SwaRon SS:Jodi Maker VS Dil Breaker [Completed] - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 6, 7, and 8 super cute. Finally Swayam realized and wants to give it a chance. Swayam phas gaya aunties ke beech lol and got possessive about his Sharon. The dhoti wrapping part was cute and Swayam is so naughty. Loved all the updates Marium. Thnx for the PM regarding chapter 6 and 7, will try my best to comment regularly. 😊
Edited by AmRiTa_S - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update yaar
sharon blushy blushy after he want to give one chance to their relationship

aunties teasing swayam nd sharon observing him
his mom also observe dis
sharon went in to his room nd he want sharon to wrapped dhoti

After wrapping dhoti swayam take sharon infront of mirror
they both thought they look perfect with each other nd want to be with each others presence

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweet update :-) loved how Swayam's aunts were teasing him and also how the last SwaRon scene :p in short all of it
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for me Done M
This very Cute UPdate
anty seen AWOsm 😆😆😆😆😆
poor swayam 🤣
n cute mirror seen love It😃
update soon
Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow finally some encouraging words for sharon to actually trust him
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWHHH, That was such a sweet and cute update !! Loved the part where Swayam held Sharon from the back and said that they look perfect together !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!
Poor swayam..he was so helpless wid his aunties..
Swaron's mirror scene was cute...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww!!! That was such a cute updaTe!!!
Hungry for more! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Awiee Aunties were teasing Swayam cho sweet & Swayam is so possessive about Sharon loved it. always like to read possessive Swayam😳.
Swayam's mother is getting some hint about the cooking kichadi between Swaron😆
That Dhotti tieing part was awesome & beautifully written.
Now Swayam seems to be clear about his feeling good👍🏼
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Marium-

Holla, look i updated tonight as i promised!
Mind it guys, i NEVER break my promises and hate when someone do so! 😳
I hope the length is a bit satisfying!? 🤔


Part 8

Sharon smiled for a long time and making her kind to be confident and not to blush more in front of him; walked back to the house to check on some work.

Sharon walked to front garden only to find Swayam sitting with old aunties and her mom, cracking jokes for them. He looked at her but in instant she removed her gaze from him and started her work like checking out that every decoration was going perfectly and tasted some sweets too. She could feel his gaze all the time on her; she got nervous and started spilling things here and there.

Some aunties sitting with Swayam, noticed him looking at Sharon continuously and started teasing him.

A 1 : Umm, So Swayam; isn't she gorgeous? And she is unmarried too! She teased him.

Swayam looked at her and smiled nervously making awe so adorable cute faces.

Sw: Who aunty? I was looking at you, you know. He said trying to handle those aunties.

Sharon heard those aunties teasing him and chuckled looking at his face; Swayam saw her reaction and gave him a "Help-me" glary look.

A 2: Oh, really now! So, you wasn't looking at her right! Good, actually I like her for my son! She said pretending.

Sw: What? She with your son? Now ways! He blurt out.

Sharon looked at him from side way and smiled on his cuteness.

Sharon thinking to her: I never knew a Dil Breaker can be possessive or cute; it all seems like a dream!

A 2: Why my boy? My son is quiet handsome! I mean if you don't like her then.. She cut off between by Swayam.

Sw: No, then! No, not at all! He said and left from the garden to his room.

Sharon was blushing lightly but hard enough to notice by Swayam's mother as she was witnessing this scenario between her sisters and Swayam.

Her mom smiled and walked toward Sharon, pretending.

M: Sharon, can you please do me a favor as I am quite busy here. She said making tired faces.

Sh: Yeah. Sure aunty, say? She said and looked at her.

M: Actually, give these clothes to Swayam. He must be in his room waiting for the dress. She quickly handed her the clothes and left from there before she can get any time to speak.

Sh: Aunty, aunty wait! She tried to stop her but the music was enough loud, so it didn't help Sharon; but sure did to Swayam's mother.

Sharon ordered some girl out there to take care of everything meanwhile she will be back in some minutes.

