ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T1(PROLOGUE/CHP 1- 5)

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Brilliant start ! Loved Khushi in this part !

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

awesome updt

luv it

updt soon

thanks for pm

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

wow Khushi and Shyam has a business war going on

and of course the chocolate eyes that she is thinking about is Arnav

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

oh man this chapter was really something...👏👏

poor shyam🤣 I liked this khushi so so much😳

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

0h I l0ve this kick-ass KKG. And she is talking ab0ut h0ttie na?? Ah cant wait f0r my h0ttie's entry. I have already died 1000 deaths seeing his new l00k. He gets better by the day!! C0ntinue s00n!!

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

First i thought it was arnav and khushi...
Turned out to be shyam... Then i thought it might be shyam and anjali...
Lol... Turned out to be khushi... 🤣
Failure...
But this story has got off on a high note... And it is being written brilliant and showing khushi as powerful and in a different angle...( not that i didnt like our khushi)
And also this made me sigh in relief... She already knows arnav from before... ( i didnt want new introductions... Rather a history)
So thank you so much for mentioning the chocolate orbs... Loved it... Cant wait for the next chapter

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

great start loving khushi's character

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

very interesting 1st chapter!

already in love with the way u have portrayed khushi's character!

lol Poor Mr Jha!

oh a change aman is now khushi's PA!

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12345abcdefg

@12345abcdefg

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#329

Brilliant first chapter. love the rivalry between khushi n shyam. lukin fwd to c wat hapnz nxt :)

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Nice start! Khushi really knows where to pack a punch... For Shyam I guess it was money and ego!!

Hmmm so khushi has met Arnav! And he bothers her still!

Love your choice for Aman!!