ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#4 *EPILOGUE*

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Aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

for update 44:

😭😭 Why? I ask why?😭 Why the hell she is gone??? 😭 I can't believe what she has stated as reason?😭 Shakti is not like this!😭 There is some catch!

I literally cried while reading it! Seeing Kunwar and Shama in misery😭!Oh Manu! You made me cry!

Which success she was talking about????? Seeing her and Shama's bond, Shakti can never ever think of her career over Shama! Leave Kunwar but how come she can leave Shama? There is something more to it!😭

I hate you Shakti Mohan Sharma! Oh God! these words had so much pain!

Manu you succeed in pouring life into words! They seems to portray emotions now!

The way he was searching for her...oh man! I was crying!😭
And while reading that video message part, My burst up totally! 😭

Manu! Congrats for surpassing every limit of write awesome! You nailed it!🤗

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Aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

For update 45:

She actually did it! She left him for very reason she mentioned! Sorry to say but she failed me! I love you Manu for writing humans not Gods! I loved how you wrote her mistaking human but not mahan types! *But I still think that there is more to it" She has some more reason to take this hard decision!*My optimistically typical instinct*😆

Shakti is back in town! After four years, How many times she'd died in these 4 years! How much guilt, loath she must have felt all these years! 😭

That flashback where she danced! Ah-mazingly written! You were fab in writing dance! It was treat to read it!😳

I didn't get one thing! Why she needed to be away for finding her passion for dance! I mean Kunwar or Shama never been an obstacle in way to her dreams! I wanna know her side of reasoning!🤔
Pain and how much she misses him, it came so beautifully!😳

I am feeling pain and congestion in my chest from last two updates! manu! You really are a exceptional writer! it's hard to make me feel that way! I don't even feel that much intensity while watching something that amazing!😳

Kudos to you!👏

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago

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Aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

For update 46:

I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! Shaku can't be going for her dreams! It was cancer!😭 Oh my poor baby! She suffered alone in her most vulnerable state! Shaku! 😭😭

That much sacrifice! I really hope Kunwar understands!😭

Asha! She was as per her name! Her words had depth and answers to all questions!

Shakti is all ready to go back and meet her loved ones! Her family would forgive and understand in minutes but I am doubtful if Kunwar could understand or not! He will simply fill with pain and distrust that why she didn't let him take care of her in cancer! Why she took the decision alone! Oh my boy!
I am feeling bad for both of them! 😭

As always it was superb Manu!👏

love ya! 🤗

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Aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

For update 47:

Nothing waits for you! *sighs*

She wished of a disaster and it came true! I don't blame Kunwar to marry Charlie! I tired hating him but I couldn't! I can't blame him! I think a lover didn't let down the love but a father grew up to sky to give his daughter a perfect weather! 😳

I felt bad after knowing how a decision has made their life irreparable! Shakti's decision to disappear and Kunwar's decision to move on for Shama! What a game of fate!
Now they are that fr that nothing can make them come closer! I think Shama can! I think MANU can! yes! Get the hint and make these two restless souls find peace! Make them once again ArSha! Enough of suffering for these two!😭
I kinda feeling that I am in some layered self of mine where I am debating with myself over what just happened in update! 🤓

Manu! You have taken the story to another level! It's my favorite story! No doubts why! It gives me growth! 😳

Jeete raho beta! Live long my favorite writer!
You are a blessing to me!🤗

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Crazy4AshVik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Kunwar-Shakti's feelings were brilliantly portrayed...I was actually sobbing throughout the whole update...and the song was just...Perfect!

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: Sunitha_Swayam
Lovely updt...thnx for d Pm

Thanks 😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: kriyansh_Alisha
superb...
the feelings n pain were written beautifully...
loved it...
thnx for pm...

Thank You Alisha 😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Mania di. . . .
Yeh kya tha??? . .
ArSha ki meeting ke liye i was super excitd ,
bt,what was dis?? . . .
Amar moved on with charlie. . .damm. . . .
He dosnt want shakti in his life coz charlie ne usse thoda sa gyaan de diya. . . . . .
Hawww. . . .atleast he wud hav listnd to shakti 1ce and wud have askd her tat y did she left him and went. .
OMG. . . .
I realy cnt she shakti like dis. . .
So broken so sad . . .
While reading the song wala part,i realy had tears in my eyes. . . .
Damm. . .shakti behosh. . . . . .
OMG. . . .abb aage kya hoga?? . . .
Bt,di realy awsome update. . .bt,it was super se bhi upper wala sad. . . .
Mania di plsss pls pls. . .
ArSha ko jaldi milwa do,
i cnt see them like dis. . .
Pls nxt part jaldi se jaldi,i mean super jaldi update kerna. . .
M super excitd to see wat hapns nxt. . . .
Update soon. . . . . . .

Awww...thank You so much Madhu
I really can understand wht u feel now
but trust me things will be up soon 😃

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: Meesocute
Omg it was supre awesome update...how much i was waiting fo dis d update of this...
It was very emotional...
The shakti's sadness was well portrayed...
Pls i can't see shakti crying more...
Pls pls pls...update fast can't wait

Thak You
will do 😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: rhu90
thanks 4 the dedication...coming to the update...

mujhe pata tha aisa kuch hone wala hai...but amar's marriage shocked me...shakti behosh hogaya ...ab kya honge????emotional update tha...pls update next part asap...

Amar is not yet married dear
Will do 😊