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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

"You hurt me more than I deserve, how could you be so cruel? I love you more than you deserve, why am I such a fool?"

This line is not by me 😆(no prizes in guessing that though i love this quote !)

Some how to me this is what Khushi is feeling right now.

To begin with an amazingly whimsical make out session! ☺️

And upar se Arnav dear and his blatant thoughts which he never backs out in expressing himself , he is the quintessential bad boy we all love isn't it !😃

Finally we got an idea of just how our Bad Boy has tweeked "Red"s clothes !!!😎

Now coming to "nikunja" and khushi's outburst related to that was apt and undeniably that is a sore topic for Khushi and touches a raw nerve , like i said earlier as well when she did agree to letting go of nikunja in her heart of hearts she never actually thought she would part with it.

I want to know who is the buyer !!! 😉

ps: Did i just see my name up there in your note , omg " fainted " now back on feet hence delay in un res !!🤗

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

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Both the pics are nice! U edited them yourself? Vow!👏

Thanks for the dedication!😊 So sweet of u! 😊

Yeah now I know where to turn to if I have complaints about this story! 😆Hmmm'

Trust Khushi to start giggling when they are passionately making out!

Khushi teased Arnav!? She is ASR's woman in its true essence!😆

I liked the way you made Arnav peek a glance in Khushi Kumari Gupta's small world! He wishes he was here to see Khushi's growing up times and be a part of it. This shows how much he is attached to her and wants to know everything about her childhood, teenage and now.

So the thought that he wants to know her more and be with her, has somewhere entered his mind! I hope he acts on this thought.😉

Arnav is sensitive enough to let her know that he is leaving! And Khushi falls in love with him all over again! Wonderful part there! And all those feelings crossed his, mind too'awww!😊

3 days!? 72 hours!? Nooo' ASR se ye bardash kaise hoga? 😆

Yes! Why did Su change all of Khushi's outfits (only)?😆 Good question!😆

Khushi and her family is being very considerate and thinking about not hurting Anjali in any way. Why should Anjali be so insensitive and be excited about selling off Nikunja? Can't she see that it's a place which holds numerous memories for the Guptas?

Precap: A fight in all probability. Khushi is upset though she has made up her mind to sell her house. What explanation Arnav will offer now for not letting her know about the potential buyers?

Edited by Nexus_13 - 12 years ago

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Arnav is totally smitten by Khushi.I loved the scene where he came to inform her of his departure.Khushi is bound to feel betrayed by Arnav's decision to not inform her himself of the selling of Nikunja.The updates are getting better and better as the focus is totally on Arnav and Khushi.I wonder what will happen when their family comes to know about it.It will be better if Arnav and Khushi themselves inform them of it rather than through somebody else or them being caught red handed.Rohan will certainly feel betrayed by Arnav if it becomes a scandal.

Edited by harsha577 - 12 years ago

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

another brilliant chapter - how can a story get better update by update - you have really achieved a mean feat here. So looking forward as to how this is all going to pan out between ARSHI !!

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Shariqa_here

@Shariqa_here

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Hey Farah - loved your update! You always inspire me with your unique style of writing. I'm loving the flow of the story and honestly your writing is as good as watching a movie..I really love your knack for details as well. The explanation on Nikunja in the last chapter was for me wasn't it? Thanks..but seriously please don't sell off Nikunja. It seems such an integral part and parcel that it would be like something big is lost unless there is a chance of bringing it back towards the end. 😛
Loved Arnav Khushi's movie mishap...as in their nakhras and their getting caught red-handed😆

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

I just loved the part wen he came to tell her he's hping for a meeting and the longing with which they were talking like they've been in love forever...
Great update!
And then the precap...arnav khushi will always remain arnav khushi lol !!!! 😉

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Read last 3 parts in one go - wonderfully written.

I am intrigued with where you will take the story & the characterisations. Khushi's willingness to enter into a purely physical relationship with Arnav is being driven by her reaction to discovering who she is. What she has believed in all these years, what her family believes in is very different & u can't change that overnight. So when the dust settles and she realises what she has committed herself to, will she really be able to go through with it?

Also while they're both rushing headlong into a no strings attached physical relationship, they've forgotten their families are now connected thru marriage - two children who have chosen to solemnise their relationships via marriage. How will their families react when they find out the nature of their liasion? What would be their reaction & how would khushi handle that? Arnav's family is used to his physical relationship & sadly society allows men their lil flings! How would khushi deal with her family's dissapointmwnt? Or would the knowledge of their liaison become public enough for khushi to face more heartbreak from a society that already views her as tainted?

Lots of interesting possibilities, looking forward to read the other chapters!

Edited by DMGFan-2b-not2b - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Had been waiting for this update. I wait every other day at 10.00a.m. For your update. Loved it of course. Loved the way he gave her the reason for leaving early and how she was being all clingy and wanted to see him. Won't he come and look her up as she hurt herself? Hope they don't fight again. I have a feeling that Arnav has bought Nikunj for her. Just a feeling. Waiting for thursday morning 10.00a.m.

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Hint hint, Arnav hates it when he cant t0uch her whenever he wants. Y0u have a perfect s0luti0n f0r that, d0nt y0u? Please teach him just that!! And he is surely in huge tr0uble and she w0nt surely be spared t00

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

thank you Farah for mentioning me :)

and for letting us know that we dont have to panic...please keep up your promise now...dont ever stop writing this...

and for the update:
i want to write a paragraph praising every single para of this update Farah...so perfectly written...i dont need Barun to enact this anymore...because i have visualised it to an extent where your description is good enough a substitute for the real acting by Barun...not that i would say no to Barun enacting this Arnav of yours :) cant we atleast see your story on teri meri love stories or the likes? for 2.5 hours? this is so good!!!

the way you have explained virgin Kushi's reaction to a man touching her breasts and Arnav's reaction to Kushi mentioning her breasts in the middle of a furious convesation...you truly are amazing...

and the part about the real deal!!! omg i was ROFL at that...

another fight...hey bring it on...its always good to see my fav couple angry and aroused at the same time!!!!

Edited by asr2kkg - 12 years ago