Savage Awakening - A KriYaansh SS [Chp 15 on 99] - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roxxy47


Ya i think i lost my 'Not-So-good-Touch' of commenting on your work 😒...
N about your mood being off , if i'm the reason So really Sorry , i mean it.

Chatt se jhapar padega ek..
zyada nautanki ki toh... and han u can never be d reason of my "Mood Off"...!!
and i mean it..!! I just miss you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kitni der aur??

main zara lunch karke aati hun
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Chapter 2 : SecRet ReVealed
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"Can i have your number??" he said .. What!? he asked for my number!? swayam shekhawat did that? OMG!!!! i can't believe it..!!
"sure. 98*******" she said "Good night, see you tommorow" and she turned away. he could see her go, but he just didn't have enough courage to call her name again. and tell her what he really wanted. but he had to.. other wise he won't be sleeping for d rest of d night..

"Can i.. Can i kiss you good night sharon?" he asked

She froze. has he gone insane? her eyes widened , he don't even know her, and he wants to kiss her good night!!?? Oh god, what was she supposed to do? few minutes back, this was the only thing which she wanted to happen, but now... "kiss?" she said to herself but it was enough loud for him to listen "Ahan" came a response "Maybe.. Maybe when i.. I get to know you better" she said the lump in her throat getting more bigger by each passing moment.. she could tell he was disappointed, but she can't let anyone just kiss her. not even if it was swayam...
"alright, good night sharon, sleep tight" he said and left.. she closed her eyes for a minute and den popped dem open, she started walking after a second quite aware of what happened 2 minutes back "Can i kiss you goodnight sharon?" words echoed inside her.. when suddenly She realised something on her cheek, as soft as cotton, she tilted her head to see what was exactly going on with her? and to her suprise it was swayam his eyes closed and his lips pressed on her cheek she wanted to shout but the innocence of the guy didn't let that happen "I'm the kind of man, who gets what he wants, sharon. Good Night Shar, dream about me" he wished her. and left she turned to see weather he really went or not, if not what was he going to do? but no, he went turning once and looking at her. and sharon was left there blushing..
swayams shar-



