Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 4) - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
forgot to mention... thank you so much for updating it sooner...
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Posted: 12 years ago
A wonderful take on Arnav's possessive nature and his inherent jealousy and insecurities...Having been fiercely guarded with his emotions all his life, not allowing himself to trust or love anyone, now that he deeply adores Khushi and wants so much to be with her; he's terrified that she would not feel the same way about him...

I loved the inherent catch 22 situation you have brought out subtly in the story...Khushi already feels a lovely sense of domesticity and 'ownership' as regards Arnav and their small family unit...in her mind, they are already hers, their happiness means the world to her, and Arnav is very much on her mind as her future husband...She probably doesn't really question her own immense attraction towards him anymore, they're anyway gonna get married, and for her, she's at peace with the fact that she is 'going to' love Arnav as a natural progression of things..😊

If she really examined her feelings, she'd realize she already loves him, as his every thought and emotion matters so much to her..😊 Arnav, on the other hand, adores her with a fierce desperation, but is not able to see that she loves him back and has accepted their place in each others' lives...

Perhaps Akash not knowing about the engagement is good in an oblique manner? He'll probably declare his own feelings to Khushi over the dinner; or perhaps his mom will make some overt enquiries letting Khushi know she's thinking of her as a daughter in law, so Khushi will have to come out and say she's already committed 😊

Waiting eagerly to read more, as always!!

Cheers...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Good update dear! Khushi is so perceptive ... She deflected Arnavs anger so well n now I think even during the dinner, she might set things right!!!

But will Aakash give up ? Let's hope so! Can't even think of Akash with Khushi!!!!!!

Thnx for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RamnVij

A wonderful take on Arnav's possessive nature and his inherent jealousy and insecurities...Having been fiercely guarded with his emotions all his life, not allowing himself to trust or love anyone, now that he deeply adores Khushi and wants so much to be with her; he's terrified that she would not feel the same way about him...


I loved the inherent catch 22 situation you have brought out subtly in the story...Khushi already feels a lovely sense of domesticity and 'ownership' as regards Arnav and their small family unit...in her mind, they are already hers, their happiness means the world to her, and Arnav is very much on her mind as her future husband...She probably doesn't really question her own immense attraction towards him anymore, they're anyway gonna get married, and for her, she's at peace with the fact that she is 'going to' love Arnav as a natural progression of things..😊

If she really examined her feelings, she'd realize she already loves him, as his every thought and emotion matters so much to her..😊 Arnav, on the other hand, adores her with a fierce desperation, but is not able to see that she loves him back and has accepted their place in each others' lives...

Perhaps Akash not knowing about the engagement is good in an oblique manner? He'll probably declare his own feelings to Khushi over the dinner; or perhaps his mom will make some overt enquiries letting Khushi know she's thinking of her as a daughter in law, so Khushi will have to come out and say she's already committed 😊

Waiting eagerly to read more, as always!!

Cheers...





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Posted: 12 years ago
Bring in payal soon... -.-
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh i feel so bad for arnav and his insecurities he is like a kid when it comes to heart.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awsome update. This FF has become an addiction for me. Love ur writing style. Khushi is so naive. Loved jealous Arnav. Pls continue soon.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Love button kahan hai?? This update ws a mixture of evrything..PERFECTTOO :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update..
Arnav teasing Khushi was so good.. And her blabbering.. u described it too good😊
Jealous Arnav - Green eyed monster has risen once again.. It's not easy to not feel jealous and specially when Khushi used words like darling to describe her friend whom Arnav envies from day one.😉😛
I'm waiting for dinner now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
HEY INDEED IT IS A REALLY NICE AND MIND BLOWING UPDATE!!!!!!!!
I GUESSS LOVE AND TRUST GOES HAND IN HAND, TRUST IS THE FIRST BRICK IN BUILSING ANY RELATIONSHIP!!!!!!!!!
I REALLY FEEL PITY FOE AAKASH NOW!!!!!!!!!😛

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