Savage Awakening - A KriYaansh SS [Chp 15 on 99] - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashi_d3


Matlab, sab mujhe marte hi raho..

And kinjal Di, will update soon, tomorrow maybe..

U deserve a little bit of pitai 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashi_d3



Matlab, sab mujhe marte hi raho..

And kinjal Di, will update soon, tomorrow maybe..

haha
ab kabhi bhi kar...mera kaam toh hogaya
*dancing...*
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry rishu...

mene last k 2-3 chapters nhi pade hain...

will comment after reading them...

i know m super duper late...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
loved dis concept sooo much...
i thnk i missd many updates...
read all in go...
nyc one...
waiting for kriya's reaction...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 6:So, they met again?
Banner Credit- Kinjal Di..

She lifted her head up from the novel she was engrossed in, she somehow kept the novel beside and walked to welcome the visitor, she gave a final glance to the house she was living in, well, it wasn't fancy like other usual houses but it was sombre and simple, she didn't like to put up much decoration she liked to keep it just the way it was, the little hairs on the back of her neck prickled and somehow she just knew. She knew something terribly wrong was going on with her brother Anish, she could understand it because he didn't return the house since last night, she didn't pay much attention or filed a report because such kind of behaviour by her brother was common now, he used to return late night, or didn't return at all! Then he would show up the next morning and will go to the bed instead of giving her any kind of explanation part, she remembered those umpteen sleepless nights she'd went through laying on her bed while all kinds of bad things made way into her mind in a speed that even she was surprised of, but what could she possibly do? He was growing up and he needed space now, she understood it. She somehow walked towards the door, sure that the visitor was no one else than Anish, the bell ringed twice and she was sure to scold him today, after all he was out since last night, and he didn't even cared to inform her. She opened the door in a hurry that the door almost hit her face, and what she saw next was no doubt surprising, it really was, it was REY!! It was him. It was him, the first thing that entered her mind was to embrace him tightly in her arms, and never ever ever let him go! But then, how could she? After all that had happened, his rejecting her, in that span of 3 years in college he never cared to say hi, never cared to even look at her, he had hurted her in more than one ways. . and she could never forgive him for that. NEVER. He was still the same, his tight muscular physique, the large muscles, his stylishly chopped hair, she somehow wanted to run her hands through them, and of course his lycanish face, the little twinkle of innocence in his eyes, and his sexy beard, wait, did she just referred him sexy? Each of his gently carved features forced her to love him, more and more, and after all these years no matter how much he had hurted her she still found the same innocence, same love and affection in his eyes. It was all past, she reminded herself and forced herself to hate him, but how could she? When his bottle green eyes were fixed on her, the way he stared, the way his mouth curved the little lust she saw in her eyes how could she hate them? Especially when she knew she loved him..


'hey' he hushed while in reality leaving all the formal hi, hellos, he just wanted to hold her in his strong arms tightly and tell her how much he needed her, seeing her after all these years he realized how much he missed her, how much he needed her in his beasty life, a life which had no directions and no meaning actually. He couldn't help but stare at her, the frilly summer dress that was tied tightly emphasised the slimmest waist he'd ever saw! And her Barbie-like figure, the curvaceous figure which woke up the beast inside him every time he saw her, her eyes which were like a one-year-old child carried the far way look and fear and ofcourse the sweetest face he'd ever seen, the pink lips which thrilled him and her cute little nose which he wanted to peck silently, to his surprise she was still the same she was still as simple as she was all those years back, the loose pony tail that tied her dark mid night hair rested on her shoulder and she was still as amazing as she was all those years back, her ravishing beauty made him realize that time didn't move for both of them as he still wished to hold her tightly and kiss her, which he wanted to do all those years back, when she stole his seat, and when she argued him continuosly, the silence was louder than the words, the silence spoke much about what the two bodies were feeling so far from each other yet so close..

'hey yourself, I'm more interested in knowing what brought you here?' she said in a abrupt tone.
'I wanted..' he was interrupted
'Least interested' she snapped
'to talk about..' he was interrupted again
'Least bothered' she snapped not making an eye contact.
It was enough to make him angry, he clenched his fists, as he could not do anything, he just wanted to shut her and make her listen to him.
'About you brother' he finally finished she looked shocked, strained and she went pale, it was almost as though she would faint another second, until she opened her mouth to speak something.
'You.. You'd better come inside' she uttered and went in inviting him inside her house.

