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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: shurtiekta

yaar pls dont break aisha's heart she is so sweet... Pls is ss ko arisha ss bana do pls pls.. A small request..



sorry to break your's and many more arisha fans heart.😕... but i have almost whole story layout ready and i have all pairs also in my mind.1st i had thought of making it an arisha ss but this is not arisha ss😭... again am sooo sorry.. but please do read this story and comment...




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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
here is part 14...

Aisha was visibly hurt.. few tears flowed from her eyes…😭.. zebbie observed everything..…she quickly wiped them and served the food.

Shree and chotu witnessed this silently. They made a mental note to speak to their bhai as soon as possible.

Shree: Aisha ye kaun hai?

Zebie: me zebbie. Aisha ki bachpan ki dost….

Shree: nice to meet you zebbie….

Raghu's place:

arjun: kya hua sir… app ne mujhe iss waqt bulaya?

Raghu: Mein nahin Arjun… sheen…. Ek minute ruko.. abhi bulata hun… SHEEN…. Tere Arjun bhai aaye hai…. Saath mein kaun hai dekh,… jaldi aao….

Sheen: Arjun bhaiyya……. (She runs to him and hugs him….. he hugs her and kisses her forehead. She comes out of the embrace and sees Krishna) Krishna didi………..(she runs to her and hugs with all force). Aap kahan thi itne saal didi… I missed you…

Krishna: even too missed you dear….. you have become soo pretty..

Sheen: but not as much as you di… you are as beautiful and hot as you were b4..😉

Krishna glances at Arjun and blushes☺️ heavily and Arjun smirks and winks at her… sheen saw this little interaction between them and smiled to herself.

Sheen( in her mind): yeh dono saath mein kitne acche lagte hai… kaash ye dono ek dusre ke saath………

Krishna: sheen… SHEEN… kahan kho gayo ho tum?? Ab bolo hume yahan kyun bulaya tumne?

Sheen: kya didi… mein aapko aise hi nahin bula sakti kya? Papa to bodyguards ke bagair kahin nahin jaane dete….

Arjun: aisi baat nahin hai sheen..its for your own safety... yaad nahin kuch mahine pehle kya hua tha??? chodo... darasal hum humare team mate ke ghar dinner ke liye ja rahe the…. Sir ka call aaya toh hum immediately yahan aa gaye… ab bolo kya baat hai..

Sheen: sorry bhaiyya….sorry didi... mujhe koi problem nahin hai.. but baat mere teen frns ki hai…

Krishna( cradling her hands wihin hers): kya hua hai unhe?

Sheen: pata nahin didi… who mujhe cmpltly ignore kar rahe hai…. Who bhi recently 1-2 weeks se… I don't know anything….

Arjun: sheen itna tension kyun leti ho…? May be they are trying to tease you?!

Sheen: nahin bhaiyya…. Agar baat sirf itni hoti to I would not worry. Unke behaviour mein bhi bohut badlaav aaya hai. Ajeeb sa behave karte hai..maano koi secret apne andar chupaye baithe ho….

Krishna: sheen, iss age mein to aisi changes hoti hi hai na… secrets etc etc… try talk to them….

Sheen: nahin didi…maamla kuch aur hi lagta hai… who log uss caf mein jaakar ghanto baithe the aaj jise woh log sabse zyada hate karte the… itna hi nahin us caf mein pehle sirf makkhi hua karte the par aaj, usme khade hone tak ke liye jagah nahin hai… mezedaar baat to ye hai ki who sab college students hi hai….something is fishy..

Raghu: meri unke parents se baat hui hai… they said even they have seen changes in their kids… bematlab paise lena… uneasy rehna and al…

Krishna: yeh to bohut serious lagta hai….JUN…kahin ye……..

Arjun: shayad haan kookie…. Kuch bhi ho we ll go to the depth. Sheen hume tumhaare doston ke ghar ka pata do… we ll make sure they are safe and do investigation.

Sheen: haan bhaiyya… ek minute……….. haan ye lijiye…

Aap dono aate rehna ok…. Mein bhi aapke ghar aaungi…

Arjun-krishna: take care oki….. bye… bye sir…

They leave and go to sheen's friends house. Speak to their parents and Krishna collects their blood samples. Kids didn't know as they were fast asleep. Then they directly go to ETF office.

At aisha's place

Aisha: wo mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte hai… zaroor us Krishna mam ne mana kiya hoga…. Warna Arjun sir aaj kal mera kitna khayaal rakhte hai…. Wo mere saath jaan boochkar aisa kuch nahin karenge….

Mujhe mere Arjun se koi door nahin kar sakta… Arjun ko to mein paa kar hi rahungi… uske liye mujhe chahe kuch bhi kana pade….

Zebbie slowly tapped her hand.

