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next update might be afetr 3 months
i wont be reagular if i get time i ll update
i m very busy in these three months
n juju sory i waited for u
this update is especially for my juju
part 8
They continued kissing until they were breathless. Jeevika was blushing n was turned into ted tomato
viren : i m sorry mene tumhe boht hurt kya
jeevika : hurt to boht kyaa but i lov u ne sab theek kar diya
this brought a huge smile in viren fCe .jeevika was soo hPpy to see him like that . She had seen bim smiling but this smile had a different feeling a different charm n a relaxation.she promised herself to keep tbis smile forever n ever .
Viren .btw aapko ghar nahi jaana
jeevika making a puppy face : iraada toh nahi hai mr towel
virwn : mr towel ki mrs boht ho gYa now no more puppy face making ok
jeevika : ok
viren told her to go but she raised her hands .viren understood n lifted her in his arms . Jeevika kept staring him n placed a soft kiss on his cheecks .viren went towards the car n made jeevika sit on the seat .like a small baby he made her wera the seat belt .jeevika was just staring him .
jeevika:i love you
viren didnt replied n was just smiling
jeevika:kharoos reply toh karo mene kuch bola
viren still remained silent n was just continously smiling .jeevika got pissed off and made an ugly face . viren was loving it . viren started driving n jeevika just kept looking out of the window .she saw an ice cream parlour n wanted to have icecream
jeevika:ab is kharoos ko kese bolo that i want ice cream me toh isse gussa hooo bhaar me jaye gussan i want ice cream and that final
jeevika screamed loudly :stopp the carrr
viren got shocked and immidiately stopped the car
viren :kya hua
jeevika witha puppy face : ice cream
viren :what nooo
jevika ;pleaseee pleaseee
viren gave up n took her to the ice cream parlour .jeevika bought an ice cream for her n started eating
viren :share nahi karaoo gi
jeevika:noo me tumse gussa hooo
viren :kyun mene kya kya
jeevika:kya kya u havnt propsed me officialy n i m gussa n i m not talking to you n one more thing i m going bye
while jeevika was going she heard someone singing
dil ka yeh kya raaz hai jaane kya kar gayi
jese andheroon mein tum chandnii bhaar gayiii
he moved towards jeevika while singing . a rose shop was near he bought a bunch of rose petals n started moving closer to jeevika.jeevika was liking it but was pretending that she is till angry
kar chaand taroon ko mashhoor itna kyun
kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tooo
he came in front of jeevika n started thrownin rose petalls on her face . a huge crowd was gathered n was seeing them
i love you hoo
i love yooo
he went on his knees .
viren : jeevika i know i am not good at expresiing my love but that is the way i am . but you ve changed me . i love yoo soo much that without you i cannot imagine my life
he extented his hand
viren :will you be my mrs towel
jeeviuka nodded as she was speechless n tears were flowing from her eyes .viren got up n kissed her eyes wiping away her tears . jeevika hugged him tightly , every was hooting n clapping . being unaware of the surrounding viren sealed his lips with her .jeevika replied passionately .everyone was in shocked n they left leaving the two love birds
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Edited by mariarauf48 - 12 years ago
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