SwaRon FF : The Undesired Love. Chapter 14 Updated. - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 5

beautiful update. very nice sharon and children bonding :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing wenz next update comming thn
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 6

nice update.
alisha and sharon conversation was strange but love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor swayam 😆...first he was cold and got wet, then sharon kept on yelling at hime, then his clothes werent drying, he went to sleep, then woke up due to sharon screaming at him again, his towel was open, and lastly he and his phone got wet again! 🤣

Loved the chapter... Looking forward to what swayam does with sharon now!

Edited by kamlesh32 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
veryy nic.

sharon is in problem
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Posted: 12 years ago
swayan got wet first becuase of rain and took shelter from sharon to dry his clothes...
when he was about to leave agin was drain in water becuase sharon was play game with kids
that was lovely... do continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aah Vodka toh professional ban gayi..B) I'm commenting via cell sorry I guess thats where u wrote ur update??Dw! Acha tha!!But girl increase the size of ur updates and unres on my story too!!__/\__ jaldi!!
Frankly speaking I expected the update to be different!!Like instead of dragging the cat mouse game, u could hv shown some moments btwn them!! Will tell u later about it!!I guess this is how ur story goes..alisha and srp being friends might affect the story in its later half more or less!!Good going!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww a super cool update dat too itni jaldi
and upar se gud news that we'll be getting update every tue and sat...yippie am so excited🥳
and an os coming our way is like a cherry on cake🤗
waiting for next update as well as os
and swayam's towel unwrapped while sleeping next to sharon???😲oopps dats ☺️☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really don't know I should be shocked or I should laugh like a maniac. 😕 God why Swayam had to sleep beside her that too just in a towel?? I thought Sharon will kill him today but thankfully she didn't. But that was really embarassing for both of them. 😳

Loved the conversation between Ally and Sharon. Truly they are nothing less than Tom and Jerry. 😆

But I am sure they will sooner or later turn to be like Pooh and Piglet 😃 and after that Romeo and Juliet in their own way.

About the thanks Aisha, its not needed. You deserve all the likes and comments.

Will be waiting for Saturday as well as your new OS. Do pm me. 😊

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update aish was really hoping you would update the ff today nd u did super happy reading the update..👍🏼 ❤️.
Coming to the update sharon letting hhim use his room was quite a surprise and the part where swayam adores the sleeping sharon was cute..😳. ❤️. The hungry tigress part was funny good one and swayam gave a chance to the hungry tigress to devour him by sleeping right next to her on the bed without clothes hehehe..😆.
I have a feeling that sharon and ally will have a good bond but still want to find out so waiting to read your future updates update soon aish can't wait to read the next part and also your os..😃
Edited by sweet16cash - 12 years ago

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