ArHi FF:Behind the Curtain#3 [c18-pg48]Note Pg74

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45678

@45678

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

THE UPDATE WAS LOVELY. ITS EMOTIONAL, CREATIVE AND ROMANTIC

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Wow just wow, what a outstanding update, it was sad, emotional and really heartbreaking but so beautifully written. The email Khushi wrote to Arnav was so sad, it honestly made me cry because you had wrote her feelings and emotions down so well. I knew Khushi was a strong character because she still wanted to celebrate her birthday, she totally deserves too. The part where Arnav cried again made me cry because he felt so sorry for Khushi and his concern was over whelming, its so sweet of him to go back for Khushi to celebrate her birthday. Can't wait to read more and find out what happens when he kidnaps her, Khushi was so happy to be kidnapped by her Rakshas, Thanks for the PM xx

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tanurocks

@tanurocks

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

khushi's mail is heart touching..poor girl

arnav is jealous of him self .😆

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Love love love love loveddd it <3 :D

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Nupur

@nupsiii

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#425

OMG! I dont even know if u would be reading this or not..maybe this ll geet losst btw these 100 comments..but all i wanna tell u is..thnku thnku.. I cried while i read the update..i swear i did.. And its jus yest..that i was talkin orr rather consoling her..cause she doesnt hv a dad..
Babe i feell u r the bestt writer ..i really mean this..this was the best update..i dont know how can i tell u how much i loved it..
The way u jot down the feelings is amazing.. Specially the b'day ones..ii always wanted that.. Never been successfull.. Thnku for giving me such abeautiful story bye :)

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#426

loved it

if u hold on to ur pain it will destroy u

she is indeed v brave

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vaishnavi

@vaishuu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#427

I almost cry reading khushi letter.so touching.
But I'm glad that arnav come to her and also make her dream come true.[B][/B] 😭 😊

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fan09

@fan09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

read this part twice because of khushi's mail...
it was so heart-touching... my eyes were filled with tears...😭
you described khushi's emotions and feelings so perfectly...👏