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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanchi..



Sacchi...
Yayy...!!!!dinka chika dinka chika...
Majja toh fir iska update to mein kab se wait kar rahi thi...
Finally aaj milega...


yesh. . . . . . . .finaly aaj mil jayega iska update. .me super happy. . . . .
Bus jaldi se raat ho jaye :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kanchi. .yeh mera last post as a rockerzs. .finaly mai sizzler banne wali hu. .uuhhhuuu. . .:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari


yesh. . . . . . . .finaly aaj mil jayega iska update. .me super happy. . . . .
Bus jaldi se raat ho jaye :-D




Tune bola ki di iska update dene wali hai...
Tabse mein wahi wait kar rahi hu ki raat kab hogi aur fir hume update milega
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Posted: 12 years ago

Guys sorry for having you wait so long..it was just that i was too lazy😃..no lying to you all 😆

And upar se for this SS, the plot has lost it's flavour since Taani's exit from the actual show.. so i would be wrapping this up soon..ab ye sequel..sequel nahi raha😭😆

Anyways here's the next chapter! Enjoy..do like and comment..
chapter 5
1 month later-

The gang was chilling in the canteen and discussing everything but nothing.. The last couple of weeks had been a roller coaster ride for them
with kriya and rey's constant fights which threatened to grow worse, but as if magically one fine day the storm seemed to have died down..and what followed had left each of them shocked beyond imagination!
'Yeh Rey kaha reh gaya?' questioned sharon.. 'haan Taani toh idhar hi hai..phir..' asked swayam.. Upon having all eyes on her, Taani just rolled her eyes and gavd them a 'whatelse' look.. And as if on que, Rey made his appearance followed by an irritated Kriya.
All shook their heads knowingly as they knew what was coming up. Kriya came right up and sat beside Swayam, and Rey went ahead and pecked Taani on her cheek.
'Tum jhelti kaisi ho isse Taani?!' asked Kriya..her voice clearly indicated that once again Rey had managed to get on her nerves!
'Meri gf hai..ofcourse jhelegi! But as my besties tumhara aur Sharon ka bhi toh yehi farz banat hai na?!!' Rey replied seriously..but ended up laughing again, making Kriya want to smack him hard!
After Taani had asked Rey to confront Kriya almost a month back, Rey had decided to do so and so as not to stretch things too far with Kriya.
His earler attempts had went futile, with Kriya giving him a cold shoulder all the while. But Rey had'nt given up and on one such situation, he had got Kriya all to himself in the RH. And there went the confrontation..Rey lost his temper and asked her an explaination for her behaviour inspite of the fact that it was she who had left him!

Fortunately, almost at the same time Kriya had got her facts clear and realized that there was no point on stretching things too far. Thought Kriya did'nt give out the complete truth, she expalined to Rey in brief that she never wanted to break his heart that night and it was just the circumstances that had forced her in doing so.
Rey had felt the urge to know more, but on second thoughts he decided to leave the past behind and start afresh! From then all had witnessed the blooming friendship of KriYaansh and were also happy at the thought of beginning afresh with Kriya.

In the beginning Taani did feel a little insecure to see kriya and rey's budding friendship, as she never expected them to get back ever again (even as friends). But then she too overcame her insecurities and was glad that Rey had made it clear to Kriya that he had moved on.
Taani too had developed liking for Kriya as time passed,and she admired her as a person letting go of all her frustations...
In this short span of a few weeks, all had succeeded in letting go of the past and starting a new bond of friendship.

'God guys..ab toh stop fighting..! isse accha toh pehle hi tha ..' Taani joked and tried to stop them both from getting at each ithers throat.
All grew silent all of a sudden..as till now no one had talked about that day again, but seeing this as an opportunity to let go and overcome everything..all took the matter lightly.

Kriya and Rey too forgot their fight for a while and were glad that all the misunderstandings were over for good. Though at times each of them feel like seeking answers to some unanswered questions, at the end they decide to just leave it upon time. As all were sure that one day, when their comfort level grows even more with time..they would get answers to each of their quieries, not that it would matter..or would it?
Rey puts an arm around Kriya and moves towards Taani and Sharon and does the same...'The three most important girls in my Life..'he says whie side hugging all three. Swayam joins him the next instant and tells 'Mine too'... Soon the rest of the group joins them and they all share a friendly group hug!

'Now that we all have reached so far..Why not celeberate our Friendship! Our oneness! Let's party tonight guyss!' said an excited Vicky
'Yupp...Let's partyyy !!' the rest of the gang agreed with him.

***

It was around 7 in the evening, and as planned the guys had already reached the venue. They had decided to party in one of the most famous clubs of Mumbai..'Tryst'.
It had been almost 20 minutes since the guys have been waiting but there was still no clue of the girls. Swayam was about to call Sharon when all of a sudden a car came and stood right infront of them. It was the covertable owned by SHaron!
The guys gave a sigh of relief knowing that they wont be having to wait anymore..

The next instant, Sharon along with simmi, rinni, aashi and vishaka made their way out and as usual the guys were again swept to a different world upon seeing the beautifully decked up girls right before them!
But Rey was growing impatient with every passing second as neither his gf or his newly found bestie had reached the venue yet. The rest were back to their senses by now and were grinning at Rey's condition. They decided to get inside and wait for the other two..but Rey was adamant and dint allow the rest either to enter inside.