He saw the pictures she had put up in her corridor, many were from college, with her best friend (he couldn't remember the name) some were with Swayam, some were from her school, some were with her brother, but the one that caught his attention was the one in which they were both together, he was grinning and his palm was rested on her shoulder, while she was smiling, she still had her hairs tied, and was looking a bit furious, he somehow managed to get that picture frame in his hand and look at their little immature faces, she was as usual looking stunning, the little hairs fell on her forehead and she was smiling, he noticed how happy he looked in the little piece of memory she kept, suddenly something forced him to throw those thoughts away as she snatched the picture from his hand, 'It's mine' she said 'and it's not a thing you can play with' she said in a rude tone. And left with the frame, he sat down on her sofa, maybe that's what you're supposed to do, right? He looked out for her, but she was no where seen, she finally showed up with a glass of water in her hand, the early summers were sprawling to which people here called spring season. He took the water careful not to splash it over and thanked her for the gesture.
'Could you please make it fast, I don't have all day' she said
'Anish, was roaming in the Lycan valley last night with his girlfriend' rey said
'what? But, I already told him not to go there' she said abrupt manner
'I don't know the whole tale why he was there and so, but, I do know that he was there around 11:30 with a girl who was rarely dressed in her short attires, and the worst part is..' he was interrupted as usual.
'What? What worse part?' she asked as he noticed the concern and fear in her shaking voice.
'They.. They got him, they somehow spared the girl, but, the Lycans got him, he was, um, err, bitten by a Lycan, but the bright side of the story is..' before he could say something she started crying, the situation was getting worsened. He tried to console her but she won't listen.

'What Bright side?? He's bitten, you know what that means better than me right? Then how can you say that there still is a bright side in the whole scene?' she yelled while he tried to wipe her large tears she snapped 'Don't touch me you beast!' and continued crying.

'Listen to me once' he almost shouted and she lifted her face, 'They tried to eat him, but, he was saved, he was saved, yes, he's alive, he has high fate that he's safe now' he said cupping her beautiful face. It somehow hurted him to see his beloved crying but what could he do??
'Take me to him, please. Take me to him' she begged 'That's what I'm here for, come' he nodded and took her with him, while she washed her face and said 'I'm sorry to call you beast, I didn't mean it' she said and sat into hiscar while he smiled to himself.

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Okeh, so guys, am updating via cell phone-- that too my dads, so kindly understand, thats a excuse for short length.

Well, this part dint have Swaron at all! im really sorry about it..

i promise next parts will have SS too.. pakka vala promise.. i wrote it in a haste so..

Anyways, hope u like it.

Leave ur valueable comments..

Love you guys!

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
*Res*
*Unres*

See i'm here without a PM 😎
Stalking ka kamaal 😛..

"Anish" - Ek new character ki entery karwai N uski jaan khatre mein bhi daal di , kya baat hai 😉...
*Sigh* Inne salon bad KR mile...
Aur inne time bad bhi Kria couldn't help herself N notice Rey's 'Sexy' (As she stated) figure , inspite the fact that she Hates him OR maybe tries to 😉...
N same goes for Rey , pura ka pura analayzing..
Hmm..So Kria's brother brought Rey to her...
Her once upon a time Locer is a Lycon N now her bro is bitten by her , what else does she needs in her life ...
Well ek taraf acha he hai , KR met after such a long time...

Interesting story hai 😃...
Luv U Take Care 🤗
Now update when u get ur laptop back , awein apne Dad ke cell se update liya...
..



Edited by Roxxy47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update...
but very chutku one...
update soon...
waiting 2 read a big update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reswu
unres


awesomee part monku
hehe you already know my view on this
haina?

Ekdum mast hai
i loved rey's entry...lol it was ekdum dhasu wala🤣

so finally car me hi sahi...unhe akele time toh milega...
Yaaay

hope kria's brother is safe

So NM...kripaya ab jaldi update kardiyo samji...khabhar daar wait karwaya toh...

-bitter sweet
halwai
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing updates
loved it
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
res...

will pakka pakka pakka unrs...

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