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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
here is the next part...
part 3:

Few seconds earlier:

The biker saw 3 men chasing a person and immediately recognized 2 of them.. yes the great R & R… biker sped ahead and shot d culprit right below his knee, halted the bike few mtrs ahead. Biker could see the culprit handcuffed. Then slowly got off the bike and took of the helmet. Biker could see two shocked faces and heard "Krishnaa" in dazed voices..

Arjun and sam could not believe their eyes and stood rooted to their spot.they saw the biker urf Krishna walking measured steps towards them.

Rathod recovered quickly and roared

" why are you here Krishna? After all these years?kyun aaye ho waapas?"

Krishna: Sameer, I know ki you don't want to speak to me. I just happened to see you and arjun struggling hard to catch that criminal, alive. I had seen his pic in police stations so just brought him down.

tum Kaise ho arjun?

Arjun: what do you want now? Sab kuch to barbaad kar hi diya hai tumne. Ab aur barbaad karne ke liye humare paas kuch nahin bacha. Mein ye kabhi nahin bhul sakta ki tumne mere saath, sameer ke saath kya kiya tha 3 saal pehle. Aaj sirf tumhari wajah se pallavi sam ke saath nahin hai. Why are you back??

Krishna: believe me arjun I never wanted things to turn out like this. But my hands were tied. I could not do anything else. M sorry for that.

Rathod: nikal jao meri nazron ke saamne se Krishna. I don't want to do something for which I ll regret later. Just get lost.

Krishna looked at them sadly and then left the place.

Shree and chotu witnessed this entire scene.

Shree: arre yaar chotu, yeh hum kya dekh rahe hai? Samjhe ya samjhau apne jaani dushman ko unke 1st name se bulaya.. and who is this pallavi? Aur yeh kaun tha?

Chotu: koi bhi ho yaar, but surely in donon ko usne bahut dard diya hai lagta hai.dekha nahin donon ke chehre ko?

Shree: hmm… aur shayad ye bhi ho sakta hai ki koi love triangle ka chakkar ho? I mean shayad Rathod sir kisi pallavi se pyaar karte the and this Krishna lady loved him.. aur arjun sir Krishna se….

Chotu: arjun sir to roshni ji se bahut pyaar karte the na..

Shree: tune twilight dekhi hai na.. usme bella Edward aur jacob donon se pyaar karti hai rite..haan ye hai ki ek uske happiness ka reason tha to dusra uske existence ka…...but that doesnt matter. why cant arjun sir love her???? or may be even she was his 1st love b4 roshniji...

Rathod: agar tum donon ki khusur phusur khatam ho gayi ho toh hum log chale ya yahin rehne ka irada hai kya?


to be continued...

if you feel there is any matter in this ss that should not be included please let me know so that i can edit that part...

have a nice time


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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Nice update..😊
Very curious to know their past now...
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
superb update
lovely parts
plse pm me the nxt 1
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
hey guyz...
part 4 is up... enjoy 😊

Back in Mumbai

Rathod: ye waapas kyun aayi arjun? Kyun?😭

Arjun: sam, I know how you are feeling. But we met her accidentally. Please don't dwell on that more. She doesn't deserve it.

Rathod: tum sahi keh rahe ho arjun. Par kya karoon..uske saath mere kitne yaadein judi hui hai… I can never forget those.

Arjun: Jaanta hun sam.yaadein to meri bhi uske saath judi hai.. par jo kuch bhi usne kiya hai humaare saath uske baad she is not worth it.let go

Aisha: shree yeh kya yeh dono snake n mangoose ek doosre se aise baat kar rahe hai jaise mele mein bichde bhai ho..

Shree: pata nahin mam. Jabse who Krishna inse mili hai yeh dono ajeeb behave kar rahe hai…

Chotu: kuch to choot raha hai…….😆

After some time

Comm.: Rathod, mujhe tumse ek bohot imp baat karni hai.

Rathod: yes sir.kahiye…

Comm: tumhare team mein ek aur nayi member join karne waali hai. She is basically research specialist.

Shree: sir, iska matlab woh riya ko replace karegi. But mein ye kaam bhi sambhal raha hun and I don't have any problem.

Comm: I know shree kit um log riya ki jagah kisi ko nahin dekh sakte. But this lady is very talented. She is not just research specialist, but also an encounter specialist. Also she expertise in criminal psychology,forensic science, chemicals and drugs. I think she ll be great asset for ETF.

Rathod: who is she sir???

Arjun(in his mind): ye qualifications to...

Comm.: aa she is here.

