ARSHI FF: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#4 Ch10 Pg120 20/02 EXT

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kaajal_kj

@kaajal_kj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

nice update..
oh poor soul khushi she thot Arnav vl miss her as she did but...
oh ghosh i hated arnav fr doing IT so roughly n nt givng her time... he vl be so in pain aftr he vl come to knw truth...
n omg hw caring akash is...hats off...

awesome APPY...!

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

Khushi has to bear so much from everyone..
Naive girl, hopefully now learning everything from Akash he'll right his wrong

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clarissajohn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

BB arnav and Poor poor khushi

thanks akash at ealst now arnav knew

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dershika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Liked it want next update soon

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anya_maheshwari

@anya_maheshwari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Poor darling! I really feel so much pain for the poor tiny soul...this was so not done arnu i really hated it wen u did that now...am confused appy? She was a virgin right? Dint she bleed? Why? How? Arnu wud hv known otherwise nd that cannt happen so soon...i know...but how could she not bleed? Anywayz i really hated it wen he did not care about her after myths...that is all a girl wants...to be cuddled to sleep by a husband at such times,...m so sad reading it...poor girl...arnu had a tinge of posessiveness fr khushi at the last,...be it for the raizada tag but thats a positive sign...nd the way he talked to akash was lovely

Talking about writing...its really well written appy! Effort is evident nd very well worth it...i simply love each nd every line...nd the trailer made me cry nd lose it all...muwah keep up wid it...nd pleaz a lil early update...nd thnx fr pm...i was wondering everyday...wen it wud come...finally...aftr a long wait...but it was worth the wait dear