You Belong With Me... ( kr ss) cp 4 pg 27 - Page 4

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hey guys...thanks 4 such a loving response...hope u lyk dis story...its personally vry close 2 me...few of my own memories r dere in it...😛

an if anyone feels i hv copied anythin...m sorry...bt blv me..its my original...! so here goes d 1st chapter...😊
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chapter 1:

bright day..birds r chirping everywhere...ppl happily walking by...love is in d air...an an an a fuming kria...standing on d road...waiting an waiting an waiting...
" i so hate u..so so so hate u..!" kria was mumbling 2 herself...
she was standing at d foot path waiting 4 him...but dere is no sight of him...jus den sumone came walking dere...an tapped her on d shoulder...she thot it was him..an turned 2 shout..bt as soon as she turned..she stopped in d middle of her sentence...an gave a warm smile...

"chill kria...he will cum..orelse u kno him na...we wil leave..he might hv already reached skool.."
" bt swayam..he always does it...he tells he will pick me up an den we three will go walking...bt always he breaks his promise..."an stands fuming dere again..wid her hand folded across her chest...
swayam satrted laughing...
" kria...chill...chalo we will leave...he will be at skool...will his daily routine.." an winks at her...
" ya na..sit FLIRTING !" an strts walking...wid her hands on d straps of her bag..an her skool skirt..swaying here an dere...
swayam catches up wid her an both go on laughing an giggling all d way 2 skool...!

" RADCLIFF ACADEMY "

d skool every child must hv dreamt of...d best skool in d whole of maimi...
wid all sorts of activites...an ya known best...4 its dress code...!

kria an swayam enter deir skool...greeting everyone...an wid kria behind a line of boys...wanting 2 talk 2 her...aftr all..d hottie of skool she is !

" kria...kuch karo..warna ghar tak peecha karenge...! " an gives her a small smirk...
" let dem cum...who cares.." an she smirks back...
dey enter d skool...an in d corridor find a group of girls standing an talking...
" kria..i found him.." an a playfull smile forms on his face..
" so did i..!" she luks in d direction of d girls...reaches dere...pulls up her sleeves...an coughs twice...2 make everyone know to move...an den dere he is sitting an an...wht else flirting...!
" u r dead...mr.romeo...!"
he luks up an finds kria fuming...
" hey m sorry kria..i thot we will cum 2 gether...den i found rachel an u see...i jus walked wid her till skool..."
" i dnt kno anythin...dis was d limit..i aint gona talk 2 u...! she walks off frm dere...he gets up...
" juliet wait na..!" bt no..she didnt even luk back...
he turns an finds swayam standing dere...wid hands across his chest...
" y do u hurt her rey..always..??"
" listen swayam..i didnt mean 2..u know me na...she is our bestie...i wnt do anythin 2 hurt her..i kno i kno..i did 2day..bt i dnt do always...!"
swayam raises an eyebrow...
rey lifts his hand up in air surrendering..." fine..ya i do..cum wid me now...i hv 2 make her smile at any cost..be4 class strts..."
an both walk off in d direction taken by kria...

dey reach d portico an find her stading dere...wid air blowing on her face...making her silky smooth hair sway here an dere...making her luk all d more angelic...
rey goes forward...an slowly strts whispering near her ear...
" i've been lukin under rocks...breaking locks...jus tryin 2 find u...
i've been runnig lyk a maniac...right behind...5 steps behind u.."
swayam playing his guitar in d background...
kria's lips automatically form a smile..she turns an finds rey so close...dey both jus keep luking at each other..smiling...an den rey holds his ear...asking her a sorry...she giggles...an indicates swayam 2 cum close an hugs both of dem...
" i love u guys.." she tells...still hugging dem..
" same here.." both of dem tell in chorus...

dey break deir hug...
" i promise nt 2 hurt u again kria.." rey tells
" haha..lyk u do always.." an smiles luking at swayam..
" nah nah...swayam tell her na..i dnt do always.."
swayam grins..an holds kria by her shoulder..
" m on kria's side.." an both high five each other...
rey pouts...an both strt laughing luking at him...!
dey drag him an make him laugh...an walk laughing 2wards deir class..

dey reach dere...an sit at deir usual place...wid kria in between both of dem...deir maam enters d class...all wish her an sit 4 d class 2 begin..when suddenly dey hear a voice cuming frm d door...
" excuse me miss...may i cum in..?"
an heads turn in tht direction...when deir maam luks...she smiles...
" class..she is yr new mate..welcum her.."
all smile at her...bt three ppl didnt even luk up...dey were busy in deir own world...nly deir world...
" so class her name is..." an at d same tym kria spoke up...
" mam...emergency...!"
"wht happened kria...?"
" i need 2 rush out...or m gonna throw up "
"yuc..i mean...u better rush out..." an kria ran out of d class...
" so class where was i...so meet her she is yr new class mate..."
an here rey an swayam least bothered...
" dude...swayam...wht happened 2 kria..??"
" she got sick...aftr listening 2 yr lines in mrng romeo ..:P "
rey gave him a "-_- " look..." shut up "
an den deir mam " rey an swayam...i am here introducing her an u both..."
both stood up...wid deir heads down...
" u kno wht...u both need 2 get out now..."
both of dem strt..."bt mam..."
"no ifs...no buts...out..! "
an both of dem standing out of deir class...
*out side d class*
" all yr fault rey...u didnt need 2 ask anythin at tht tym.." an stares at him angrily
" my fault..?.den u shouldnt hv rpld na !"
an dey both strtd argueing...when kria reached dere...
"
god..i threw up so bad..!...all becoz of u rey..."
rey gives a puzzled look...an swayam an obvious smile...
" u didnt need 2 speak so sweetly in mrng...all yr dose romantic lines...was an over dose 4 me romeo..."
" haha i win..." strts swayam...
"bt..i mea...juliet..!...dis is nt done...dis is so nt done..." an again rey's face blows up...!
kria strts laughing an so does swayam...
" so u both out..?? ab kya karre...??"
" well rey strts talking abt u...lyk u kno wht happened 2 kria...an all..an den mam caught us..."
" aww...rey...worried abt me...??"
" rey slowly luks up..." obvio kria.."
both could see a twinkle in kria's eyes...
" u kno wht..u both out..an i cn tell mam i was at d nurse...so lets go at our secret hideout..."
all smile at each other...an slowly tip toe frm dere...
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so guys here ends d 1st chapter...i hope u guys lyked it...

next chap: hide out...! ;)

Edited by senoritashweta - 12 years ago

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