A lady in her late twenties enter in blue jeans and white shirt with 2 guns in her holster. All except Aisha are shocked.

Comm: meet ACP Krishna Rathod. She ll be joining your team from today.

R & R clench their teeth

Rathod: sir I wont be able to work with her.

Arjun: even I ll not sir.

Comm: Rathod I know kit um teeno ke beech kuch differences hai. U have to sort it out just as you solved issues between you and Arjun.

You have no choice in this matter. I have to leave now. Jai hind

All: jai hind sir

Krishna: hello every1..

Shree-chotu-aisha: Hello ma'am

Turning to R & R: hi sameer. Hey Arjun…

R & R just glare at her and go to their respected cabins.

Krishna quickly wiped her lone tear and turned around with a smile.

Krishna: may I know your names.. I have seen you 2 earlier in pune but never asked your names…

Aisha(whispering to shree): to yeh wahin hai…pune waali…

Shree: hmm..(turning to Krishna) ma'am mein shreekant sen aka shree yahan ka tech expect, yeh Chaitanya patil aka chotu,our commando, yeh Aisha sharma hai ammunition expert.

Krishna: nice to meet you guys… you all seem to share a nice bond of friendship..

Chotu: haan… who to hai…

Days passed and things changed. Arjun and Sameer being ignorant about Krishna. They spoke to her only when required. Even Krishna gave back their medicine time to time. Arjun and Sameer though never got along, seemed to team up against her. But Rathod was softening towards her. Shree-chotu-aisha were surprised at this. They never knew what the matter was. They saw most of the times Krishna was R & R's punching bag and she used to take it all right. The trio realized the matter was something really personal and Krishna was not actually bad. Shree and chotu got quiet comfortable with her but as usual Aisha maintained her distance. Shree and chotu found a elder sis in Krishna.

On the otherhand, Krishna was bit free with shree and chotu. She loved their cute nok-jhoks. She tried hard to ignore R & R's comments about could never. She so badly wanted to clear the air but it was not yet time. She was very tough to work with. She was perfect in everything she did. Shree and chotu always found her mixture of Rathod and rawte but female version.

Sharp analyzing skills, photographic memory, lateral thinking, keen observation, shrewd mind everything reminded her of their seniors.

She was very strict in matters of work, even in office. But she held a warmth around her.motherly affection towards all the team mates. Even Aisha could not stop admiring her.

Amidst of all these things, there was one person drawn like a moth to flames.it was none other than Aisha. She in course of time started liking Arjun.yes the great ACP Arjun suryakant raute, our very own akdu boss…😉


to be continued


hope you like it... 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
thanks for your likes and comments.. 🤗
i ll reveal their past very soon with a maha epi..

i need to ask one thing to all my readers. do you want riya back?? i will not pair her with arjun, i have many plans in my mind but if you want riya back i can frame my story according to dat.
please leave your comments😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i like this ss...please add me to ur pm list

and as u already have aisha in this i guess u dont have to have riya on it too

update soon please

waiting for krishna sameer and arjun confrontation

also waiting for arisha between all this x
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
here you go with part 5😊

It was just a day like any other day in ETF

Rathod: team, we have a case. Famous diamond merchant mr. Tejwani. Diamonds woth abt some 200 crores were stolen from their safe. We need to go.

On the way to crime scene:

ARjun: shree yeh tejwani ke details do.

Shree: sir mein try kar raha hun.. but uske bare mein info nahin hai, security reasons

Rathod: dammit!!! Ab hum kya karenge?

Krishna: Mr. hiten Tejwani, 47 yrs old, basically from kutch. Moved to Mumbai with his parents when he was 10. he holds a M.B.A. from Cambridge. Married to mallika, a classical dancer, age-45. love marriage. Couple have no kids of their own but have adopted 2 boys-varun and daksh. Age-21 and 24 resp. he started business with his wife as partner. In past 20 years they have made huge profit. Honest people. No criminal background, no cases filed against them. This deal was with Sheikh Abdullah from Dubai.it was supposed to be delivered tomorrow afternoon but was stolen from the safe in their office about an hour ago. Baaki we have to see the crime scene.

Shree: wow! Ma'am! You are amazing.. magar aap ko ye saare info inti jaldi milgaye? I mean security ke wajah se unke saare info net se nikal diya hai rite???!

Krishna: Shree ye mat bhulo ki mein cases ke background check karne mein expert hun.. mera network bahut bada hai. Mujhe jiske bare mein jo information chahiye I can get in just few minutes.

Rathod: gud job Krishna.

Krishna: thank you sameer… I mean sir…

Arjun: isne koi bahut bada kaam nahin kiya hai Rathod. Wahi kaam kiya hai jo ek research specialist ko karna chahiye..