Shree: Aisha kya hua…. Kahan kho gayi ho… zara paneer to dena….its soo yummy… pata hai didi ko paneer bohut pasand hai…

Chotu: haan…lekin taayi ke haath ka bana rajma chawal laajawab hai…..

Sameer: chotu, ab bus karo…we are at aisha's place...

Chotu: sorry bhai……

Aisha was fuming but kept a cool look on her face not betraying the pool of emotions she was going through.

Aisha: sir wo dono kyun nahin aaye? Kahan gaye hai…

Sameer: pata nahin… bus they told me that they have to go somewhere… baaki abhi ghar jaake hi pata chalega.shree-chotu ab hume chalna chahiye. I ll drop you guys home and leave oki… Aisha thanks for the dinner.. it was too good. Now we will take your leave. Happy b'day once again…

Aisha: thank you sir… gudnite

Zebbie: bye everyone….

Turning towards Aisha: aishu mujhe lagta hai ki teri kahaani one sided hai. Tu jo bhi karegi soch samajh ke kar. Kyunki tu impulsive hoke kuch bhi karti hai and you will be left hurt at the end. Oki….

Aisha: hmmm….

All leave. But there was no sign of Arjun o Krishna. Sameer called them a couple of times but eventually gave up when they did not respond. He was worried but not to an extent of panic. He tried to stay calm…….


to be continued...

please do like and please please please do comment...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
just real last two parts...!!
awsum updates...!!!!
loved it...!
so jun and kokkie wow...!!😉
feeling bad for aisha...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
I loved it...
Awww...
Loved Ayesha and Zebbie's bonding.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Gud dear
bt unable to think as arjun kookie as pair
no sry!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Gud dear
bt unable to think as arjun kookie as pair
no sry!!



i know...
its very hard to imagine someone who we dont know...
esp., when we expect someone already in the same place...
even i felt it...but i had different plans for every character. so i took this way...
please do read and comment...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
awsomeee!!!

jun and kookie as pair?????😔 😔 😔 😔

feelng bad for aisha!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭

update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
wow... i am a groupbie now...😊😃

here is part 15...

Next morning

ETF

Sameer strode into the office. His temple bursting with tension. He was followed by shree-chotu and later by Aisha.

Sameer: shree check karo in dono ke mobile ke last call kahan se hai. And also try to trace them.

Shree: sir. Last call to arjun sir no se raghu sir ke ghar se tha. Krishna mam ka no., switchoff aa raha hai and I m trying to locate Arjun sir's no.

Sameer: jaldi karo shree'.

Shree: sir location to ETF headquarters hi dekha raha hai' par wo log yahan kya???kaise???

Sameer: wo kahan hai shree?

Shree: ek min., sir'. Sir research and forensic dept.

Sameer: lets go.

The scene infront of them left the four shocked.

Arjun was sprawled on sofa on his tummy, hugging his pillow close to him'. And Krishna in the same dress sleeping with her head resting on the table, files and papers strewn everywhere' Sameer saw arjun's mobile on single seat of sofa, vibrating silently. time'

Shree: bhai'ye dono yahan'.

Sameer: pata nahin shree'. Arjun utho(shaking him)'utho'shree kishu ko uthao'chotu yahan aao' isko uthane me meri madad karo'

Shree was successful in waking Krishna by that time

Krishna: sam(yawn)' tum yahan kya kar rahe ho'.

Sameer: ye to mujhe poonchna chahiye' tum dono y ahan kyun ho???ghar kyun nahin aaye?

By then Arjun was up, rubbing his sleepy eyes. His hair disheaveled.

Arjun: ek naya case hai sameer'lab mein hum dono tests kar rahe the' report padhte padhte so gaye'.

Sameer: kaun sa case? Kiska (interrupted by loud yawns from both K-A)'pehle ghar jao naha kar tayaar hokar aao' phir batana' move.

A-K: ok SIR'

Sameer rolled his eyes at the duo

And they leave.

Aisha saw a big gift box on the table nearby' she felt a pang in her heart. In her mind: I know sir ne mere liye ye laya tha' iss Krishna mam ki wajah se who nahin aapaye'. Is Krishna ka kuch karna hoga'

Sameer: team lets go' wo aake hume iske baare mein batayenge.

Shree-chotu: sir.

They all start to move but Aisha was lost looking at the gift with an angry expression.

Shree: Aisha chalo' o ha'ye gift tumhare liye hum leke aaye the' kal nahin depaaye' sorry'ye lo'

Aisha(with a forced smile): thank you shree'.

Chalo'.

After an hour A-K were in their office'

Chotu: taayi aap ekdum dhaasu lag rahi ho'

Krishna: chotu, hum log office mein hai'.

Sameer: bas karo. Hum yahan as a family nahin as a team hai. Raute, yeh kaunsa naya case hai jiske baare mein mujhe nahin pata??

