ARSHI FF: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#4 Ch10 Pg120 20/02 EXT

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ARS24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Wow!!!
Read it!
Thanks for pm appy!!!? 😃

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sarahsaphire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Great story. I do want Kushi to grow to be a very strong personality as the story progresses. I do want Arnav to regret big time for what he is doing to KUshi.

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

the extended part.. was awesome.. so arnav feels tiny miny something for kushi...

and let see what arnav will do about the two ladies...

looking forward to the next part

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saba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

I am very big fan of your writing Mashallah you write very well
All your stories are so interesting ,different and very well written
I really enjoy reading your stories I never like to read before but after reading your stories I just want to read more and more God bless you and keep it up your Awesome ,Amazing and mind blowing work 👍🏼
about part 9 ]I hate Arnav in this part he took her virginity without any consent ,emotions or care how can he do this to poor khushi she's so naive and innocent 😭 she was in so much pain poor girl hate u Arnav 😡 how can u do this to your poor wife 😭
I was thinking that Arnav will notice blood around khushi and will feel very bad and get a shock to know that she was a virgin but he did not notice that he was so harsh on her poor khushi I really fell bad for her 😭 I want Arnav to know that she was a virgin that my request to please 😒Arnav is heartless monster he take his frustration of GG on poor khushi 😭 at time he;s the most caring person in the whole world and some time he's a heartless monster I just Hope he finds out about her innocence soon and love her as Arnav the caring person not as ASR the monster 😡 Trailer was just awesome and very emotional 😭
she is going to witness the truth😭 It's so sad that she is going to suffer more now poor khushi 😭 khushi will become pregnant soon now that they consummated if she gets pregnant he will start loving her when Arnav kiss on baby bump that scene was so beautiful superb update and amazing trailer 👏 continue soon please and thank u for pm me 🤗
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Edited by ASR6262 - 12 years ago

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simran

@Laters_Baby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Appy di update wow
bt an amzng update m cnfussd wd arnvs behaviour hw cud he mu hr innocence poor khushi
hr all d dreams hv crashd i pity hr
glad aksh told hw thy behvd wd khushi
thnx 4 pm