The wait came to an end atlast as They saw Kriya's Ford pull up in the parking lot.. And in no time Taani was out and went ahead and hugged Rey. She was dressed in a golden coloured halter and looked gorgeous..Rey pecked her cheeks and complimented her to which she blushed.
And on the other end Kriya was done parking the car and finally made her way towards the gang. The gang stood besotted as she slowly made her way towards them.. She was dressed in a deep red dress that hugged her curves in all the right places.. it came a little above her thighs. She had minimum makeup on and the dark eye makeup just accentuated her delicate features.
She approached them and it was only when she waved her hands before them that the guys came back to their senses! While the girls could'nt hel but giggle whereas rinni and simmi smacked their respective partners for ogling shamelessly at Kriya.

Rey took a step towards Kriya and said, 'I swear if i was'nt committed...' he stopped in between and again checked out Kriya from top to toe.. Kriya just smiled at his comment whereas he recieved a smack from Taani..
Finally all made their way inside all ready to have a gala time..
All of them directly went towards the dance floor and had the time of their lives! After about an hour, the music turned into a romantic number and all the couples filled the dance floor.
This time both Aashi and Kriya went and sat in one of the nearby couches and ordered some drinks for themselves..
In no time some guys approached them for a dance but Kriya kindly rejected them, whereas Aashi decided to have some fun and went ahead with one of the guys.

It had been about 10 minutes and that was when both Swayam and Rey almost at the same time saw Kriya sitting all by herself, though a lot of guys looked ready to throw themselves on her.
They excused themselves for sometime and approached Kriya almost at the same time.. Both gave a knowing smile to each other and in an instant offered Kriya their hands. On having no other option, Kriya gave each of her hand to both and the trio made their way towards the dance floor.
Taani and Sharon relaxed for a while and smiled at the caring attitude of their guys towards Kriya.
Soon all were tired and wasted even before they knew. Just as a parting thought all went towards the drink counter ... and to quench their thirst gulped down a series of shots.. The guys soon realized that it was alcohol and stopped after three shots but girls went ahead and had 4!
By the time they reached out..all the girls were really tipsy and the guys were trying their level best to control each of them. Without any further discussions, all decided to head home. The alcohol were slowly taking its toll on the guys too, but they were able to handle it better than the girls.
All went home with their respective partners and it was only Swayam , Rey, Taani, Kriya and Sharon left behind. Swayam volunteered to take all the girls home but Rey said that he would drop Taani and Kriya.
'But Rey..tu toh jaanata hai na ki you dont handle alcohol well..and in no time it will take it's toll on you!' Swayam argued..but Rey was adamant.
Finally Swayam gave up and said..' Theek hai..but you take kriya as her home is close to your's but Taani ko main hi leke jaata hoon as she stays with me only na..so it will just be double work for you!'
Rey tried to argue but the sterness in Swayam's voice made things quiet clear and both parted ways.
Rey somehow managed to take Kriya to the drivers seat, while she continued pulling his cheeks and hair..she was totally drunk! Rey smiled at her cute behaviour all through the drive.
They were half way down the way,and it was then that Rey too started behaving a little awkward. The alcohol had taken it's toll on him too..He drove without caution, but luckily there was very less traffic.
And Kriya just cheered all the while provoking him to drive even more faster!

In no time both had somehow mananged to reach Kriya's apartment in which she stayed alone. Rey got out somehow by himself and also helped Krriya in doing so. His senses were very dim but he tried to stay as composed as he was capable of.
After a lot of struggles both finally reached Kriya's flat...they were giggling for no apparent reason and was a view to watch!
As soon as they reached her bedroom.. Kriya fell right onto the bed, taking Rey with her too. By now even Rey had completely lost his senses..
And as soon as their bodies brushed each other, even before they could contemplate what was going on..they were kissing each iother senselessly.

The mere contact of their bodies had created havoc inside them..Rey deepened the kiss and pressed himself further onto Kriya's petite form. In no time both were busy undressing each other...and though not in their senses were unknowingly indulged passionately into each other..
One thing lead to the other before the final closure... At last both drifted to a peaceful sleep, unaware of the storm that was waiting ahead for them.

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p.s- for those who dint take the previous chapters well, this SS required the current plot d3 was based on before Taani exited. And it would be pointless not to show TR closeness, because i personally really dont think that Rey would just accept Kriya so soon even after knowing the truth.. that would be like again degrading his character.
Sorry for the typos..could'nt recheck.😊
Love,
Fida
Edited by aTTiTude_dIvA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reswa. . .
Fida di. . .love u zada wala. . .
Unreswa. . . . . . . . . . . .
Update read kerke m totaly SHOCKED. . .
I mean seriously,
yeh kya tha???
KR best friends with in a month. .goshh . . .n gang including dat T r totaly ok with it. .le,yeh toh kuch aur hi ho gaya. .bt me loving it. .
Well maine bahut part plainly ignore kiya as m nt at al intresetd in them. .bt,bt,bt m so so so happy. .i surly like dis track of ur's ... Haiyee. . .i love dis KR. .friendly,sweet. .bt sachhi kahu,i love Love-hate KR,just the way they were shown in RMT in starting. .bt yeh wale bi mast hai. .
Gang celebratng,n all drunk. .
KR k beech kya-kya ho gaya. .ohh noo. .abb kya hoga. .haiyeee, mera toh dil nt dhadking. .bus plz dnt let them regret it. .jaldi se nxt part update karo di. .
Me egarly waiting 4 it. .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
amazing update
loved it
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...😃
wow, taani convinced rey to confront kriya...😊
continue soon and thanks for the pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u update

i th8 u forgot

coming to the update

lovely described everything

kriyaansh part was fabulous

pls update next part soon

thanks for d pm

pls update ur other work

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Posted: 12 years ago
This chapy was super awesum di. Loved it. Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i only loved the last part
want to kne ab aage kya hoga
and just cant tolerate T R

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