An ArHi SS: Secrets #2 *COMPLETED*

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libbyferns

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1061

Just luv all your work.

Fabulous..plz keep on writing.👏

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1062

Came across this SS by chance...short and sweet but what a impact ...what a story...loved it

Edited by ranogill - 12 years ago

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sivatharshini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1063

beautiful story !!! you are an amazing writer !!!

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1064

Good, bad or ugly I'm extremely possessive of my work. Kaisa bhi hai mera hai. And i expect other authors to feel the same about theirs. But with Secrets... It's one story I wish I had written. But i can never pen down that. Itni talented nahi hun main.

I had read Secrets as it was being updated. At the end of each chapter I would already start fretting about the next. The story on face value is simple but the way it is written is astounding. Throughout the update you anticipate, you dread, you hope and you pray.

Phir upar se the emotions are done really well. At any point in time you feel what Arnav and Khushi are feeling. Unka dukh hamara dukh. Unki khushi hamari khushi.

The suspense element k ab kya hoga robs you of your chain and sukoon.

I remember once when i had PMed Secrets to all my readers. I had told them that if they don't read this story on IF they should stop reading on IF altogether.

And you know what is the best part? You open the first part and see who is it dedicated to *smug*

NEVER STOP WRITING

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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summaiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1065

nice ending

luvd all the pts

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gurukhush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1066

Dear Expell,

I have an observation on U'r writing😳😉... All U'r stories starting with the alphabet "S", e.g. 'Sins', 'Secrets' and the ongoing 'Scandalous' are all " 'S'PECIAL"😛😊😃.. U have to concede that U have a special affinity for 'S'... I have to admit that these three stories have a 'special' place in my heart - U are sparing no efforts for 'Scandalous'... I am sure U treat all U'r babies (these stories, I mean) with the same passion!!!😊😆😃 U must take a bow for "Secrets", a truly intriguing, passionate story of two lovers made and meant only for each other, always👏👏👏... And the Epilogue took the cake... May the Almighty always guide U to richer Literary achievements😳😳⭐️ But please do hurry up with U'r Scandalous updates -even I had an preemptive insight to U'r next update, in my post reply/comment.. Thanx!!!..