IPKKND SS: A familiar silence ch2Pg5 CONCLUDE 27TH JAN

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: VasantiLad
I really liked this story - you capture the upset betwen the two really well - good beginning - if you carry on & build on the feelings it will turn out to be brill

aw thank you very much for reading and its nice to know you liked it. I Personaly dont think its one ive paid much attention to..please do feel free to read my previous works on ipkknd, you'll find my index on page one of this thread.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -Siaa-
I'm really happy to see one more SS from you 😃

When in anger, he loses control! And Khushi, true to her nature, first thinks of other's happiness than her own. Both are right and both are wrong! What a paradoxical situation.

Their silent speaks a lot more than their words. Their little gestures, those eyelocks, they convey a lot. And when there is trouble in paradise, it's so characteristic of Arnav to immerse himself in work.

But regardless of all this, I loved the way they miss each other..

I liked the way you've potrayed Aarav..sensible with ASRish attitude! His convo with his dad and the depth to which he understands his mother..I loved it!

Looking forward to the next part :)

Back with another one indeed, couldnt keep away for long 😉 but on a serious note this was just an random thing i wrote..not a hundred percent convinced with it myself but i didnt see any point in binning it, think i might just be to critical. Thank you very much for reading..and highlighting the elements you ejoyed..i think i like the idea of conveying feelings even without talking and i think both characters do that perfectly.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: tvserial2012
Another SS from you.
love the way you portrait the tension between them. They don't need a lot of words... their gestures...passion for each other with a mixture of possessiveness and ego...all in all they are made for each other.

thank a lot for the PM

aw thank you very much, your too kind and its nice to be back, i think the elements that you have pointed out..the silence the ego the love and the pain are all the basis of this ss and aarav of course.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: IPKlover
Wow! This is awesome!!! These two can never stop fighting and their egos always make them hide their feelings. I hope one of them takes an initiative and ends this stupid silent treatment. Please post the second part soon!!! 😃

haha.. you know im one of those people that cant stand awkward silence, depending on who the person is im very quick to forgive and forget not the same for these two. Ive not actually written the last part yet so im not sure how its going to yet😕😆 wish me luck. - thank you for coming bk to read another on of my ss's.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: aanchu19
I'm speechless😆

what to say...these two...

nice description you put here about their feelings...and little cupid aarav😳

eager to see khushi's reaction now

please update soon next chapter

😊

I think Aarav is probably the most sensible, hes actually become a really important
little character, as for khushi you'll have to wait and see how she reacts.
Will be back soon with the next installment, thanks for coming bk to read another
one of my ss's.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shanon
Wow another ff from you,that's nice.

interesting start.
They both good in hiding their feelings. And at the same time both have egoistic.

Loved arav here he is the real cupid b/n them.

Waiting for the next update.

Thank you very much for reading and yes aarav plays quite an part here..will be back
with an update asap.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: casker
lovely ss

Thank you very much for reading and commenting..glad you liked it.

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Raisin
Beautiful!

Thank you very much please feel free to raid my index for other stuff on ippknd..would be a pleasure to have you reading.

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..Jyoti..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

that was awesome..
plz update soon..

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jagrutid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Jyoti_1991
that was awesome..
plz update soon..

aw thank you very much reading and providing your feedback, nice to know you liked it..will try to update soon please feel free to raid my index for my previous works on ipkknd in the mean time.

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