ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#4 *EPILOGUE* - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome and Beautiful Update...Loved it...Waiting for the next Update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
FABOULOUS

the song,da way u portrayed emotions..inshort everyfink

loved it

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
SHOCKED !!
Kunwar has moved on with Charlie...😲
i was exited for Arsha's meeting..
d song very well portrayed d feelings d emotions of Shakti...
waiting for d next update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab shakti wapas aarahi hai toh
dono ko phirse 1 kardo
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was really high on emotions...
and i really loved it... guessed something like this only fr Arsha meet..
and both's pain and shattered soul was described really well...
love it...
update soon. waiting for next one...

thanx fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all! Beat me officially for being sooo late!me back with my essay reviews but this time they are little briefed!

for update-39

Wow! This is the word!

Her nausea problem in pregnancy, how she can't feel the nostalgia! Awww..I felt for her! Being pregnant is not easy, that's what I got to learn from the update! Time when she was alone in house suffering with this utter weakness, you described it so perfectly Manu! I totally loved this flash back!

She fell asleep in bathroom! Awww! It'd be so relieving to see Kunwar in front of eyes after such a sleep! He is a total sweetheart! Calm and mature to handle her in this time! His love is her only strength!

Her plead of telling her story with "I love it when! I loved this game! Kunwar totally left in awww with his sweet talks!

It was sweet update Manu! Rushing to read next!

You were successful in making me wander in ArShaland of your DTROL! *Me happy hoppy*

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Posted: 12 years ago
For update -40
awww! Can you get more than perfect writer? I think you just did!
It was amazingly sweet update! I am in love with it! You know you have made pregnancy a fascination phase of life! Manu! Your updates tell how gem of a person you are! Though I knew it already but still, your readers can get a view of you in your stories! Simple yet fascinating!
It was amazing to read how Shakti feels about her pregnancy!
The first baby kick and her amusement about it! Kunwar's extreme careful nature and their talk about baby! Kunwar wants a girl! So typical of a father!
That kiss to belly was adorable! And Kunwar's irk with word adorable! Lolz! It was so cute! Their naughty talk! A perfect blend of everything!

You nailed it Manu! You were as always phenomenal with this update! I totally loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
For update-41
Am I having a good day? Yes I am! It's treat to read your updates back to back! Each update is filled with so real and human emotions! This update surpassed the heights of sweetness!
Puppy???!!! Oh mamma! You have made this story even more special for me! I lub puppies! White puppy I can imagine him! Awww! He was so cute!
Kunwar is late in this crucial hour! This man is surely needed scolding!
Shakti's condition was so painful! Aww! I felt for her! Kunwar was even worst! Men are weak! I am 100% certain now!

It was so real the way you showed him trembling! Shakti's family made the scenario so apt and complete!
Finally! A girl baby! Yayayay! Kunwar's family is complete! I mean of both of them!
Sweet little angel! Aww! i can imagine!
It was amazing to go through this phase of DTROL! Honestly speaking I am overwhelmed!
Love you Manu for giving us this story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
For update-42:
She is one year old! Sighs!
Shama is one lucky kid to have ArSha as parents!😃
Their love has still that ignite that I almost forget the place I sit in and Start wandering in imagination street!
Awww! How Shakti made her calm! I totally could feel the warmth of mother in her! She is one wonderful mommy! Kunwar always doing everything for his two princesses! I love this guy!
I love it when Kunwar held her in arms! It's a overwhelming feeling!😳
Birthday girl is been crying a lot! We could have some hawt shawt romance but shama couldn't see her Mommy papa paying less attention to her! 😆
It seems like a celebration time! 🥳
It was chhotu but powerful update! Quantity doesn't matter when quality is there!😳
Manu! You rock!😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
For update-43
Birthday girl! it;s party time! Shama first birthday party! 🥳
I totally am loving bond of Shama and Shakti! Their exclusive gesture talks make me feel awesome!
Powder scene was too good! 😆
Mukti massi! Awww! it sounds so sweet! She seems to share a good bond with her niece!
Kunwar like a best daddy prepared for everything! 😎
What Shama did to cake was amazingly funny! Kid's innocent playing with everything they see! The way she covered herself in cake was adorable!
And then a big moment! She took her first step! A little one but she did! It sounded so great!
Seeing Shama grow is just not amusing for ArSha but for readers too!😳
Too good! Manu! I loved it to core!

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