Arjun(rolling his eyes at sameer): Rathod ye hume bhi nahin pata tha' kal jab hum Aisha ke ghar aa rahe the to hume raghu sir ka call aaya tha and'..(he narrates the story)

Krishna: humne blood samples ko examine kiya hai. And yes we got traces of drugs and those kids are recent addicts.we can bring them out immediately.

Sameer: recent addicts?

Arjun: yeah'they have started taking drugs from about a week o two. hum dono ke hisaab se ye log college students ko ab isme shaamil kar rahe hai.

Krishna: hum kal full night isi ke baare mein research kar rahe the.ye drug XYZ bohot his powerful hai. Ye India mein actually nahin milta and also has been banned from importing. Isse yahan smuggle karke laaya jaa raha hai sir.


Sameer: raute aur koi info?

Arjun: abhi tak nahin Rathod. Krishna iska antidote ke baare mein pata kar rahi hai'. Uske bina in bacchon ko nahin bacha sakte.


to be continued...

i know most are dissapointed that it is not arisha story...

but please do read, like and comment...

please please please comment...


Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Nyc dear..
one thing if its a arjun kookie story as a pair
so sry i dnt lyk it frankly..
arisha gud
if its nt arisha
pls dnt make arjun kookie as pair
its my pov
sry if i hurt u dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
hey every11... here is part 16..

Shree: kya matlab hai sir ki bacha nahin sakte?

Arjun: yes shree'iss drug ka effect bohot long lasting hai' even rehab.,centres don't work for these cases. Iske antidote ko theekh se administer karne ke baad hi hum unhe rehab.centres bhej kar iske changul se azaad kar saqte hai'.nahin to those victims tend to commit suicide when they don't get these drugs.

Sameer: dammit!!!! Ab hum kya Karen? Ye antidote India mein nahin milta kya?

Krishna: Milta hai'. But they wont be given to us. India mein iska sirf utna hi quantity milta hai jitna research institutions mein kaam ke liye chahiye'

Hume yeh antidote humaare lab mein banana hoga'.

Sameer: kya? Pagal ho tum?

Itna quantity hum yahan kaise bana sakte hai? Aur chemicals who sab kahan se aayega?

Krishna: sir aap bhool rahe hai ki mein chemical and drugs mein expertise rakhti hun. I will convince comm.. all you have to do is trust me and scientist team of ETF

Sameer: I am sorry. Mein tumhari kaabiliyat pe koi shaq nahin kar raha hun. But i am worried.

Arjun: tension mat lo Rathod.. who Krishna hai' who jo karegi theek hi karegi,. Lets speak to comm..,about this.

Lets go. Krishna tum requirements ki list banao'.shree help her. Rest of team come with me.

(to Krishna): take care..

Krishna nods and then she sees Arjun. He blinks his eyes and smiles. Then he goes along with sameer.

Shree and Aisha witnessed this small interaction between the two. Shree had a small smile on his face where as Aisha a scowl.

Very soon they get permission from commissioner and they divide into two teams. Krishna along with forensic dept and ETF scientists, start the work to prepare antidotes, whereas Arjun and rest team investigate the case.

One afternoon, all were back to ETF.

Arjun: ye Krishna kahan hai'? Ab tak to usse bhi aajana chahiye tha na'.

Sameer: haan yaar' she is never this late'. Chalo'lab chalkar dekhte hai'

Arjun: yeah chal sam.

They go to lab and call Krishna.

She washes her hands and come out running'.she 1st hugs sameer and then Arjun and tells: humne who antidote ready kar diya hai jun'. we did it'. We can save all those kids now'..(she again hugs Arjun tightly')

Arjun: that's great kookie'. I am so proud of you' (he hugs her back)

Sameer saw this with a slight smile on his face'.



:Flashback:

Krishna: JUN'.JUN kahan hai TU'' jaldi aa'..

Arjun: kya hua kookie??? Aise chilla kyun rahi ho????ab kaun si nayi musibat create karke aayi ho jis se bachne ke liye you need me????

Krishna: arre kaddu'. Maine mere batch ke shooting classes mein sabse highest points liye hai' I have set a record far better than the old ones' if it wasn't you, today I would not have had done this'

Arjun: ye teri hi mehnat ka fal hai kookie ki tu aaj is muqaam par hai'. I am soo proud of you''..(he hugs her)

:flashback ends:



sameer in his mind: aaj phir se lag raha hai ki maano waqt ne waapas hume uss jagah par le aaya hai jab humare saath koi dard, koi pareshaani nahin thi... par aaj... iss hasi mazzak, khushi mein bhi maayoosi aa gayi hai...

Arjun: sam kahan kho gaya yaar'. Chal na bohut bhookh lagi hai'. Kookie bhi aa gayi'.

Aisha witness this' but she did not even hear a single word spoken by them. She burns in jealousy and anger.


to be continued...

plase jab aap kahaani padhte ho to sirf like mat kijiye...comment bhi kijiye... its from the comments and likes we get inspired to write more... so please comment...


Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago

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