Sharon walked up till his room and knocked it but no one opened or answered back. She knocked twice, trice but again no answer; finally she turned the knob and found it unlocked. With thinking for once she entered in his room but found nobody there.

Sh: Aunty said he must be in his room, Where is he? She said lightly to herself.

Sharon thought he isn't in here and turned to leave the room but before she could turn the knob.

Sw: So going without giving me my clothes? He said standing there with towel wrapped around his lower body.

Sharon turned at his voice and looking him like this, her voice chock in her throat badly.

Sh: I called you but got no answer so I thought you are not in room. She said.

Sw: Well, I am! And quiet fresh too. He said spreading hi arms in air making huge muscles contour on them.

Sh: I am going! She said while placing his clothes on his bed.

Swayam pick his clothes and blurted.

Sw: Well, a wedding planner must know how to wrap a Dhoti? He asked naughtily.

Sharon turned to him and gave him smiley confused expression.

Sh: What? She asked.

Sw: Dhoti. He said while forwarding the clothes to her.

Sh: I will send someone for you? She asked checking out if he was sure to get help from herself only.

Swayam grinned and came quiet close to her, placed his wrapped dhoti in her hand.

Sw: I am sure you will do this great too. He said and was about to undo his towel when Sharon got hold of his hand.

Sh: What are you doing? She asked in a 100% shocked state.

Sw: Umm, how am I supposed to wear dhoti on towel? He asked her.

Sh: Than I am not helping you! She said.

Sw: Ok, now I get it! Hey I am wearing boxers in it! He said and chuckled at her expression.

Sh: Oh, I thought.. She said but stopped in mid ways.

Sw: You though what? He asked coming dangerously close to her.

Sh: Nothing! She said with attitude and asked him to untie his towel for her.

Sw: Wild cat will always be wild cat! He said and undid his towel.

Before going further in private help Sharon turned and locked the door.

Sw: Sharon I am not that kind of a guy! He said hiding his naked chest with his arms in a girly manner.

Sh: Do you want help or not? She said glaring at him.

Swayam smiled with a cute nod and Sharon started her work. First she was little hesitant than got ok with it. He was still shirtless and she was making pleats to insert in his dhoti which was almost ready by now.

Before inserting pleats Sharon took a glance of Swayam who had his hands on his hips and smiling at her. She looked back at his tummy side and inserted her fingers holding pleats in his dhoti; her fingers were rubbing on his tummy and navel side making both of them crazy.

She finally did with the dhoti, when she was about to pull her hands off from him; he grabbed his both hands on placed them on his naked and chest rubbing them from his neck to his tummy. Sharon gasped at the mere touch she felt. She wanted to pull off her hands before she completely loose herself.

Sharon freed herself and turned but instead Swayam pulled her back placing his palm on his bare belly and she clashed into him.

He rest her hairs on other side of shoulder and rest his chin on her shoulder, he walked to the mirror with her. She looked at him in confusion; but he just smiled and hugged her from behind placing both of his hands on her tummy.

Sh: What are you doing Swayam? She asked smiling.

Sw: Umm, nothing just admiring my girlfriend. Can't I? He asked to her.

Sh: You can but why are we in front of mirror? She asked still smiling at his tactics.

Sw: Look into mirror Sharon! He said and Sharon obeyed him.

Sh: Now? She asked.

Sw: We look perfect. He said with a huge smile and his statement made her blush crimson red.

Sh: I guess we do! She said and smiled.

Sw: I know about your guess, trust me very soon we will. He said and kissed on her cheek.

Sharon smiled more as she was feeling so happy to get what she wished for, HIM.

Sh: Now leave me; everyone must be waiting for the wedding planner. She said and looked at him from mirror.

Sw: No! He said and nuzzled in her hairs.

Sharon's cheeks coated with a deep pink color.

Sh: Please Swayam. She said pleading.

Swayam looked at her flushed cheeks from mirror and smiled.

Sw: Ok, right now I am letting you go but we will meet before Nita get married. Ok? He asked.

Sh: Ok, mister! Now I am going. She said and quickly ran out of the room.

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