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"how come you want to know everything 'bout me, and tell nothing about your self?" she yelled
"woah woman, calm down.. i generally asked" he said
"woman? For your information mr. singhania i'm a girl, not a woman yet. you should keep that in that empty brain of yours!" she shouted yet again
"Whatever that means? and han what is it that you dont know about me?" he said
"The day before yesterday, you told me that u weren't a human. so basically what are you? i've been dying to..." before she could complete her cell rang "excuse me" she said
"Take your time" he said she stood up seeing it was sharon's call, she started walking soon, as she had a habit of walking while talking on the phone.. it took more time dan she planned it would, she was busy arguing about dose loud bands were lame. and he was getting bored, he didn't plan it to go like this, he planned it in a diffrent way.. but she looked so damn sexy! while walking her long legs peered out of her frock which she was wearing and her hair always bunched up in a tight pony tail, were braided today, he wondered how she would look on bed seducing him? he wondered how her hairs would look open as he never saw her hair down either they were in a pony or they were braided and sometimes for a change, she would even let her pony rest on her back. Geez. when was the last time he'd noticed any woman's.. correction.. girls legs, hairstyle and dress..? he couldn't remember, his intrest in girls has been vanished a few years ago, when he was tired of Bimbo's requesting to date him..
great lust in his green eyes flowed, as her beautiful body charmed him..!! he couldn't take it any longer. he escaped from the nearest exit, not disturbing her at all.
She was still on her phone! now dese girls were talking about any new brand, he knew how to get her attention back. He switched off d lights and she yelled a big yell! it seemed as if he'll go deaf right at the moment. he lighted d candle, and placed it round her, so that he could see her "Not bad!" he said, "I'll Talk to you later sharon" she said, quiet un aware of what he was doing. "what?" she asked "Turn" he said she turned she was standing right infront of d mirror, she saw herself in d candle light.. what was he trying to say that she looked pretty? exactly what? he stepped inside d circle of candles which he made a few seconds earlier, a thrill ran through her spine. what would be his next move? what will he do? will he mibehave? will he harass her? what what what? leaving d 'whats' behind she asked "What are you doing?" she said but he told her to stay quiet by putting a finger on her lips!, "Shh, turn" he said she did as told she turned back to d mirror. quiete un aware of what he was going to do next.. "What do you want to know about me?" he asked "Everything" she said gulping "Everything? like what?" he asked "uhh,, What are you? i mean if not a human what are you exactly?" she asked thinking about weather she asked the right question or not. "I'm a..." he said a little nervous "you are?" she asked "I'm a Lycan." he said "A lycan?" she asked quiet confused.. "Yes, a lycan. lycans are wolf's" he said his voice a little sad, "You mean Ware wolf??" her eyes lit up, he chuckled "No, lycans and ware wolf's are two completely different creatures, they have no comparison" he concluded. she stepped out of the candle circle made by him, and switched on the lights, "Like what? what difference?" she asked as she saw few tears in his eyes she rushed to him "My god! Mr Flirt's having tears in eyes? how come?" she asked wiping the tears off his eyes, and to her suprise he wiped the water from her hands hurriedly, "What happened?" she asked "I'll show you" he said he took one drop of tear from his own eye and let it soothe on his thumb, it shined for a few seconds "See?" he said "Its its beautiful" she lifted her hand to touch the beautiful drop of water "No, not that. Look it'll soon burn my hand a drop. it will" he said kriya continued looking at his thumb the little drop of tear started dissolving in his hand, she gasped. and soon it started burning his hand badly "Oh My" but because it was just a drop it didnt burn it too badly it was as if he got a little bruise from the gas stove. "You see, we're different creatures. my tear burns" he said "But you are not like any ware wolf we see on TV and movies, your eyes colour didn't change like edward's" she said the innocence in her voice made him laugh "Television shows make us completely different from what we really are, and Ware wolf's, Vampire's and Lycans cannot be Compared, these are all different creatures" he said "Like How?" she asked but soon realised they were standing too close because the circle made by him was small and they had to fit in together they were standing much too close, "Can we sit and talk please?" she asked "Why not?" he said moving towards the bed he said "Lycans are more of a wolf, they can shift appereamce whenever they wish. Night or Day" he said, kriya gasped again he bit back a chuckle seeing her reaction "A ware Wolf Transforms randomly on full moons. We're more mascular than any typical ware wolf, Lycans are also smarter than ware wolf's" he said kriya was shocked after hearing such facts, "Can you tell me more?" she said "why not?, Lycans represent More of a walking man wolf with a man's posture, but Werewolves resemble a man with a wolf-man like posture and a wolfs' attitude and appearance, People don't accept us. they think we're different, thats why we keep it a secret from people" he said, kriya suddenly noticed the burn on his hand "Oops! i'm sorry, i'll get a anti septic" she ran towards her wardrobe, Getiing some dettol and cotton, she started applying it "Did it hurt?" she said "Not much" he smiled "Not much? you burned your hand, it didnt hurt even??" she said "nope!" he grinned "I've seen in movie, that vampires drink human blood, edward too drank. do you?" she asked "We eat human flesh." he said she stood her face up from what she was doing "Will you eat me even?" she asked "No, we don't eat loved ones" he said "I think i'll go now, it's kinda late. your friend will be coming anytime now" he said and as he was about to leave "Good Night Rey" she said "Good Night, so what will you dream about tonight kriya ghai?" he asked.. and left giving her a final look..


Precap-Many shocks for KriYaansh and SwaRon as well...!

Hope this part was okay?
were you guys bored of reading it? i guess the length was too much..
Please review my work..
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Thanks to Kinjal Di..!! (My Halwai..)
I hoep to see many comments when i visit next time..
Bye peeps! do review

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Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
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unres

me 1st to comment

amazing update👏

both swaron and kriyaansh parts were awesomeee😃

looovvveeeddd ittt😃

waiting for d nxt part😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
amazing update...
swaron part was so cute n kriyaansh part superb...
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
awesome..loved kr and ss part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
wow...awesum
lvd it rashu di
and boring naaa...bilkul bi ni tha..i toh like readng thse types of stuff ...
Lvd swaron part too...
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Woww. . . .
Awsome update. . . . .
Lovd the swaron and kriyaansh part. . . .
Our hero rey is a lycan . . . . .
OMG . . . . . .
So,swayum would be a lycan too. . .r8? . .
I lovd the blushng pic of sharon. . .
Pls nxt time kriya ka bhi daalna. . .
Lovly update. . . . .
Update the nxt part realy soon. . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Wow Lycans! :D That 's pretty amazing and interesting .. Continue soon and update a bit longer part next time please! Thanks for the PM ! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
loved it...

but i have a question kriyansh the kahan???

loved the update...

fell in love with rey's mind...😆

awesome update..

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