Crime scene:

Entire team is in the safe room. They check the entire system and observe everything. They saw that there was no windows or any ways to enter the locker room other than the door. Krishna and shree started analyzing the crime scene, whereas Arjun, sameer, chotu and Aisha went to enquire people in that office.

Krishna: shree ye safe yahan kuch ajeeb nahin lagta?

Shree: kyun mam? Yeh to wohin safe hai jisme diamonds the..

Krishna: haan shree diamonds to isime the with no doubt. But 200 crore worth diamonds ke liye ye safe. Maana ki ye office bahut secured hai but ye safe… it must have been something which cannot be opened at any cost but this is soo simple to open even without a proper key.aur aise ek safe ko toda jaata hai… par kyun? Shree tum yahan se fingerprints collect karo. Mein yahan kuch aur dhoondti hun.

She moves to door. Observes something. Then she takes out her tab and clicked couple of pics. After cmplting work there shree and Krishna go out.

With Arjun and Rathod

Krishna: Arjun mujhe yahan par bohot gadbad lag raha hai..

Arjun: so is because….?

Krishna: Arjun hum koi bhi keemti cheez ko yuhin koi aam box mein nahin daal ke rahte hai chehe baahar kitna bhi tight security ho. But yahan ye safe bohut hi maamooli hai. I mean bina key k ek choti si pin se bhi kholi ja sakti hai. Usse dekhne se hi ye pata chal jata hai. Ab usse is tarah todkar kholna kuch ajeeb laga mujhe.

Rathod: rawte tum usse ek baar dekhlo.mein mr tejwani se milke aata hun. Krishna tum Arjun ke saath jao. Shree you come with me.

Arjun: Rathod tum mujhse ye kehrahe ho ki mein iske saath jau? I ll go better with Aisha than her.

aisha was super happy that arjun was preferring over krishna.

Rathod: hum yahan as a team kaam kar rahe hai Arjun. And she IS our team member and I am your chief so take it as my order and go.

Krishna sees sameer and smiles. Sameer jus nods and leaves with shree.

Crime scene

Arjun: your thinking is right kookie.. kuch to choot raha hai….

Krishna: tumne mujhe abhi kya bulaya? Kookie???!!!! You still remember that Arjun???😛

Arjun: ye kya bol rahi ho tum Krishna? Meri kookie to 3 saal pehle mar chuki hai jab usne mera vishwas toda, mere dil ko thes pahuchaya. You are just ACP Krishna singhania to me now… o I am soo sorry..ACP Krishna Rathod right. Agar aapko koi aitraaz na ho to case ke taraf dhyaan de..?

Krishna wiped the tears flowing from her eyes and composed herself b4 speaking again.

Krishna: yeh dekho.. isse todne ki kya zaroorat? Who bhi aise? And ha yeh kam koi andar ke aadmi ka hi hai.

Arjun: can you elaborate please?

Krishna: simple. Yahan, der are no other way to enter o exit other than this door. Aur yeh dekho. Door is completely fine. No signs of any damage. Ab tum samjhe ya samjhau…?

Arjun clenched his jaw and spoke through gritted teeth

Arjun: don't you dare imitate me.😡 Ye haq tum kho chuki ho. Lets go now.

Saying so, he marched outside leaving a very hurt Krishna behind.

After lot of investigations, Krishna-arjun's mind blowing chemistry, rathod's leadership they were able to solve the case. It was none other than mr.tejwani. he was in huge debt unkown to all due to gambling. So he made a master plan of stealing the diamonds and claim for insurance and also sell diamonds to the costumer. In that way he would be left with huge amount of money to live his life free of debts. He had everything planed. From breaking the safe box to turning off the cameras. But the door and absence of videos were enough for K-A to catch him.😃


to be continued...


i know the cases i have written here do not have true potential. i am trying to bring out the emotions, turmoil in every character. so please bear with me...

leave your comments😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
I read all the chapters in one go...
It was superb...
Loved Krishna's charecter...
Although they have personal differences,but,Arjun shouldnt have behaved with her like this during work.

Jaldi update karo aur mujheapne PM list me add karo.


Do one thing...
To make it easy for the readers,write the chapter numbers and their page numbers.
Ex: Ch1 pg1.
Like this,ok.
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Edited by zebbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am happy that you loved it...😊i ll update the reason for their behaviour towards krishna in next update... and also their past (unke khud ki zubani) in upcoming updates... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Grt gng dear..,,
cookie nyc name..
waiting fr maha epi..!

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