Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 4)

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rupzloveu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Congrats on the new thread

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saucechips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

What a lovely and involving story! It had all the elements which could make me giggle, blush, twirl (yes..you get the general idea). What really pleased me was the lovely pace you gave to the story,not too slow, not too rushed..it gave me as a reader, time to have the characters and their relationships properly sketched in my mind so that I could truly feel for them as the story proceeded.

Khushi's sense of self respect. Arnav's sense of responsibility and hidden chivalry, the subtle humor, and well who would I be fooling if I said I hadn't grinned idiotically at all those jealousy parts like when nani suggested Khushi's marriage. Mighty concerned about the boons of education now are we Arnav? ;)

Thank you for keeping me so well entertained and hearty congratulations on the success of this FF. It truly deserves the appreciation and so do you :)

Lots of love and looking forward to more!

Verdict- Oh-so-awesome story😆

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silent_whispers

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

waiting eagerly di please update

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Amazingly well written... I stumbled onto this SS and instantly got gripped into the story. He fell in love with her first.. wow... poor Aakash:( though I'm loving this little lovely bits of their romance... Arnav is surely a romantic guy when he wants to be...

The twins are so adorable... can't wait to see where you take this next.. I have sent you a buddy request would love to PM's for any of your future updates...

Looking forward to it...

-Vika

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GoGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Inteezaar...Inteezaar...for next update..

Will he ever kiss his mangethar... proper kiss...gutter kiss...or will kiss like they kiss adi and adhya...

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: GoGreen
Inteezaar...Inteezaar...for next update..

Will he ever kiss his mangethar... proper kiss...gutter kiss...or will kiss like they kiss adi and adhya...

HAHAHAHA

They will. Soon very soon :D