Ariya SS- Just Married upt part 9 (pg 67)

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

itna bada dadi ji

aur vo bhi itne din baad😡

sayad isiliye likhte-2 tu buddhi ho gai 😆 😉

nice update😃

maine kasie padha hai

tumhe pata hai🤢

dead ho gai tera ye padhte-2

arj show me to besarm hua nahi

ha tune jarror bana diya yaha😆

humari tarah☺️

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Pisces_Gurl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Reallly cute update..enjoyed reading it...

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sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Dear Prava,

In one word, charming. Or in two, utterly charming.

You do the little scenes and exchanges very well, like the mix up about the torn photo, where Riya gets into a mess of her own making, or the way in which she literally pounces on Arjun to find out if he has pataoed his parents into letting her work. Or his reaction when he sees his wife in a pink night suit.Delightful. Why on earth did you think that anyone reading it would be bored?

Shyamala Aunty

PS: It should be kaan, my dear, not khaan. All of you do this all the time; someone else was writing ghaana for gaana. Do remember and leave out all these unnecessary 'h's in the future!😉

Firstly khaan pakad ke sorry...I am really Sorry for making you wait so long..😳😳

iss baar maaf karo mujhe...aage se quick update karoongi😛

Thank you for all your sweet sweet comments...

iss baar shayad boring update hogi...but yeh zaroori tha...Tried to make it romantic...😊

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