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shaan_khanak

@shaan_khanak

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Write more. The twist was great. I thought its divorce and I was like omg!! But then realised they were thinking of going overseas

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice OS...! i first thought divorce but then its was visa papers...in show we would have our VirMan will play cupid as per articles...:) Thnks for the PM!

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HayatM

@HayatM

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

thank you for the pm!:)

When I read the title I was already nervous to read! hahah

superb os! NICE TWIST !

do write more os:)

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

superbbb!!!!!! i seriouslyy thut she went to sign divorce papers...butt awesomeee updateee... loved ittt...do continuee PM me when u start any new story... thnkuuu

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NiraliVirika

@NiraliVirika

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Man you scared the hell out of me!

I thought you were gonna get Virika divorced..

But obviously Viren would NEVER do that

And the OS was beyond amazing!

I really loved it..

Do write more..

Thanks for the PM

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

juju dear it was freaking awesome totally👏👏

i loved it😊

brilliant job dear👍🏼

thanx for the pm...😊

and ya i liked the last bit😳😉

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Marzii

@Marzii

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

aweee such a brilliant OS

i thought viren wanted jeevs to sign the divorce papers lol

"A faint amile appeared on her pale face. Finally they won't have to move away from the family." I actually had a smile too :)

thanks for the pm dear..

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Sarah Kelly

@arjunadisidpari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Absolutely Lovely :)

I loveeed the way you expressed Jeevika's emotions...

When I was reading the beginning part that's where I had a doubt that it wouldn't be a divorce karke bcuz u hadn't mentioned what papers were there :)

I loveeed the idea of this :)

I was more happy because it is the first thing im reading on this forum that is connected with the current track :)

Lovely yaar :)

Please Write many more :*

P.S: Thank God You Didn't Get Virika Divorced! :D

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

DAMN AWESOME yaar

for a sec i thought viren made jeevika sign the divorce papers, its damn fabulous how the story took a sudden turn by revealing the paper to b visa papers...

loved it

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

nearly had a heart attack awesome as always

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