Ariya SS- Just Married upt part 9 (pg 67) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
itna bada dadi ji
aur vo bhi itne din baad😔
sayad isiliye likhte-2 tu buddhi ho gai šŸ˜† šŸ˜‰
nice update😃
maine kasie padha hai
tumhe pata hai🤢
dead ho gai tera ye padhte-2
arj show me to besarm hua nahi
ha tune jarror bana diya yahašŸ˜†
humari tarahā˜ŗļø

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Posted: 12 years ago
Reallly cute update..enjoyed reading it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Prava,

In one word, charming. Or in two, utterly charming.

You do the little scenes and exchanges very well, like the mix up about the torn photo, where Riya gets into a mess of her own making, or the way in which she literally pounces on Arjun to find out if he has pataoed his parents into letting her work. Or his reaction when he sees his wife in a pink night suit.Delightful. Why on earth did you think that anyone reading it would be bored?

Shyamala Aunty

PS: It should be kaan, my dear, not khaan. All of you do this all the time; someone else was writing ghaana for gaana. Do remember and leave out all these unnecessary 'h's in the future!šŸ˜‰


Firstly khaan pakad ke sorry...I am really Sorry for making you wait so long..😳😳

iss baar maaf karo mujhe...aage se quick update karoongišŸ˜›

Thank you for all your sweet sweet comments...

iss baar shayad boring update hogi...but yeh zaroori tha...Tried to make it romantic...😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! šŸ‘
Finally Riya ko permission mil hi gayi... 😊
Continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh really so amaizing dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute part... Loved Ariya moments... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww... sweet n lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am waiting for another part...

really superb...

urgently update the another parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb
Missed your story so much.
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great going my dear pravašŸ‘

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