yayyy, u finally updated, omg rey is soo romantic n sweet!! loved the update!

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